|This is a great poem. I can feel the emotions and love the imagery you use. My only suggestion would be to check your punctuation. Right now, the only punctuation you have is the period at the end of each stanza. Here is an example of what I mean:
My mistress world sang binding cords,
dull feverish tunes of possibilities,
binding the gods against my will;
now come to rest in this last ebb
in this place my grave, my home."
Other than that, your rhythm and flow are quite good. One technique I use on a poem is to read it out loud to myself and listen for natural breaks in speech - as well as noticing any instances where the flow seems unnaturally interrupted....this will help you in determining punctuation, capitalization, word flow, etc.
Keep up the wonderful writing!!!
Rhoswen (aka - bray2015)