*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Get it for
Apple iOS.
Creative fun in
the palm of your hand.
Printed from http://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/bray2015
Review Requests: ON
547 Public Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... -1- 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 ... Next
1
1
Review of Christmas 2019  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was great! I had fun solving it (even though it was a bit easy!) Keep making these!
2
2
Review of Grief  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
I could feel the pain and the heartache as I read through this. Losing someone we love is never an easy thing. I love how you embrace your grief in this. The rhythm, flow and rhyme all worked together to make this a wonderful read. Keep up the great writing.


Rhoswen
3
3
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this! It's a humorous way to look at the dilemma of a writer. I have felt this same way too many times to count. This was well written, and very easy to relate to. As writers, we always tend to be too hard on ourselves when it comes to our writing, finding a topic and deciding the genre or type. This piece highlights that very trait. Great job, keep up the great writing, and don't rule anything out....you never know what life will hand you that will make great inspiration to draw on.

Rhoswen
4
4
Review of My First Memory  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could really picture the house, and a little toddler climbing up and down the steps. As far as the yellow jacket nest - ouch! So glad you didn't get stung. This was really well-written and I enjoyed reading. You really painted a picture with your words. Great job. Keep up the wonderful writing!!

Rhoswen
5
5
Review of Midnight Trench  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an interesting read. The rhythm and flow worked really well. You painted a picture with your words. This was very well written. I could see the ice, feel the chill. The only suggestion I have is when one line continues to the next in a single thought, you don't necessarily need to capitalize the first letter of the line. Other than that, outstanding writing! Keep it up!!


Rhoswen
6
6
Review of Mary's Tale  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
What a humorous (however true) look at our current health care system....ha ha. The rhythm and flow of this were spot on. I had to laugh at the last stanza. Sometimes, as you so skillfully and humorously point out in this, the simplest of answers are the right ones. Too bad the health care system wants to complicate everything...Thank you so much for the humorous read. Keep up the wonderful writing!!!!

Rhoswen
7
7
Review of Gentle Hands  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhythm and flow of this poem were spot-on. I could feel the hurt and then feel the glimmer of hope as you once again found love in this poem. This goes to show that even after heartbreak, one can still find love, even if they aren't looking. This gives hope to those who've ever had their heart broken. Very well done. Keep up the wonderful writing!!!


Rhoswen
8
8
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Ha Ha! I loved this! I, too, hate the cold weather winter brings us! It hurts my teeth when they chatter! The rhythm and flow of this were spot on! I love the touch of humor you bring into this! You literally mirrored my sentiments of snowy Christmases! Keep up the wonderful writing!

Rhoswen
9
9
Review of The Fire  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was very well written. I enjoyed reading it, and it really kept me on the edge of my seat. I could just picture someone running into the forest to save a fawn. I love how you incorporated some magic into this story. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Rhoswen
10
10
Review of The Quiet Old Man  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a wonderfully written poem. The rhythm and flow were spot-on and worked well with the rhyme scheme. There's a message in this poem, if one dares to look. I really enjoyed reading this. I have no suggestions to offer, other than to leave this poem just the way it is. Keep up the great writing, my friend!

Rhoswen
11
11
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was well written. The rhythm, flow and rhyme all work great together. I enjoyed reading about the different Olympic sports. You did a great job on this poem. The fact that you added at the end of the page the prompt and in the poem, you bold the words that were required for the prompt. Keep up the wonderful writing!


Rhoswen
12
12
Review of Your Word  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was beautifully written. Your faith is evident in this - and it shows how strong your faith is. The rhythm and flow of this works really well with the rhyme scheme. I enjoyed reading this, and was very encouraging to me. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Rhoswen
13
13
Review of Blessed Ironies  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a great read! I love the way you continually encourage yourself in this letter from your future self to your sixteen year old self. The optimism you display in this was great. This letter really flows together well. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Rhoswen
14
14
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think we have all felt the sting of failure. Your words are raw emotion. I can definitely feel the pain you felt when writing this. However, you are NOT a failure, no matter what the world may tell you. Believe in yourself. Keep writing - it's great therapy!

Rhoswen
15
15
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a cute poem about a dog who would rather have belly rubs than go hunting. The rhythm, flow and rhyme all worked together to make this an easy read. I love the humor you sprinkle in throughout this poem. I have two dogs myself, and to them, nothing beats a belly rub! Keep up the wonderful writing.

Rhoswen
16
16
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a beautiful poem of thanking our Father in heaven. The rhythm and flow of this worked very well together. The only suggestion I have is in the first line, there needs to be a space in between the words Thank and You...Other than that, you did a wonderful job. Keep up the great writing!

Rhoswen
17
17
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a beautiful poem with great descriptions of the new morning. I can see the pink and white petals, drizzled in morning dew as I smell the coffee. I actually shivered when I read the line about the chill in the breeze. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Rhoswen
18
18
Review of Air Travel  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a cute but ever so true description of what it's like to fly in this day and age. You did a wonderful job on this. The rhythm and flow of this poem work well. The ending was a bit humorous, albeit true. Keep up the wonderful writing and thank you for sharing.

Rhoswen
19
19
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your descriptions in this poem were great. I could feel the beginning of love, and see the burgundy gown with silk trim. The rhythm and flow of this were spot on. This was a poem that speaks volumes on new love, and makes one long for that feeling. Keep up the great writing!


Rhoswen
20
20
Review of Meh poemz ;-;  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a very heart-felt poem. I love how you explain how you are lost. I have felt that way many times myself. The rhythm and flow of this worked well together. If I might make a suggestion, the yellow and green font are a bit hard for older eyes like mine to read...Other than that, you did a wonderful job. Keep up the great writing!

Rhoswen
21
21
Review of Cookies and Magic  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a cute little story. I enjoyed reading it. I love the references to magic and fairies. I can picture Jane baking the cookies with her mother, and I can imagine the surprise when the cookies come out burnt. You did a wonderful job on this short story. Keep up the great writing!

Rhoswen
22
22
Review of Haunted  
Rated: E | (4.5)
The rhythm and flow of this poem were spot on. There is a powerful message in this. I enjoyed the read. I love your descriptions - they really bring this poem to life. I can see why it won first place. I do have one suggestion, but it is only a suggestion....In the line where you say her frail body finally rejected the stress, I don't believe the comma is necessary after the word frail. It breaks up the line in a bit of an unnatural way. Other than that, this poem is perfect! Write on,

Rhoswen
23
23
Review of The Pantomime  
Rated: E | (5.0)
For a poem that only has 24 syllables, you did a great job on this. The rhythm and flow were on target. I enjoyed reading this. I saw no issues with grammar, line breaks or punctuation. I don't think I could write a poem with only 24 syllables. Wonderful job. Keep up the great writing!


Rhoswen
24
24
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a beautiful tribute to your daughter. I'm sorry for your loss. I could feel the love and the pain as I read through this poem. The rhythm and flow were spot on, and I love how you repeated the last line of the stanza all the way up to the last stanza where you changed it up. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Rhoswen
25
25
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a cute little limerick! I love the rhyme, the rhythm and the flow. And the story line...wow...who woulda thought of something like that! Great job. I had to laugh as I read through this....it was kinda funny, but not so funny (if that makes any sense.) Keep up the wonderful writing!

Rhoswen
320 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 13 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from http://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/bray2015