|"I all that I meet, all year, far and near."
This sentence didn't make sense to me. Was wondering if you meant to say "In all that I meet, all year, far and near."
Other than that, the flow and rhythm and rhyme of this poem work very well. I enjoyed reading this, and you impart a very important lesson of January 1 being only a date, and what's important is what we do with the spirit of the new year.
Keep up the wonderful writing,