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Review of Beaks of Terror  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was definitely twisted. This story had me on the edge of my seat from start to hilarious finish. I could hear the clicking and feel the tension and fear in the darkness as I read through this. Your descriptions were awesome. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Rhoswen


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Review of Mirror, Mirror  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a well written story. So many times, we see ourselves as though we are not enough or ugly, even when that isn't the truth. But your ending was ominous and evil, and proves that looks aren't everything. I saw no issues that needed to be addressed. Keep up the great writing!

Rhoswen


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Review of A Bunny's Tale  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was well-written. The rhythm, flow and rhyme all worked together really well to make this an easy read. I love the subject and how you mention spring as a time of rebirth, renewal. You perfected the art of using the prompt words and highlighting them, and staying with the prompt throughout the entire poem. Great job on this, Ken. Keep up the wonderful writing and I look forward to reading more!

Rhoswen


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Review of Broken Heart  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a very heartfelt and sad poem about being let down by the one you love. I could feel your pain as I read through. The rhythm felt right. I do have a couple of suggestions I've mentioned below.

"Iv" - should be spelled "I've". 2nd stanza, 3rd line.

"To where it would make want to run." - who would it make want to run - you or them? 2nd stanza, last line.

"i'm" - capitalize the I. 3rd stanza, first line.

"Making" - doesn't need to be capitalized since it is in the middle of a sentence. 4th stanza, last line.

Other than that, you did an awesome job and I really enjoyed the read. Write on!

Rhoswen


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Review of Much  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this poem. Although rather short, the rhythm and flow worked out beautifully. I can relate to your thoughts in this poem - my poetry often reflects my feelings, thoughts and experiences. Without our lives, where would we find the inspiration to write? Keep up the great writing!

Rhoswen


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was really interesting and fun. I actually had a tough time finding some of the words. You did really good putting this together. All of the words you chose have a real impact on breast cancer awareness. Keep up the wonderful work and keep on writing!

Rhoswen
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Review of Blue Autumn  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhythm and flow of this worked really well. I could feel your pain over the loss of your loved one. You did a beautiful job of painting a picture with your words. I love how you repeated the first stanza at the end of the poem. Keep up the wonderful writing.

Rhoswen
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Review of Christmas Morn  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a well written poem that talks not just of the joys of Christmas, but also the downfalls - the things we don't normally talk about. I enjoyed reading this and even cracking a smile or two at the light-hearted complaining about having to pick up after the kiddos. The rhythm and flow were spot-on. Keep up the wonderful writing!


Rhoswen
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Review of WDC Intervention  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was great! I enjoyed reading the conversation between your friends and you about the supposed downfalls of WDC. However, as a fellow WDC-er, I must say I disagree with their point of view. This was a bit on the humorous side as well. Keep up the great writing, and pay no mind to the non-WDCers!

Rhoswen
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow! What a powerful poem. You capture the essence of a soldier, fate unknown until the very end. This tribute to the "Unknown Soldier" is stunning. It is well written. The rhythm, flow and dialogue all work together in unison. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Rhoswen
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was well written, and tells the story of not being able to come up with something to write. Your rhythm and flow were great, and the rhyme worked out well. I have written from time to time about not being able to come up with anything good to write, but you captured that extremely well in this. Keep up the great writing!

Rhoswen
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was very well written. It was easy to read but packed with useful information and examples. I loved reading the different types of endings. The advice you give in this short article, along with examples given - it's very good. I really needed this advice. Keep up the great writing.


Rhoswen
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Review of Craftmanship  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Okay, the ending of this was just plain out freaky. But I loved it. I enjoyed reading about this mirror and how Doris came to own it. My only suggestion is to add something that shows where Doris went when she fell "into" the mirror - I was expecting shattered glass all over the place, but nope. Great job on this. Keep up the great writing!

Rhoswen
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Review of Love Lost  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a beautiful tribute to a lost love. The rhythm and flow were spot-on. I felt the joy when you fell in love at the beginning of this poem, and I could feel the heartache and sorrow as I read through this. You did a wonderful job of expressing yourself in this. Great job. Keep up the great writing!

Rhoswen
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Review of Frayed  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
As I was reading this, it took on two different meanings for me - I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but either way, it worked well. The first was an old, faded piece of clothing. But then my mind (as if often does) wandered and made me think about life and how we can feel like this sometimes. This was beautifully done. Keep up the great writing!

Rhoswen
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Review of Dear Me  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Okay, I know this was from 2013, but I loved it anyway! I love how you have a system to divide up your time, and the rewards for achieving your goals. I only wish I had the self-discipline to do something like this. This was also well-written, and I saw no issues that needed to be addressed. Keep up the great writing!

Rhoswen
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful letter to your mom. I love the way you intertwined the fact that you knew your mom wasn't perfect, but that you loved her and as you got older, you understood. I'm sure your mom is proud of who you have become. I saw nothing in this that needed to be addressed. It flowed well, and it kept me wanting to read more. Keep up the great writing!

Rhoswen
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Review of Night Music  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This had a great rhythm and flow to it. I enjoyed reading this poem. I could feel the cold of winter, see the frost in the air and see blankets of snow outside a window. Great job. You have a knack for painting pictures with your words. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Rhoswen
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very interesting quiz. I did worse than I thought I would, but the questions you asked are awesome....really gets a person thinking. Thanks for a much-needed review and lesson in the real Christmas. Keep on educating all of us and keep writing!

Rhoswen
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Review of Traces of Magic  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was beautiful! I love how you weave a message to encourage us to believe in magic throughout this poem. The rhythm and flow were great, and I saw no issues structurally in this. This poem really encouraged me, and I love that. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Rhoswen
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Review of Autumn Passage  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was very well written. The rhythm and flow were spot-on. I love the imagery you used - I could see in my mind all of the beautiful pictures you painted with your words. I love the way you used the alphabet to start each line in this poem! Keep up the great writing!


Rhoswen
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This was a very good poem on the problem of motion sickness that often comes with riding a ferris wheel. The rhythm and flow worked really well, and I could feel the motion sickness from the pit of my stomach as I read. Great job on this - keep up the wonderful writing!


Rhoswen


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was a beautiful tribute to the soldiers who fight day in and day out - whether on foreign soil or back here at home. I loved the rhythm and flow of this, and the rhyme really worked well. Throughout this poem, you make one thing clear - the price these soldiers pay proves over and over that these freedoms we enjoy are not free. Very well done! Keep up the great writing!



Rhoswen

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Review of Pit Stop  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This was well-written. I could picture the couple arguing, riding in the car through a desolate town. The scene at the cemetery intrigued me. This story did leave me wondering how Kimberly died. Other than that, you did a wonderful job painting a picture of the scene with your words. Keep writing!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this! You have sprinkled in humor as you "instruct" other men in how to get along with their wives. The rhythm and flow were spot-on. I love how "she lets me say, Yes, dear" is the last line of the poem - it adds a final bit of humor. Great job and keep up the wonderful writing!


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