|This was a very heartfelt and sad poem about being let down by the one you love. I could feel your pain as I read through. The rhythm felt right. I do have a couple of suggestions I've mentioned below.
"Iv" - should be spelled "I've". 2nd stanza, 3rd line.
"To where it would make want to run." - who would it make want to run - you or them? 2nd stanza, last line.
"i'm" - capitalize the I. 3rd stanza, first line.
"Making" - doesn't need to be capitalized since it is in the middle of a sentence. 4th stanza, last line.
Other than that, you did an awesome job and I really enjoyed the read. Write on!