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Review of Dear Me (2013)  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wonderful! I love how honest you are in this. And with it being a complaint letter to the 2012 Dear Me letter, (which I did read), it's the perfect let-down to the excitement from 2012 hype. Beautifully written with a very good lesson that arbitrary deadlines do more harm than good. Great job here! Write on!

B.M. Ray
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Review of Dear Me (2012)  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is absolutely brilliant! I love how you turned your Dear Me letter into an advertisement letter! The flow of the letter is great. The impact of the letter is awesome! True sales pitch here - if I hadn't learned a few hard lessons myself, I might just purchase a package..Keep up the wonderful writing!

B.M.Ray
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is beautiful! I could feel the pain this child felt as he searched for love from his birth mother. I felt the pain as you, his new mother, felt the pain of not being able to get through. The struggle is real - but with diagnosis comes hope. The rhythm and flow of this poem felt spot on to me. Keep up the wonderful writing! Beautifully done - Keep your head up!

B.M. Ray
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Review of Heaven's Bed  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This had beautiful rhythm and flow. The rhyme scheme worked very well. There's a message in this poem - and it's easy for the reader to catch that message. I love how you describe amber clouds. Wonderful job on this poem. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Bonnie
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Review of Tempest  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I loved this! It was a great read! The rhythm, the flow and the rhyme scheme worked perfectly to make this story flow. I could feel the wrath of woman as I read this, and as per your style, the last line not only explained the reason for her fury, but made me laugh! Oh, the joys of married life! You did very well on this! Keep up the great writing!

Bonnie
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Review of Endless Ripples  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is beautiful! I could see the ripples on the water's surface as I read this. I love your last stanza, comparing the ripples on the waters to the ripples of friends in our lives. Rhythm and flow were perfect and the rhyme scheme worked out wonderfully. A beautiful poem by a talented writer. Keep up the great writing!

Bonnie
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Review of Never Was  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
"indeed !" - Don't think there needs to be a space after the word "indeed"

Other than this, you did a wonderful job on this poem. Rhythm and flow was spot on (as usual,) and the rhyme scheme was beautifully done. I have often felt as though I was in this dark place of "Never Was"....lol. Keep up the great writing!

Bonnie
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Review of Winter  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is beautiful! I can really see the snow, the birds...and I can see the cat crouched on the back of the couch! The rhythm, flow and rhyme flow together so well! You really have a talent for painting a picture with words! Keep up the wonderful writing, my friend!

Bonnie
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Review of " Lonely Track "  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this! The emotion is raw. I really felt the pain as I read this. It was a smooth read, the rhythm and flow flawless. You say that this isn't too bad, but I have news for you - it's absolutely brilliant! Keep up the wonderful writing! I really enjoyed this one!

Bonnie
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Review of The Drinking Pool  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was beautiful! I can really picture the snow, the deer, houses covered in white..and I can smell the snow as it falls. The rhythm, the flow and the rhyme all work so well together - it makes for a wonderful read. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Bonnie
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this poem! The rhythm and flow worked very well together! I love the rhyme scheme, too! There was raw emotion in this, and I could feel every word. Absolutely wonderful job! I did not see any grammatical errors that distracted from the reading...In fact, the punctuation helped your poem hit even harder! Keep up the wonderful writing!

B.M. Ray
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Rated: E | (4.0)
T.L.Finch

I think you did well on this. For the most part, the rhythm and flow worked well. The only issues I had were:

"but all that was just fades away" - I just kept getting stuck on this line....it was difficult to understand.

"my heart was torn into" - was wondering if "into" should have been "in two."

Other than that, great job! Keep writing!

B.M. Ray
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was well-written. A cute but sad tale of a cat abandoned by his owners, and then losing the only home he'd ever known. The rhythm and flow of this worked beautifully together. I kind of had to read it with a chuckle, though - the idea of a cat reading...great job! Keep up the wonderful writing!

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love the rhythm and flow of this piece. The rhyme scheme works beautifully. I really enjoyed the emotion you showed in this poem. The repetition of your line, "Where the world bleeds white," really accents the title. Great job on this - keep up the wonderful writing!

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Review of Elusive  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! This was beautifully written. I can actually picture a dark-haired woman with brown eyes strolling down the street. Rhythm, flow and rhyme all worked very well to paint a beautiful picture with your words! Please keep up the beautiful writing!

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love the rhythm and flow of this poem! I could actually picture two people in a grave, in a graveyard. The image you included with this poem really set it off. The rhyme scheme is beautifully done. You did a great job of painting a picture with your words! Keep up the wonderful writing!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This was beautifully written. The rhythm, flow and rhyme sequence worked in perfect harmony. I could see the moonlight as I read through this. Wonderful job painting a picture with your words! I really enjoy reading your poems! Keep up the wonderful writing!

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Review of On Being Blue  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading this poem! I feel the same way about blue cases and above! The rhythm and flow of this piece is great, and the rhyme scheme really helped the flow. The way you look at being a blue case is refreshing to see - the fact that you look for opportunities to help others and be active on WDC. Keep up the great work!

B.M. Ray
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this collaboration between you and Lostwordsmith ! The rhythm and flow is wonderful and it read very smoothly from one stanza to the next! And as a writer, I can definitely relate to the inability to find some inspiration and the frustration that comes with it, and then the joy I feel when it finally comes back! Great job! Keep up the great writing!

B.M. Ray
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I loved this! I'm horrible at Acrostics, but you did awesome on this! I enjoyed reading - the rhythm and flow really worked well. I can see why your hubby loved this - It's full of passion and desire, and speaks of the promise you made to each other. Great job and keep up the wonderful writing!

B.M. Ray
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Review of Three Wishes  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was great! I enjoyed the rhythm and flow of this piece. The rhyme scheme worked well. I had to laugh at that last part about the cat being turned into a man and talking about the mixed blessings that came with it. Great job on this piece! Keep up the great writing!

B.M. Ray
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Review of You are Not There  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! This was beautifully written. I really connected with you in the sense that your Mom isn't there, and you feel that you still need her (who doesn't still need their Mom around?) I feel the same about my Daddy. Your pain is evident in this poem. Keep up the beautiful writing!

B.M. Ray
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Okay, I must admit I had to read this twice. Not because I saw anything wrong or couldn't get the picture..but because it was funny! It's really great when a reader comes back to read something just simply because they enjoyed it so much the first time! Keep up the wonderful writing!!

B.M. Ray
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Review of Dear Me  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading this! You really have some wonderful goals for this year, yet you keep them realistic. I believe you can do this! Keep up the great writing!

B.M. Ray
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading this poem. The rhythm and flow worked really well. I'm not real familiar with strict form poetry, but I believe that you did well in adhering to the form of a sonnet. I really felt the sentiments in this poem of wanting God's peace - and to be used by God. Keep up the wonderful writing!

B.M. Ray
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