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Review of Savior our Lord  
Review by RootsToAPoetree
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don’t really ever provide critical feedback because I don’t think I’m equipped to. I more like to tell the author how their writing made me feel.your poem spoke to me because I too wonder what proof it is people need to believe. We are people of faith and faith alone is our human responsibility to our Creator. Great poem. Please see mine as well. Titled Guarded.
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Review by RootsToAPoetree
Rated: E | (3.0)
Script is detailed enough to be acted out properly. Perhaps add more setting and emotional description to assist the actors.
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Review by RootsToAPoetree
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
Very interesting topic. I too loved TMNT as a child. Some minor edits to be made like the F missing in Fat Girl but overall it’s very entertaining
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Review by RootsToAPoetree
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow... that speaks so deeply to me. Short and direct. Says a thousand words in a short verse.
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Review by RootsToAPoetree
Rated: E | (2.5)
Is the goal here to take faith from the man that kneels before his creator? Faith is the very meaning of not requiring evidence but a belief that only God deserves the praise for our presence.
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Review of Lizard?  
Review by RootsToAPoetree
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the style of poetry and the straight forward approach. Maybe add a metaphor or two perhaps to make the mind stir.

Great read!
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