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Review of Jessica Kate  
Review by bubblebear
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi there, just dropping by to give you some feedback.

First of all, I love your creativity! I love how you used the name in the poem, wrote a poem and still managed to make it rhyme. I often struggle with rhyming poems when I write so I really envy you! I like the use of colour in your poem, it makes it easy to imagine and the essence of the 'summer morn' makes me think of a lazy sunday morning, when the sun is just coming up.

Overall I think your poem is really nice, keep up the good work!!
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Review of Songs of our life  
Review by bubblebear
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi there!

Just thought I'd give you some feedback after reading your poem. I like it :) It's very imaginative and abstract. There's a good rhythm to your poem, it makes me think of an evening when the sun is setting and someone is sitting on a bench writing this poem.

Keep it up x
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Review of Stumbling Through  
Review by bubblebear
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hi it's bubblebear from Power Reviewers!

I really liked your story! Although the font was slightly too small for my eyes, I eventually got really into it because of how well written it was. I liked the way it was fairly light-hearted with some humour included in it. The topic itself is actually fairly serious because a lot of college students suddenly faced with so much independence and freedom, are unable to be self - disciplined enough to get themselves into a good, constructive routine.But enough of me!

Basically I really really liked you work. I'd love to see a continuation of it or something similar

Keep it up!
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