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Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Item:#2258829 named: The Walking Dead(Coronavirus) By Drummergirl shows plenty of promise. While the characters are teenagers, they could have been made to be more real. The story leaves the reader to draw their own conclusions as to is this could really happen. Like I said earlier, this shows promise and I hope the author continues with this piece of work in progress. I give the story three stars. Keep On Writing.
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Review of Night Lips  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Item number 2204193 by Victor L. Rolling Jr. Is a well written Vampire story. The moment you start reading you know you are in for something Magical. Believable characters drag you along until the end, which is not a fairy tale ending. I would love to see more of this story line. I give this piece Five Stars. Keep on writing!
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Review of Bray  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: GC | (5.0)
Item number #2249380 titled: Bray by Joe Nelson is an interesting piece of work. The story pulls you into it rather fast and keeps you there, with well written characters. Who did this dastardly deed? Will they be caught eventually and what can the little girl they find on the road tell them if she ever speaks of the horrors she witnessed that night. I give this small part of a hopefully much larger story a five stars.
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Review of Jake McCrary  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jack McCrary, item #2197959, written by Words Whirling 'Round tells the story of Jack and Bessie and their love. I found it to be well written and the storyline, though in Poem form, flows ahead and I could not stop reading until I had finished. I would recommend this to anyone who is a lover of the Western Genre. I give this Poem five stars for a job well done. Keep on Writing.
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Review of The Marshal  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I am giving this piece of writing, named The Marshal. written by Elle Cyre numbered 2149190. This author shows good promise and has a future ahead of her. The main character Sam is a strong lady that is well-written and you can tell she is independent. The side characters are also well written. I would recommend this to anyone to read and look forward to the next piece she shows us all.
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Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This item, The Truth About Werewolves, #2138856 is a well written piece, which I enjoyed very much. The main character, Ella Shields, is strong and believable. Her emotions are real and life like. I would like to see this expanded into a longer piece. Great job J.Robert Kane. I am giving this piece a five star rating and I look forward to reading more from him.Keep on writing.
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Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Donkay Hoetay (Dereck B. Thorpe), your item here #2061508 entitled: Peter Out, A Reluctant Vampire is a well-written vampire story. The characters are wonderful and believable. You kept me glued to the screen through out the story. Nicely done. I am awarding you five stars for a fantastic story that I would recommend to anyone. Keep up the writing.
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Review of Blood in the Dust  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dblameck(David) your item here, #1856918 entitled: Blood in the dust. Is well written and short and sweet. Straight to the subject as they say. The character of the Marshal is convincing in the turmoil he is going through as he must face down his friend and eventually kill him. This short story could be expanded and make a full length book.One I would love to read. I am awarding you five stars. Keep up the good work and Keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Rip Van Winkle, your item here #2088144 entitled: City Of Lost People, is a well-written story that grabs you and keeps you hanging on through out the entire story. The ending is a twist that you do not see coming. Well done!I am awarding you five stars.Keep up the good work and most of all, Keep On Writing!
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Review of Elf Team Six  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Brick Chicken, your item here entitled, Elf Team Six #2105013 is a well written Christmas story. It keeps you entertained from the beginning to the end. Great characters.I would recommend this to anyone. I am awarding you five stars for a well-done job. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing!
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Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Cupadraig, your item here #2058818 entitled: Prompt#24 Murder Mystery is a well written piece with well defined strong characters and storyline. This would be a great longer piece. Have you ever thought of expanding this? I am awarding you five stars for an excellant job. Keep exploring your talent . But, most of all Keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Brina, your item here #1684432 entitled: Through the Portal is an interesting piece of writing. Strong characters and storyline. I will not nit pick about grammer mistakes. We all do make mistakes. Your main character, Olivia, portray's the strong Motherly instincts that are normal with all Mothers. Thinking about the welfare of her child before her own. Nicely done I am awarding you four and a half stars. Keep exploring your talent. But, most of all Keep On Writing! jeff
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Review of Max the Bulldog  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: E | (5.0)
Tyler, wow! Your item here #2062526 entitled: Max The BullDog is a well written story with strong well defined characters and storyline. This sounds like it might have been a childhood memory of yours. Was it? For, an excellent job I am awarding you five stars. Keep exploring your talent ans most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review of Chains and Armor  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: E | (4.0)
Kelsey, your item here #2062532 is an interesting little tidbit of hopefully, a much large piece of work from you. Great start! I am awarding you four stars. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review of The Dark  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: E | (5.0)
Zanadile, your item here #2062545 entitled: The Dark Is a well written and interesting piece of work. I would love to have you take this as the beginning to a much larger story.With a strong, well defined charcter you have a great start. Keep it up. Keep exploring your talent. I am awarding you five stars. keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review of THE DRUMMER  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lauraispractingpiano, your item here #2062595 entitled: The Drummer is a well written story.You have well thought out and well defined characters and storyline. Both are strong. In here you mention Edgar Allen Poe and after reading the story I can see where it is much like a Poe story. I am awarding you five stars for an excellent job. keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! jeff
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Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Nathan, your item here # 2061499 A Twist In Time...Chapter 2 is once again well written. The continuation of strong well defined characters and storyline makes this worth reading. I am looking forward to reading the entire piece after it is finished.I am awarding you four and a half stars again. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Nathan, your item here # 2060725 entitled: A Twist In Time..Chapter One is a well written piece with strong well defined characters and storyline. You take the readers along on an enjoyable ride through time. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review of Awakening  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Maldakir, your item here # 2058620 entitled: Awakening is an interesting piece. Strong characters and storyline. I would, however like to see this piece expanded. It would make a much better story. I am awarding you four stars. Well done. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
ItsASecret, your item here #2053853 entitled: The Runner and The Dethroned is not bad. A prety good start of a longer piece. Good characters that are strong and well defined. The storyline is well thought out so far at this point of the story.

The only things I can see wrong is a few missed grammer issues, but that is nothing to worry about. We all still forget to put into place comma's and such. I know I do.

A couple places you have words that in my opion do not need to be there and taking them out does not delete anything from the story.
Examples::
Not wasting a second I snatch up my bag and tear through the door and outside into the pouring rain..... take out the word (and) before outside.
Example two::
Behind me I hear angry voices followed by footsteps, meaning I'm being chased..... try this> Behind me I hear angry voices and footsteps following, I am being chased.

Whatever you choose. The main thing is to write.I am awarding you four stars. Keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review of New Life  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
C.D.Franz, your item here # 2051891 entitled: New Life is a well written piece. Strong well defined characters and storyline. If the main character is dead I think more should have been explained a little on how he died.Over all this is a good story. I am awarding you fouor and a half stars. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review of Altar Sacrifice  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
CreativelyWritingNovels22, your item here # 2051954 entitled: Alter Sacrifice is a well written piece of work. The storyline can be telling the sotry of either a Vampire or a Serial Killer. Which one or maybe something else? This small piece is very good and I would like to read more of this. I am awarding you four and a half stars. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review of Dunmoor Castle  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dave, your item here # 1331145 entitled: Dunmoore Castle is a well written piece. I like how you told the story in the form of a diary. Very interesting. I awarding you four stars. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all Keep ON Writing! Jeff
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Review of Of Love and Caste  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Tinman, your item here # 2051462 entitled: Of Love and Caste is a well written piece. Strong characters and storyline. Informative to those readers who may not have known anything about the caste system in history. Over all I liked this. An award of five stars are giving for a well done job. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
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Review of Night Ride  
Review by Bearclaw
Rated: E | (5.0)
Horsewoman, your item here # 758444 entitled: Night Ride I foound to be a well written and thought out poem. You delve into the pyschy of thge old cowboy. Good job. The poem flows along nicely through out. I am awarding you five stars for a well done job. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep ON Writing! Jeff
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