This item: # 1953917 entitled: I Have A Confession by Joto-Kai is a well-written and interesting story. I enjoyed reading it and recommend it to anyone. The characters and storyline are well thought out. Looking forward to seeing what this writer comes up with in the future. I award this piece five stars for a job well done. Keep On Writing!
Item number # 2263987 called Toadette's Story, written by VanillaSoftArt surprised me and that takes some doing. Totally not what I was expecting. The characters are well-written and diverse. The story is well thought out.I would recommend this writer to anyone. Hope to read more in the future and see what comes along. I am awarding five stars for a job well done. Keep On Writing.
Item #696461 Death Chamber by W.D. is a well-written story that will keep you reeled in all the way until the end, which you are not expecting. The two main characters, Simon Franks and Lieutenant Jerome Hawkins are very believable. I would recommend this to anyone who likes suspense and horror. I am awarding this five stars. Looking forward to reading more from this Author. Keep On Writing!
This item # 2184015, Titled: Daring Greatly is a well-written, sad story. The characters are believable. I can see them actually existing back in the 1800"s. I would love to see this piece expanded into a much longer story. I gladly award this story five stars for a job well done. Looking forward to reading more from you. Keep On Writing.
Your item here number 1354121 titled: One Busy Night in Chicago is well written. It grabs you from the start and does not let up. The characters are outstanding. Lou Ryan reminds me of the character Philip Marlow from all those 1940's era books and movies. Love them. I am awarding this wonderful piece of writing FIVE STARS for a job well done. Looking forward to reading more about this character. Keep On Writing!
Item number 2285936 entitled: Gnomeville by Penelope Moonbeam is an interesting Fantasy tale. This should be expanded into a young people's story. I think it would go over well. I hope to see more from this talented Author. I am awarding this work five stars for a job well done. Keep On Writing!
Song Of the Vamp, item # 2246363 written by Words Whirling Around. ow, what can I say about this piece of work? The author has crafted a wonderful well written and witty story. The two main characters remind me of an old married couple. They are believable in the way they interact with each other. The end is a twist you really do not see coming. I give this story five stars for a job well done. I hope to see more added to this story in the future. Keep on Writing!
Item number #2270065 titled Queens On The Range by Words Whirling Around id a pretty good Western story. The characters are strong and believable. They reminded me of actual people I have met. I have given this four stars out of five. My only concern with it is to me the chapters were too short and should have described the characters in more detail during each. I did like it and would recommend it for reading. I would like to see more to this story. Good Job. Keep On Writing.
Item:#2258829 named: The Walking Dead(Coronavirus) By Drummergirl shows plenty of promise. While the characters are teenagers, they could have been made to be more real. The story leaves the reader to draw their own conclusions as to is this could really happen. Like I said earlier, this shows promise and I hope the author continues with this piece of work in progress. I give the story three stars. Keep On Writing.
Item number 2204193 by Victor L. Rolling Jr. Is a well written Vampire story. The moment you start reading you know you are in for something Magical. Believable characters drag you along until the end, which is not a fairy tale ending. I would love to see more of this story line. I give this piece Five Stars. Keep on writing!
Jack McCrary, item #2197959, written by Words Whirling 'Round tells the story of Jack and Bessie and their love. I found it to be well written and the storyline, though in Poem form, flows ahead and I could not stop reading until I had finished. I would recommend this to anyone who is a lover of the Western Genre. I give this Poem five stars for a job well done. Keep on Writing.
I am giving this piece of writing, named The Marshal. written by Elle Cyre numbered 2149190. This author shows good promise and has a future ahead of her. The main character Sam is a strong lady that is well-written and you can tell she is independent. The side characters are also well written. I would recommend this to anyone to read and look forward to the next piece she shows us all.
Dblameck(David) your item here, #1856918 entitled: Blood in the dust. Is well written and short and sweet. Straight to the subject as they say. The character of the Marshal is convincing in the turmoil he is going through as he must face down his friend and eventually kill him. This short story could be expanded and make a full length book.One I would love to read. I am awarding you five stars. Keep up the good work and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Rip Van Winkle, your item here #2088144 entitled: City Of Lost People, is a well-written story that grabs you and keeps you hanging on through out the entire story. The ending is a twist that you do not see coming. Well done!I am awarding you five stars.Keep up the good work and most of all, Keep On Writing!
Brick Chicken, your item here entitled, Elf Team Six #2105013 is a well written Christmas story. It keeps you entertained from the beginning to the end. Great characters.I would recommend this to anyone. I am awarding you five stars for a well-done job. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing!
Cupadraig, your item here #2058818 entitled: Prompt#24 Murder Mystery is a well written piece with well defined strong characters and storyline. This would be a great longer piece. Have you ever thought of expanding this? I am awarding you five stars for an excellant job. Keep exploring your talent . But, most of all Keep On Writing! Jeff
Brina, your item here #1684432 entitled: Through the Portal is an interesting piece of writing. Strong characters and storyline. I will not nit pick about grammer mistakes. We all do make mistakes. Your main character, Olivia, portray's the strong Motherly instincts that are normal with all Mothers. Thinking about the welfare of her child before her own. Nicely done I am awarding you four and a half stars. Keep exploring your talent. But, most of all Keep On Writing! jeff
Tyler, wow! Your item here #2062526 entitled: Max The BullDog is a well written story with strong well defined characters and storyline. This sounds like it might have been a childhood memory of yours. Was it? For, an excellent job I am awarding you five stars. Keep exploring your talent ans most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Kelsey, your item here #2062532 is an interesting little tidbit of hopefully, a much large piece of work from you. Great start! I am awarding you four stars. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Zanadile, your item here #2062545 entitled: The Dark Is a well written and interesting piece of work. I would love to have you take this as the beginning to a much larger story.With a strong, well defined charcter you have a great start. Keep it up. Keep exploring your talent. I am awarding you five stars. keep On Writing! Jeff
Nathan, your item here # 2061499 A Twist In Time...Chapter 2 is once again well written. The continuation of strong well defined characters and storyline makes this worth reading. I am looking forward to reading the entire piece after it is finished.I am awarding you four and a half stars again. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Nathan, your item here # 2060725 entitled: A Twist In Time..Chapter One is a well written piece with strong well defined characters and storyline. You take the readers along on an enjoyable ride through time. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Maldakir, your item here # 2058620 entitled: Awakening is an interesting piece. Strong characters and storyline. I would, however like to see this piece expanded. It would make a much better story. I am awarding you four stars. Well done. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
ItsASecret, your item here #2053853 entitled: The Runner and The Dethroned is not bad. A prety good start of a longer piece. Good characters that are strong and well defined. The storyline is well thought out so far at this point of the story.
The only things I can see wrong is a few missed grammer issues, but that is nothing to worry about. We all still forget to put into place comma's and such. I know I do.
A couple places you have words that in my opion do not need to be there and taking them out does not delete anything from the story.
Examples::
Not wasting a second I snatch up my bag and tear through the door and outside into the pouring rain..... take out the word (and) before outside.
Example two::
Behind me I hear angry voices followed by footsteps, meaning I'm being chased..... try this> Behind me I hear angry voices and footsteps following, I am being chased.
Whatever you choose. The main thing is to write.I am awarding you four stars. Keep On Writing! Jeff
C.D.Franz, your item here # 2051891 entitled: New Life is a well written piece. Strong well defined characters and storyline. If the main character is dead I think more should have been explained a little on how he died.Over all this is a good story. I am awarding you fouor and a half stars. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
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