Orchiddragon, this item of yours # 2047596 entitled: Cemetery Drive, is well written with strong well defined characters and storyline. You keep the reader wondering what's going to happen next, until the sad ending. I am awarding you four stars for a good job. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Connor Van Stee, this item # 2047886 entitled :Dawn Is a good start to a longer piece. You need to indicate the paragraphs, so it makes easier reading. Put a space between them. If you do not know how ask. Otherewise a good start for your first posting.I am awarding you three stars for the effort. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Mrs.Brightside this item# 2047444 entitled: To My Astronaut is a well written and well defined poem of strong characters and subject matter. You give good descriptions. Keep exploring your talent. I am awarding you four stars for a good job. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Joni Rose, this item # 2047591 entitled: For My Brother (Baby) is a well written description of the turning of age. No one can live the lives of those we love. all we can do is be there for them when needed. A lot of us have been through it. We on here will be ready to talk when you are. I am awarding you three and a half stars for a well done job. Keep On Writing! Jeff.
Nicely written. With strong well defined characters and storyline. I can relate to the being apart, as I was a truckdriver myself for over twenty years. I am awarding myou four and a half stars for a well done job. Kerep exploring your talent, but most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Shaara, your item here # 656578 entitled: Bet and the Stranger is a well written piece. With well defined strong characters, particular Bet(Elizabeth) and a strong storyline. You hook me in the first few paragraphs and I wanted to ride along til the end. I am awarding you five starsd for an excellant job. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Old Warrior, nicely done here. Item # 1908961 entitled: The Enigma is well written. You have strong well defined characters and storyline. This writing shows the reasearch envolved with the historical details. You grabbed me early and carried me along throughout. I am awarding you a five star rating for an excellant job. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Jennifer, this item # 2045860 entitled: Broken Humanity defines the person inside you. One can see you are very passionate about what you have wrote. I agree with the idea behind this. The basic thought is good. My only issue is with the grammer and punctuation. You did not use apostrophy's when needed. Otherwise I could find nothing wrong. Keep exploring your talent. I am awarding you four stars for a good idea. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Nicely done Cheri. This item # 2034259 entitled: Michael is well written. With well strong well defined characters and storyline it grabs you early and brings you along until the end. The little boy you can picture being curious about the world and asking questions about everything.Four and a half stars rating for a well done job. Keep it up. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Cheri Annemos, your item here # 2038833 entitled: Mindy is a good start to a future wonderful story. The main character Mindy sounds like your typical mid twenty something working girl. Strong willed, but yet still a hint of the little girl inside. The storyline is strong and further writing will add to that, be carfeful it does not get to sappy like some romance stories do. I am awarding you four and a half stars for a good job. so far. You are worried about the title. Here's an idea for you....The Almost Find. With what you have written so far it would work. Keep exploring your talent and most of all. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Good job Milo, Item # 1884384 entitled: Beyond the Black is well written. You have talent my friend. Keep exploring and Keep On Writing. Five star rating for excellant job. Jeff
Wow, a fantastic story. This piece, item # 1893360 entitle: Black Eagle, would make a wonderful series of books. It is well written with a strong storyline and well defined charaters. It rreminds me of the Joss Whetton show Firefly. I am awarding five stars rating for an excellant job. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Nicely done Ross. Your item here # 2036446 entitled: Pancakes is a well written piece of work. With well defined strong characters and a strong storyline exceeded my expectations. The ending was surprising twist. I was expecting something totally different. For a fantastic job I am awarding you five stars. Keep up the great work. Keep On Writing! Jeff
JK nicely done. This item # 2045576 entitled: The Curse is a well written piece. With strong well defined strong characters and a strong storyline. You grabbed the reader early and bring them along for the ride.Keep exploring your talent. I am awarding you four and a half stars rating. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Kyle Peterson, this item # 2009349 entitled: The Forest Of The Dead is a well written story. You say it is a minor off shoot. Ever think about expanding it into a major story by itself? Well defined characters and strong storyline. I am awarding four and a half stars for an well done effort. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing ! Jeff
Kyle Peterson. I am impressed with this item # 2036980 entitled: The Dragon Of Legend. This is well written. It hooked me quickly and carried me along for a wonderful ride. I really want to see this in full length book form. With strong well defined characters and a strong storyline. I am awarding you five stars rating for an excellant job. Keep exploring your talent. But, most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Well done Wildbill. This item of yours # 644300 entitled: California Dreaming is a well written and thought out storyline. You are talented in this Genre. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep exploring your talent. Five star rating for an excellant job. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Well done Internet Addiction, your item here #2044316 entitled: My Mighty Ship is a well written poem. Great use of analogies. Keep exploring your talent. For an excellant job you are awarded five stars. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Wow Pamela, nice twist there at the end. I was wondering, but was still surprised. Your item here # 2043135 entitled: Deception is a winner in my book. Well written, strong storyline and characters. Five stars rating for an excellant job. Keep up the good work and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Bryan, your item here # 1853524 entitled: Rendezvous is well written flash fiction piece of work. Strong storyline and well defined characters. I was swept up in the first paragraph and read on to see what happened next. Would Anna's new friend Janos show or stand her up? What I want to know is why didn't he wake her up? Great job. I am awarding a five star rating for a well done job.Keep exploring yoour talent, but most of all. Keep On Writing! Jeff
OzoneXT, although small nicelt done. This item # 2045091 entitled Tswalu is well written. I would like to see this expanded into something longer. I enjoyed the storyline here. I am giving you three and a half stars rating. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all Keep On Writing! Jeff
Nicely done Choconut. This item # 2045099 entitled: The Lie is well written with strong, well defined characters and storyline. You hooked me early and carried me along until the end. I am awarding you four and a half stars rating for a well done job. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
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