Colleen K your item here # 2044925 entitled Blackbeard,Inc is a well written story with well defined strong characters and storyline. You did a great job here. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all Keep On Writing! I am awarding you five stars for an excellant job. Jeff
Anne your item here # 2043915 entitled Chasing Ghosts! is well written. This flows and is easy to read which is good for the reader. I enjoyed this piece. Keep exploring your talent. I am awarding you four and a half stars rating. Keep On Writing! Jeff
DJF your item here # 2043505 entitled Apologies For The Trollway is very intertaining to read. It keep me wanting to read more and more. And the more I read the more I laughed. For a good job I am giving four and a half star rating. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Beautiful Tragedy your item here # 2044053 entitled Sweet Poison is well written. It shows a glimpse into your dark thinking. I liked this. For that reason I am giving you a four star rating. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Kentuckycowgirl your item here # 970970 entitled The Weathers: Frontier Family Adventures, Chapter 1. You have a well written story with strong well defined characters and storyline. You roped me in and kept me wanting to read onward. For a job well done I am aearding you four and a half stars. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Silver your item here # 983409 entitled The Long, Lonely Ride is well written. With strong well defined characters and storyline. Yoou make the readers picturre themselves along for the ride. Nice job at the end. For a well done job I am awarding you four and a half. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Mailor your item here # 1008141 entitled Cows and Coyotes is a well written piece. I enjoyed it. My only concern is the ending. You should have included the Sheriff capturing the outlaws. It would have made it flow more at the end. Otherwise it is a good job. I am giving you a four and a half star rating for that reason.Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Jason. your item here # 2044863 entitled Dark Tides is well written. It has strong well defined characters and storyline. I think you need to expand this into a book length piece. You have talent that you need to explore further. You grab ahold of the readers attention and takes them along on the wonderful ride. For this reason I am giving you a four and a half star rating. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Interesting twist to end this item # 1802020 entitled The Results was fasinating aall the way to the end. Great job Lightspeed555. I wonder if something like this might not actually happen. NOW GOD WANTS IT BACK! I laughed when I read the final line. Keep up your great work. I am awarding you five stars rating . Keep On Writing! Jeff
Another gem from you Lightspeed555. Great storyline and characters. Item # 1802043 entitled Darkness awaits reminds me of my Grandparents house. They had a Michigan basement and it always creeped the hell out of me. Anyways, a well done job here. Four and a half star rating. Keep on Writing! Jeff
Holy Crap isall I can really say about this item # 1802086 entitled The Great Hormel Chili Story. I Laughed at the end of this, but i also realized I will probably never eat hormel chili again either. And I do wonder what is in Chicken Spoup. Keep upo the good work and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Another wonderful piece of work from you Lightspeed555. I can picture him setting there in front of his computer and taking in all until he has an insight into heaven. Than to have his wife storm in ruining the moment. Keep exploring your talent. I am giving you four and a half stars rating. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Wow. Your item here # 1972783 entitled Terminus of Earth Is well written Lightspeed555. I am impressed with this piece of work. Well strong storyline and well defined characters. I look foreward to rereading this once the final editing and rewrite is finished. Keep up the great job. I am awarding you a five star rating for a good job. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Great job on this item # 2001282 entitled The Misconceptions Of Trains. A wonderful job of detailing the train trip and working with the horses over a summer for your Aunt. Well written. Keep up the good work and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Lightspeed....f***ing AMEN brother. I am in the same boat here. Have not worked in over five years. Lost my truck driving job when the economy took a dump in 2009 after eleven years with the same company. I hauled hazardous waste for an oil company. NOw because of health problems I can not drive truck anymore according to the Department Of Transportation. NO one will hire me nowe because of doctor restrictions due to the health problems. But, not bad enoough acoording to my doctor to qualify for ssi disability, which my wife is on as she can not work anymore. IN eight years of marriage we have lost two houses and two vehicles. I totally agree with what you say. Hang in there. Something's got to give soon. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Wow lightspeed555 nicely done. I imagine your story here item # 1807832 entitled Indians Of Marquette. Is a well written account of your time ripple effect. Did you wonder if it was another tribe or perhaps the Army that was chasing them? I had a somewhat similar occurance some years ago on The Gettysburg Battle Field. Maybe someday I will write that incounter down. Anyways you did a good job in tell this. I am awarding you five starsin rating. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Lightspeed555, hello. Nicely written little piece of work here. Item # 1849670 entitled The Downfall Of Stars. Interesting, using the birth of star and showing how it travels through out the universe and eventually ended up in a cell phone. What prompted you to write this? Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Awarding you three and a half stars rating for a good effort. Jeff
Sheridantaylor another wonderful piece from you. I rellay like this item # 1312197 entitled Wondering Cowboy. I look forward to reading more of your works in the future. Keep on exploring your talent. I am giving you a four stars rating. Keep on Writing! Jeff
Sheridantaylor, a well written continuation of Red Gate. This item # 1287965 flows as well as the first chapter in this story. Stro ng storyline and welldefined strong characters. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! I am giving you four and a half stars rating. Jeff
Interesting piece here on the Butter Churn, item # 1347793. You have a strong storyline here with strong characters. I liked this. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all, Keep On Writ ng! I am giving you four and a hald stars rating for a well done effort. Jeff
Hello Sheridantaylor. This item # 1326619 entitled Aland is a good concept. Wheaton is a strong character. This ppiece coould have been so much better for the reader to follow. What's up with these Ext. City street-day, etc? Makes for the reader to not want to read further. Sorry to say this. I did read the entire pipece and you hve the basics for a fantastic piece, if it was rewritten. Think about it? Three stars for the effort. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Elvin, well done here. This item # 135484 is a well written piece. Good storyline and well defined strong characters. Keep up the good work. I am giving you a four and a half star rating.Keep On Writng! Jeff
Good job Christopher Meyer. I like the characters Jacob and Buck. I would love to see them in something else or make this a longer piece. Great strong storyline. Well done, this item # 1362067 entitled Omaha. I am awarding you a five stars rating for this piece. Keep up the good work and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Eve, nicely done poem. This item # 1363483 entitled Ye Olde Western is well written. It was a good job you did. Keep exploring your talent. But, most of all, Keep On Writing! I am giving you four and a half stars rating. Jeff
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