Another fantastic effort of your story Stone mason, item# 348872 entitled Stone Mason Part 2. A great storyline, with likeable charcters. Keep up the good work started here. Five more stars rating. Keep On Writing! Jeeff
Shadowspawn, great job. This item # 166097, entitled Stone Mason, really impressed me. It is well written. A fantastic strong storylinee with beleiveable characters. I would love to see this expanded to book length. I am giving yoou five stars rating for an excellant job. Keep up the good work, but most of all. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Wild Rose. Nice ideas here, item # 1417632, entitled Creative Writing, has the makings of a good story. Keep working on it. It flows along with it's good strong characters, taking the reader along on the ride. I am giving you four and a half star rating for the effort. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Nicely done The Saint. Your item # 1432128, entitled Death Of A Gunslinger, is very well written. Good job. This poem keeps the reader along for the ride. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all, Keep On Writing! Five stars for you. Jeff
T. L. Finch, your item here # 1431879, entitled The Badlands, is well written. The storyline of the poem flows along, taking the readers on an good ride with a strong character. Ever think about using this character in a short story? I am giving you four and a half stars for a good job. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Well done Daniels. I like your style of cowboy rhymes. This item # 1265142, entitled Cowboy Kind. Kept me entertained throught and brought a smile to my face. Keeep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff I am giving you five stars.
Alexis, your item here # 1440184, entitled The Barn, reminds me of an Uncle's Barn on his dairy farm in Wisconsin. Well done. you made the reader actuaslly feel as if they could see it in their eyes. Keep up the good work.I am giving four and a half stars. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Shadowys, this piece, item # 2043976 entitled The Silver Bullet (Prolog), is well written. It hooks the reader and makes them want to read onward to see what happenes next. Good strong storyline and characters. I am awarding you four and a half star rating. Keep on exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Prosperous Snow, a nice little well written story you have here. Strong believeable characters and storyline. Keep on doing a good job and keep exploring your talent. Most of all Keep On Writing! Jeff I am giving you four stars for a job well done.
Interesting story here William Levy. Item # 1179133, entitled Moving Pictures was well written with strong characters and storyline. You hooked me and brought me along for a good ride. I was kept wanting to see what happemned next. I am giving you a four and a half star rating for a wonderful job. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Alexandrowich, your story here, item # 2042678, entitled A Dragon's Heat: Faith was very nicely done. I enjoyed reading it. Great story content, it flows all the way through taking the reader along. Never once slowing down.Good job! For this I am giving you an four and a half star rating. Keep up the good job and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Wow! Vacant Vagrant I was very impressed with this item # 1931768, entiteld The Things They Abandoned. The concept was great and the storyline fowed, carrying me along for the ride. You have strong characters here. It wouold be interesting to expand this and see what lead up to this point of the story.I am giving you four and a half stars rating for a great job well done. Keep up the good work nad Keep On Writing! Jeff
Joseph. Nicely done here. Item # 1499421 entitled, The Brothers Penn. This is a well written piece with strong characters and storyline. Keep up the good work and keep exploring your talent. For this work I am giving you a four star rating. Keep On Writing! jeff
Thomas Cox, for a first attempt this item # 1481578, entitled Bar Fight, is not that bad. In fact you did a fairly well job. You have a strong storyline, with strong characters. I am giving you a four stars rating. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Nicely done here item #1151598, entitled Wadsworth Fate. Good job CoffeeBean. A good storyline and likeable characters. Yoou keep the reader riding along until the end. I am giving you four stars for a job well done. Keep On Writing! Jeff
You are so sneaky Hyperiongate with this story, item # 150094 entitled Challanged and I liked it. Great job here. Rupert seems to be a man beyond what others see. Great storyline and strong characters. Not too long ,but then it is a flash fiction piece. THIS KEPT MY ATTENTION UNTIL THE END! For that reason I am giving you four stars in rating. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Nice well written story here. Item #1510713. Great storyline and strong characters. Keep exploring your talent. For the great job you done here I am giving you a five star rating. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Lance Peterson. Hello. Well done. This item of yours, # 12033304, entitled Pearson Saga: Where The Strong Survive. Good strong believeable characters and a strong storyline. It flws and is easily followable. The story grabs you and keeps you wanting to ride along until the end. I am giving you four and a half stars for a good story.Keep On Writing! Jeff
Member of the Gas House Gang. Howdy! As you said this item # 1521205, entitled Stranger has some typos. Thank you for clarifying that to the reader up front. You have a well written strong storyline, with strong believable characters. I am giving you four and a half stars rating for a good job done. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Leo Davinci. Nicely done here, your item # 1519022 entitled Death Knocks Twice. I like your character you created Emmitt. I can picture froom your descriptions, him doing these things. This has a strong storyline. Keep exploring your talent. I am giving you four and a half star ratiing for a well done job. Keep On Writing! Jeff
A story in poem form from C. R. Mullings. Well done on this item # 1477831 Rawhide Chronicles, Rawhide Cycle: A Death In The Family. There is not really anyway inh hell to make a death sound pleasant. You have taken a touchy subject and gave it all the dignity it deserves. I am giving you four and a half stars of rating for this piece. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Another wonderful adventure in the Rawhide Chronicles. This one entilted Showdown In Cearn. Item # 11261380 What can I say about your talent that anybody who has read you doesn't already know. Strong characters and strong flowing storyline grabs you and keeps you until the end. Well done. I am giving yoou four and a half stars rating again. Keep On Writing! Jeff
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