Edward Manley,your item here, #1686724 entitled Shoot-Out at the Ignorance Saloon was surprisenly good. There was a lot of technical terms that hopefully the normal reader will understand. That would be the only thing I found wrong with this. That is why I am only giving four stars of rating.The characters are strong and believeable. Good storyline. Keep exploring your talent. Keep on writing! Jeff
Nicely done lastchancer13. I thought this item, #1695415 entitled Ezekiel's Children, was a well written piece. The story line flows and carries the reader along. IO could just picture standing there next to them watching the appraoching dust cloud and wishing for rain. You kept my interest and for that reason I am giving you a four star rating. Keep up the good job and Keep On Writing! Jeff
This looks to be a fantastic story which I have to read when it is finished. Love the outline of it. Strong likeable characters. The tagline hooked me from the get go and after reading the charcater descriptions makes me want to read this all the more. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Interesting storyline here and good strong likeable characters. What happened next? Did they pay back the money? See any jail time? Well written. Keep up the good job and Keep On writing! Jeff
Fantasic review of great sounding books I will try to read in the near future. Once again you have proven that you are an avid reader and lover of books. I try to read at least one book a week, but life does not always allow for that to happen as you so well know. Keep up the good work. Keep On Writing and Reading! Jeff
Intersting story here. I liked this. You did a good job. Strong characters and likeable. Keep exploring your talent, but most of all Keep On Writing! Jeff
Not bad. A good storyline and characters. Punctuation makes things easier to read, Just a heads up. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Laughing out loud I loved ths story. I can just picture Phil hanging unpside down in the snare and getting more pissed off by the minute. You did a great job with the storyline.You have strong likeable characters here. You need to explore your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Laughing out loud heartily. Very nicely done Harry. I can just picture the glare your loving wife was giving you throughout this entire process of running errands. I have been on similar outings with my wife. On those outings, some would say we were spending loving times together. But when you have things to do, places to go and people to see, and everything that could go wrong does. It is time in hell. You laugh later. Much later. But oh well, that is what makes life interesting huh? Take care and Keep On Writing! Jeff
AMEN ANN! GOD BLESS YOU FOR BEING YOU! I love the honesty that comes out in your writings. The world is a way too cruel place at times. I would be honored if you would consider me one of your writing friends on this site. Take care! Hugs Jeff
A different take on Harry Potter. I can imagine J.K.Rowlins never figure this in any of her stories. Great concept .Keep up the good work and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
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