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Review of What If  
Review by BusmanPoet
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good Day. I like the way you put this. Questioning everything we could have or should have done only making an educated guess on what we do. Take nothing for granted. If you feel you need to say or do it, then we should. No delays. We wait too long, it becomes too late. As humans we should never allow this to happen but we are human and we'll keep asking ourselves "what if" for our entire lives. Just for the fact we are humans and we are flawed. As long as we can accept this about ourselves, we'll be fine. We just can't let it consume us.

I truly enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing my friend.

Ray *Smile*


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Review of Love Love  
Review by BusmanPoet
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello and Happy New Year babygirl.

I really enjoyed reading this. The only thing I found that didn't look right, that it's an ongoing sentence with no punctuation. I rewrote it below on how I would have done it. But that is my style of writing poetry. You have to write the way you feel it's right for you.

I feel if you structured it a bit better, it would look much better. This is only my opinion and not anything that disparages your writing. I just see it a different way.

I love romance poems. The words you express are beautiful and that makes the poem. What drew me to yours.

Thank you for sharing and keep on writing!!!

Ray *Smile*

I know you love me
as you say it
in every kiss,
in every smile,
in every moment
you share with me.

You know I Love You
and I say it
in every touch,
in every hug,
in every second
we're together.

Every time we are apart
I say it from inside
my heart;
Because all I ever do
is want to tell you,
I Love You.


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Review by BusmanPoet
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good Day. I enjoyed reading this. I'm a fan of acrostic poems as I write them myself. The rhyme and flow was outstanding and I really enjoyed Santa's story being told. Was a nice pleasant easy read.

Thank you for sharing, Good Luck in the contest.

Ray *Smile*


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Review by BusmanPoet
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello. I enjoyed reading this. I can feel the anxiety and feeling of being alone from the one you miss so much. I can remember the days I felt like this but that was back over 36 years ago. It's an empty feeling and at times feels like there's no end in sight. As my sister told me 40 years ago, things happen when you least expect it and will broadside you.

Good Luck. One day that person your missing will be there all the time. *Smile*

Thank you for sharing. Ray *Smile*


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Review of Anxiety and fear  
Review by BusmanPoet
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jen. I hear you on the anxiety you feel along with the fear. I've never really had the fear but the anxiety I've had at times, turned me into a raging madman I'd get so frustrated at times. I'd be ranting and raving and no my rants don't get raves...lol

The not having insurance is a real killer [no pun intended] but without it, we're left helpless. It's a sad situation in this respect and awful for the people, as yourself who don't have it.

I'm the same way with a cat I had, called Big Jack [heart defect] and now with Mitzy, Monty and Jacqui [Jacqui has slight brain damage along with diminishing eyesight]. Jacqui is such a sweet girl too it breaks my heart. So, I haven't traveled since 2007. Either on a plane or out of state driving.

I refuse to leave my cats by themselves for any extended period of time. If one ever needed me and I wasn't there for them, it would kill me. I was there when Big Jack took his heart attack and then a stroke. I was extremely heartbroken and sad but he knew I was there with him until the end as he was holding my hand with his paw and wouldn't let go.

I can go out of the house, I've learned to control my anxiety to the point I can function. With my anxiety I don't turned inward, I turn angry, frustrated and sometimes mean as hell. Thank God I have an understanding wife who has helped me through the years. As much as she says I'm her rock, the same goes for her being mine.

I enjoyed reading this and the courage you've shown to put it out there for all of us to read. Bravo! That's a big first step or giant leap among us anxiety type people.

Again my apologies for being so long winded.

Thank You for sharing Jen.

Ray *Smile*


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Review by BusmanPoet
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello and Good day. I really enjoyed reading this. It kept me engaged and my curiosity pushed myself to read its conclusion. It was interesting seeing you banter back and forth. Also made me smile with a bit of chuckle at the answers you, as the human, were receiving. Did a great job making it realistic and I could actually visual that I was there listening with you. Thank you for writing this. Ray *Smile*


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Review by BusmanPoet
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello DragonBlue. After reviewing my item, I was curious to see what you had. I found this one and seeing the picture, drew me in. I'm not sure if you can call me a fatalist [if such a word exits] but I can see this happening. Everything you went right through. Wars are horrific. I wouldn't ever have thought to put Murder-Death-Kill in between as you did. This pulled me right in from top to bottom. I truly enjoyed reading this. Thank You. Ray *Smile*


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