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Review by Meg
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This made me laugh.

I never knew there could be so many meanings for pi.

Oh, and I pick number one. The 2 headed sheepdog :)

Did you come up with all of this yourself?

If so, it's all really good and you're a truly creative person!

-Morgan
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Review of Trick or Tweet  
Review by Meg
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Title and description are good.

Good diction and structure.

I like how you start it out, it's deff interesting and makes the reader want to keep reading.

You seem kind of monotone. It lacks emotion.

However, it is written well.

Good job & keep writing.

-Morgan
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Review by Meg
Rated: E | (4.5)
The title and the description is really what brought me to read this. They're perfect.

This was written very well. It speaks to a lot of people. There is deff meaning behind this.

Diction is great, and you have amazing flow.

Great structure and emotion.

This was very nice! Good job :)
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Review of Polynomials  
Review by Meg
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was great!

The words were hidden well.

I'm really good at these, and it took me over 8 minutes to find all 20!

You may have wanted to add a few more polynomials in, and you can have more words connecting.

However, this was great and I loved it!
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Review of The Birthday Wish  
Review by Meg
Rated: E | (4.0)
The title is perfect, as well as the description. That's what really drew me in.

This is very cute. I love how it's told from the childs point of view. I also love that you kept the innocence the whole time.

This was written very well. There were no grammatical errors or anything of the sort that I could see.

Good job!
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Review by Meg
Rated: E | (4.0)
The title is perfect.

Word choice is great. It's not too simple, but not too sophisticated.

You have great structure, and there are no grammatical errors that I see.

Nothing is misspelled. You have great flow.

Overall, I really liked this.
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Review of pity party  
Review by Meg
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is written really well. You have flow, and great word choice. It's not too simple, not too sophisticated.

You have great structure, and the title is perfect.

This was a very good story poem. You started and ended strong.

Good job!
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Review by Meg
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very personal, and very interesting. High school can be tough! However, you wrote well and the title is perfect. There may have been a few things that I would have said differently, but we're two different people. Oh, and your description is perfect. That's the one thing that really draws the readers in, and that's really what made me read it.

Good job!
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Review by Meg
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was well written! No grammatical errors from what I can see. The title is perfect, and the way you started this out makes people want to keep reading. You have flow and nice structure. Oh, and I'm very happy for you for winning. I was a high school cheerleader, and I was captain. There was a girl on my team that I just hated so much. So I can relate to this! Good job!
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Review of REFUSE TO GET OLD  
Review by Meg
Rated: E | (4.5)
Starting out with "Getting old really sucks!" draws the reader in. Good job on that!

You use good diction, slightly simple, but still really good.

This is written very well!

Overall, I liked it a lot. You deveolped the character very nicely.

You're a great writer!
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Review by Meg
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was perfect, and very funny.

You're a great writer with a sense of flow.

Great sense of humor!

The plot is perfect.

The diction is very simple, but it fits well.

You've developed the characters nicely.

Overall, I really liked this. You're a great writer!
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Review of Dream  
Review by Meg
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is written very well.

It's clearly full of love and you have great flow.

The title is perfect for the poem.

The word choice is simple, but not too simple.

It's a very uplifting poem. Overall, it made me want to keep reading, and you're a very good writer.

Good job!
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Review by Meg
Rated: E | (3.5)
This was simple, and short enough so it wasn't boring. You stuck to simple words, maybe expand your vocabulary a little. I know that's something I have to work on. It's written well however, there are no grammatical errors or anything of the sort. I really liked this!
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Review of Death Seraph  
Review by Meg
Rated: E | (4.5)
The title of this fits perfectly. I love your word choice, and the plot. I like that the character is young, so a lot of younger people would like to read this. Your sentence structure is perfect. I like the twist of the "ostentatiously hot death seraph." This was written very well!
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Review by Meg
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I just recently graduated, so reading this, I understand what you mean. This was written really well, and I loved your word choice. Comparing the passing of time to the life of a tree seems like it would be hard to write about, but you nailed it. The imagery is great, I feel like I can see the tree, and everything you're talking about. This was well done.
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