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What I liked: The story is quite wonderful. The setting is the forest, walking alone at dusk. You had me there walking with you. I would have been scared even before seeing the "golden shining eyes" - I was intrigued that the character was not scared but seemed calm. The wolf seemed calm. Both were inquisitive. Then he turned and walked away and vanished. I was there at that moment. Thanks for a great little story. Keep writing!
Suggestions: - a little white space goes far in readability in my opinion. It is difficult to read a large block of print.
I was the forest, heading home from work, it was 11pm, and it was getting extremely dark and cold. I was striding back, hoping to get home quickly, you never know what lies in that forest.
Just as i was about to reach the gate of my house, i heard something unusual, like a crunch from a twig, or a rustle in the bushes, it was both of those things, and as i went to look around i saw two golden shining eyes looking at me near a tree, why it was a wolf, and for the first time, since i had been walking in this forest for 15 years, never had a i seen a grey wolf. I didnt even know there was one.
I stared at the wolf, and it stared back, and i almost felt we had some type of a connection between each other. The wolf made no movement qnd neither did I, if i made one move, i was worried the wolf would come for me and attack me.
You get the idea - this is just my opinion and others may give you good direction as well. Beyond that there were a few typos to go in and correct but overall it was quite a wonderful piece.