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Review of Racing My Ruins  
Review by Cali Falling
Rated: E | (5.0)
What I truly appreciate about poems such as this is the use of description. Whether it be what, the who, the where, or why, its all here and it flows. Among the ruins. I break the ties. Who've been unkind. I feel like a great deal has been explained without much need for filler. Great choice of words. Great work.
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Review of A Question to God  
Review by Cali Falling
Rated: E | (4.0)
As a Christian, this was just a joy to read. I love to sit in my quiet chair with my coffee and talk to God in my spirit. That is where he talks to us, I feel; in our spirit.
A few more revisits for grammar or punctuation errors are needed if it is a care of yours to have that on point.
Lastly, the Lord is such a gentleman. Sometimes He is quiet when we want him to speak because his silence is part of the learning experience.
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Review by Cali Falling
Rated: E | (5.0)
Would this have worked without a rainbow of text color? Doubtful!! I'm curious as to whether the color choices were random for certain text or if the color has meaning to the lines they are in. A well deserved win for the contest it was entered in. There's so many questions that I do not even want answered because this was meant to inspire a dialogue. Well done!
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Review by Cali Falling
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A recurring problem with fan fiction is a lack of character development in the beginning of a story. The authors often forget that the reader may not have a clear understanding of the characters beforehand and something is left missing. This is not the case here, as you have clearly gone out of your way to develop these characters in a substantive way without taking up unnecessary space with it. Though there are many "side conversations" they do not come across as filler and serve to build the characters instead.
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