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Review of Alive Once More  

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
First of all, I would like to say that it is INCREDIBLY refreshing to find a Christian post online. Second, this poem is so good there’s hardly any room for improvement. The only thing I would suggest is in the 2nd stanza, line 3-
I think that to make this poem make the best sense of all, maybe that line should say something like,
“Outside. But stumbling to entry it is to me revealed”
I see no other ways to improve this poem! Great job, I love it!