This is just GREAT! Change man to woman, he to she and this essay describes me Perfectly! Favorite lines: "First beginning with you head in the book, then your hand on the paper, exploring what you see and what you think....Must explore places they can't be...Create places they can't be." Those words speak to my soul and touch my heart. PLEASE continue writing because you are really good at it! :)
This poem is SO true! No matter what you do to try to better yourself, someone's always gonna look down on you with disgust! I can relate to this and we Do have to turn the other cheek and keep moving forward. Because at the end of the day, life isn't about making other people happy, but about making Yourself happy! :)
Great poem! People with depression are never alone, and I liked how you expressed that even in your depressed state, you're still wanting for someone to see you through this. You really gave a voice of hope for all depressed people everywhere! :)
This poem is beautiful! I've felt this way from time to time and this story really shows that even though People aren't always there for us, GOD is! :)
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