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Review of The Jar Collector  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really really enjoyed the premise of this story. And the phrase "the jar his mother had given him" is so poignant.

The end feels a little rushed, and I would have enjoyed more details of what happened when the jars broke and how they broke.

What do you think of the idea of writing this in the first person?
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Review of The Hollow Pouch  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is rally well written and compelling. Your writing style, especially at the beginning, reminds me a bit of Stephen King - which I mean as the highest compliment.

I can see the being fleshed out into a longer story easily - and hope it is because I'd love to read it.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Super fun and very funny
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