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Review by Josh M. Cregger
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I realy liked this story. A very nice piece of work. I like how it is told through a Dracula like mishmash of storys and journals.

Good job, keep on writing
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Review by Josh M. Cregger
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Prety cool idea.... It looks like quite a active Campfire..... I was wondering if you could tell me how you join such campfires. I have been wondering that for a while (Actualy since I found out about campires..... :) I would love if you could help me fin out about this issue

Good Luck and Keep Writing!
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Review by Josh M. Cregger
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Very good. I liked the storyline and I like how you ised the promt very well. I think it could use some small tweeks to make the main charater sound less insane and more normal... For Instance, why would he not have duck tape? But other than that, a very good story!

Good Luck and keep on writing!

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