This was a beautiful story in a poem that I so enjoyed. Every line flowed for me until we got to this one:
She was confused and unsatisfied but did as she was told
One suggestion, if you take out and unsatisfied, I think the flow would be excellent. For this reader, if omitted it would only add to your poem and then it would receive the 5 stars this poem deserves. I would re-rate the poem. Of course this is only a suggestion and the decision is yours afterall it is your WRITE. Very beautifully written, I could visualize every line.