Awesome. I love this one. I wrote a poem called "whispers" that is a twin to this poem (read it when you get a chance". Great writing and flow is excellent, contents is awesome. WRITE-ON
What a wonderful story to share with us. Very well written and a wonderful testimony to Christ's divine healing. I was divinely healed this year as well. Thanks for sharing and may your story convince others. WRITE-ON
WOW! I got "chills" reading this. You summed it all up in this poem. How you beautifully described a winter storm just leaves me breathless. EXCELLENT! EXCELLENT! EXCELLENT! WRITE-ON
This is AWESOME. I love it. I sums up everything I feel about time. I wrote a poem called "Infinity" that deals with time as well (check it out when you have "time". Great writing. Write-On.
This is a wonderful poem. Watch out for typos it takes away from your wonderful writing, (suggestion: try spellcheck before or after publishing to site). You are a good writer. Write-On.
This is great writing. It gives a real description of ones life when they have given their all. I watched my mom go through similar. The contents is good, the writing is excellent, and I have no suggestions for improvement. I find it "excellent writing". Thanks for sharing and Write-On.
I love this! I grew up without a dad and found that my daddy was GOD so I can relate to this story. GOD has always and will always be there for me. Great writing, excellent storyline, good contents. Write-on and may you continue to write to change people lives for the good.
I like this. Excellent message. Well written. Only a little punctuation needed, and one typo to correct "mmy life" should be "my life", correct this and I think it will be perfect. Thanks for sharing.
This is such a wonderful story, well written. When I got to the end I wanted to read more. The closure was perfect. Great writing!! Thanks for sharing.
I love this piece of work. The contents and storyline is good. One suggestion, spell check your work before you publish, there are a few misspelled words and punctuation errors, that takes away from your perfect writing. Otherwise I love it. Write On. Thanks for sharing.
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