Nicely written poem. It is so good to know that God is with us always. You said it best in "My Saviour". Keep the pen to the paper and may God continue to bless you to write more of the same.
Beautifully written poem about friendship. It is a blessing to have a friendship that lasts. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us and may God continue to bless you to write more of the same.
Nice poem "Imagine" that I enjoyed. good rhyme and rhythm. A wonderful reflection of a special love shared in the past. The poem has a nice flow. Thanks so much for sharing this piece with us and may God bless you to continue to write more of the same.
Wow what an amazing poem about "Broken Promises". One that I really enjoyed. I wrote one called "Empty Promises". It is amazing how our poems are very similar with different words. Promises are made to be fulfilled and when they are not, it leave a void in your spirit. Thanks so much for sharing this one with us and may God continue to bless you to write more of the same. If you get a chance read "Empty Promises" in my port.
Wonderfully written poem. For Christ said, "I will never leave you, nor forsake you" and his promise hold true, even to this day. It is a wonderful relief to find out that he is still there. You said it all in this wonderfully written poem and I applaud all of your efforts in this write. Great rhythm and flow.
Interesting poem you wrote, one of which most of us have experienced in life. Rejection is growth and something that we learn from. You did a good job in this write with much expression.
The poem flowed well for me and the rhythm was good.
Thanks for sharing and may God continue to bless you to write more.
Wow, brilliant. This poem took me back to the cross. The famous last words of forgiveness. You were brilliant in this write. Much creativity and truth. God is so good.
Rhythm and rhyme excellent. The flowed was good throughout.
This is so beautifully written, the passion, the craze is deeply felt from the read. It actually takes me back in my past . Excellent penning you did here. Love is the key to so many open doors. Your poem is evident of its greatness.
You did an excellent job in this write and I look forward to reading more of your amazing work.
Amen, amen, amen. What a beautifully written poem "Grace". You did an excellent job in this write. The rhythm/rhyme is perfect , but the message is amazing.
My favorite part:
In hope my soul awaits the tomb.
Hope gestating in Heaven's womb.
This poem sings to me. I look forward to reading more. God bless.
A poem written from the heart with much expression. Although the poem needs work, the message is felt deeply by this reader. God bless you as you continue to remember the friend that meant a lot to you.
Very few words that says a lot, with much creativity used. Beautifully written. Thanks so much for sharing with us and may you continue to write more of the same to "awe" us. God bless.
Fantastic write, we must never forget the day that our lives changed forever. You said it all in this poem and justice will prevail long after others have forgotten, God will not. I still have a bitter taste in my mouth from 9/11. Thanks so much for reminding us.
Very nicely written poem about your Grandpa as I am sure he would love. I applaud your efforts in writing a poem about death in tribute to your grandpa. You did a good job and this reader encourages you to write more. God bless
A nice poem in tribute to a loved one with much emotions expressed in the loss. A loss that we all can relate to. Although, we are never prepared to except losing a loved one, the good memories of their life, certainly helps to soothe the hurt and pain in our hearts. God bless
This poem is so beautifully written that I had to pause and reflect on my journey in life. I really enjoyed.
I applaud all of your efforts in the write of this poem. I can feel the sense of wisdom, knowledge and understanding that you gained in crossing your rivers.
I look forward to reading more of your work. May God continue to bless you to write more to change people lives for the good.
Great job.
This is such a wonderful read, with awesome contents that I must say, I personally stand in agreement with you. God is so awesomely good, all of the time. The message is perfect and I personally find a lot of truth to the words that you penned.
I wanted to rate this message higher, but this is a r&r site that requires honest reviews and the only thing I could find wrong was punctuation, spelling, capitalizations and typos which prevents me from giving this read the 5.0 that it deserves.
I would like to suggest to you to revisit this write and make the necessary corrections and I would certainly re-rate at that time. If you choose not to the message is "awesome".
May God continue to bless you to write more of the same to change people lives for the good.
Wow this is a very deep and beautifully written poem that takes this reader's mind somewhere else. You used considerable creativity with this one that is definitely on another level. I love it.
May God continue to bless you to write more of the same to change people lives for the good.
Beautifully written poem that I so enjoyed. Romance is a wonderful emotion that fills your spirit when it is done from the heart. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful piece with us and May God continue to bless you to write more of the same to change people lives for the good.
God bless
TyKam
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. Excellent penning you did here. Love is the key to so many open doors. Your poem is evident of its greatness. 