Excellent read and very true content. You did a great job with this poem. The rhythm and flow is good. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with us and may God continue to bless you as you continue to write to inspire others.
Very sad but nice lyrics. You did a good job expressing in a song what a feeling of someone feeling very alone and depressed. I wished at the end it could have been a happy ending. A sad song but you did a great job in the write. Write on. God bless
Very nice intensed poem where a lot of emotions are felt throughout the poem. I especially enjoyed the ending of a "new outlook". You did a good job writing this poem. No suggestions as I feel you did a good job. May God continue to bless you as you continue to produce more of the same.
Harry this is a wonderful tribute of love for your wife. Wos, that is the way one should feel for his/her soulmate. And you said it all in this poem. Your wife is a very blessed woman to have experienced the very deep love that you described in your poem.
Excellent, excellent, excellent.
May God continue to bless you and Linda as you both continue to honor your commitment to each other.
I review your poem again and since changes were made to it, I think it deserves a higher rating. You did a good job. May God bless you as you continue to write to Glorify him. Bless you and write on.
Very nice poem and a true testimony of love. Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful poem with us and may God continue to bless you both in your journey of holy matrimony as one. Your love for him shines in your writing of this wonderful poem. God bless
Thank you for this article on rating and reviewing. I have found myself in a couple of scenarios that you listed above, now I have a solution. I enjoy this and respect the integrity of the site. I have made numerous friendships and my writing has improved immensely from the reviews given by honest reviewers. At the same time, I have chosen not to take some suggestions to make changes based on personal attachment. Nevertheless, constructive criticism is good as leads to perfection, in most cases.
You took me away with this beautifully written peaceful poem. I could actually see myself there sitting in fellowship with God's creation so peacefully. Wow. Nicely written. Thank you for sharing with us and may you continue to write more of the same that will take us away from our everyday struggles in life
Wow, I love this poem. I am fasinated with trees. I love the shape and form they take each season. The leaves that turn different colors for each season. It is so beautiful to watch their growth and see them come alive each season. You described them best in your poem. God bless.
Beautifully written poem. If we seek God that is all we need. He is our everything. He is our Father. Thank you for saying it all in this poem. God bless
Beautifully written tribute to our Father who is alway there for us no matter what, we can always count on him. For he said, "I will never leave you or forsake you". Those are the most powerful words to remember and you said them best in your poem. Keep writing to change people lives for the good.
A deeply felt poem written for your mother-in-law. I lost my mother in 1997 and while reading this poem, it certainly brought back memories of her. Thank you for sharing this piece with us. God bless.
This one is a winner. Without God we are already dead, but with him we have eternal life. I love this poem, because it shows the richness and wholeness one can receive with God in our lives. Thank you so much for writing this wonderful piece and may God continue to bless you to write to help others in their journey.
You are a fantastic writer.
Very lovely poem. It tells a wonderful story. Thanks so much for sharing with us and may God continue to bless you to write more of these beautiful poems. Write-on.
This review is on your beautiful sig above. I love the color and ohhhhh the horses are beautiful. The sig tells a story. Keep up the good work and may God continue to bless you.
What a beautiful poem describing Heaven. Every word in your poem actually takes the reader to the beautiful place you described, peaceful, serene, and beautiful.
This is a very deep poem. Even in its shortness the message is clear. It allows the reader to relate according to how their own personal way. Thanks so much for sharing with us and DO write-on. God bless.
You are so creative and these c-notes are very helpful and beautiful. I sent two out today. Thank you so much for sharing your creativity. May God continue to bless you as you continue to use your creativity to help to change people lives for the good.
TyKam
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