A Twist of Fate was reviewed by me because you requested. I must say that I enjoyed the overall read.
Structure/composition: You did a great job in composing this story from beginning to end. As I started to read I could actually visualize the events and characters in place.
Language/description: I liked how you described the intimacy between the two, not profound but enough to let the reader know what took place. Great job.
1st impression: Good
Style/grammer/spelling: great job, no mispelled words and correct usage of verbs in description for visual reading.
I like this very deep poem. The poem definitely creates mind provoking thoughts about chance. My mind was busy in a good way while reading this poem. Nicely written. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
Awesome. Thanks for sharing this with us. I really enjoyed the historical part of your site. I am a firm believer that history dictates our future. Thanks for the confirmation. May God continue to bless you to share this message. Bravo!
Very deep. I can relate because I lost my mom and had the same feelings. If we could start all over again wow.... But the good memories are forever and that is what we hold onto. Thanks for sharing this with us. Nicely and peacefully written. God bless.
Bravo, very beautifully written. I enjoyed every line of this peace. (It actually brought back memories for me). Thanks for sharing this one with us and Write-On. God bless.
I absolutely love this poem. What a wonderful tribute to aging. By the way, where did those days go (smile). I am sure a lot of people will find themselves somewhere in this poem. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing. Write on.
Awesome, I totally agree with this story. Life should be celebrated and remembered for the way it was lived. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Great points displayed. Write On.
This is a very deep visionary poem. It actually took me away in my mind. I love how you wrote this and now I understand your comments to me on "Reality". You are an incredible writer. Thanks for sharing Write-On.
This is a very deep poem! As a writer sometimes we tend to write and we understand what it is we are writing about and the meaning of its contents and we think others do as well. This poem for me, left me with a lot of questions in my mind that was not answered in your poem. One in particular "who is I?" I am sure in your mind you know, but it wasn't made clear in your poem. I think this poem's rating would improve if the poem contents was written more clearer. That is only my opinion, but in the end, "you are the writer and it is all about what you think". Thanks for sharing this one with us.
This is very nicely written. As I read it, this poem painted a beautiful picture in my mind and at the end left me with a "big sigh of peace" as I pictured the snow in my mind. Thanks for sharing. Write-on.
Very beautifully written. Nice flow and content. Considering that "faith is the substance of things unseen", this poem definitely reinforce its meaning. Thanks for the reminder. Thanks for sharing it with us. Write-On.
This was beautfully written. It brought memories of when I lost my mom. The flow was great and the message was awesome. I am sure this poem will help others as they deal with similar emotions. Great poem.
A wonderful tribute to your daughter. I love this poem and it was written with so much love. Very well written, with good flow, contents, and punctuation and grammar. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. Write-On.
I like this poem and it tells a story of many that fit this profile. Well written, sound message, flow is awesome. No suggestions, I think it is perfect. Thanks for sharing with us and may you continue to write to change people lives for the good! God bless
Great start. Left me wanting to read more. The plot is interesting and one that a lot of people can relate to. I look forward to reading more as you write. Thanks for sharing. Write on
I love this poem. I too think that eyes tells the story. Very well written with good flow and content.
Thanks so much for sharing with us and Write-On.
TyKam
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