This poem is wise beyond its meaning. I love how it speaks of God never leaving us because it is what he promised. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful piece with us and may you continue to write more of the same to inspire others.
Deep poem you wrote here with a few words. That's a lot of love and it is wonderful. God bless you and your and may you never find out what it is like to be "without him". A poem that I enjoyed. Keep the pen to the paper and may God continue to bless you to write more.
This is very beautifully written with truth. Thank you so much for reminding us of how things in our life is birthed and somethings die while another grows. It could not have been said any better than the words you choose to write. The flow was perfect and the message is incredible. Keep the pen to the paper! God bless
WOW, perfect but very sad. I had a lot of friends that experienced everything you wrote about. Such a waste of human lives for a war we should not have been involved in the first place. All the more reason, we should be careful of whom we vote for. Keep writing and telling the story and may continue to God bless you.
This is perfect and flawless. Thank you so much for sharing this awesome piece with us. You are a fantastic writer that I enjoy reading your work. God bless
Beautifully written with lots of underlying messages. This is a short poem with a big message that I felt with much power. The rhythm is great. Thanks for sharing with us and may God continue to bless you to write more of the same. Keep the pen to the paper and God bless.
Very well written. Your expression is flawless. Every stanza flowed perfectly and made me want to read more. The end left me dazed as I pictured the unknown place of serenity. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful piece and do continue to write more. God bless
What a wonderful tribute to your uncle. I am sure that he would be very proud of this wonderful piece that you wrote in his honor. So much love shown. Thanks for sharing with us and May God continue to bless you to write more.
Thank you so much for this article, that need to be heard worldwide. This is certainly a reminder of who we are and definitely as you stated where we need to return. Our country is certainly falling apart because we have somehow gotten severed from our roots. We will certainly not see a change until we undo what has been done to damage the blessings that God so graciously gave to America. I applaud your ability to write about it and it is so apparent that you did your research. Great job and may God continue to bless you to speak and write about "Christianity". God bless.
Wow! This poem captured my mind and spirit and the message is so clear. The poem is so deep that the reader can get many messages from the poem. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful piece. I think that this one deserves and award and I think I will give it the award it so deserves. God Bless
Bravo, Bravo, Bravo. This is excellent poem carries a message for a lot of people. A perfect write. I have no suggestion for improvement. None needed. God bless you for this write and may it change people lives for the good.
I love this poem, for it expresses truth. Thank you so much for all you said in this beautifully written poem is truth. May God continue to bless you to share more of the same.
Beautifully written poem about the unknown. This is a very mind boggling piece that takes your mind somewhere else. I enjoyed every aspect covered in this poem. You did a great job in the write and I look forward to reading more of your work. God bless
A nice tribute to your uncle. Although the poem did not rhyme and the flow was off somewhat, the message was awesome. I commend you for the write of a poem to someone as special as an uncle. God bless.
Wow. You said it all. You captured every bit of who GW is, in my eyes. For everything you said, I thought it. You have a way with words and you put the pen to the paper with truth. While it was kind of a long poem, I found myself wanting to read more. This is a very powerful poem that needs to be read by GW. God bless you for this write and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Beautifully written tribute to our Father. The rhythm and rhyme was perfect. The poem's flow was awesome. A very good write. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful piece with us and may God bless you to write more of the same to share with us. Write on!
Amen, amen, amen. This poem is written with truth. I applaud your efforts in writing this wonderful piece that so many needs to read, especially the politicians. The poem flowed well, the rhyme and rythmn was flawless. You did a great job in this write and I look forward to reading more.
I think this poem deserves an award. So look forward, one is forthcoming. God bless.
Nephews are special. You love them unconditionally. I have many nephews and I love them all. I can relate to this poem that you wrote about yours. May God bless you as you show you nephews much love.
Beautifully written story. The message is very clear to me and I certainly received it. God does speak to us in different ways and he reveals to us what is most important. I applaud your obedience in helping the church because if you had not you would not have experienced the message God had in store for you to share with us. Keep listening to his voice and your pen to the paper to share more wonderful stories like this one, that I so enjoyed. God bless.
A mothers love is awesome and you just demonstrated that in this wonderful tribute to your son. You did a great job in this write and showed much love. I applaud your efforts and as your son gets older this poem is something that he can reflect on later in life. God bless and write-on!
A poem to remember and should be shared with many. Good rhythm and rhyme and the flow was excellent. You said much in this poem and I think it should hang on every prison wall. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful write with us and may God bless you to write more of the same.
A wonderful write! Keep the pen to the paper..
TyKam
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