|Well, I don't know about reviewing but this is a great testimony, and to God be the Glory. I am so glad you found the Way. (No one Comes to the Father, but through me (Jesus Christ)). I personally did not find any errors of any kind. As far as punctuation, I guess I would put a comma in the first line after the word fix, and again in line 7, after the word times: "On this journey called life, I have fallen flat on my face many times, as we all do...". I think that is about all from me. I am very happy you found the 'writer' in you. This is a great piece of work. For a testimony, it is just about perfect. Well, maybe it is perfect. It is short, to the point, and clearly tells what the Christian message is about. Thank you for sharing. God Bless.