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Review of Is it Love?  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written, I like the way this makes me feel. I would have liked to see a little more of it but that is a good thing "always leave them wanting more" Keep writing
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice poem. really expresses the feeling of being with the one you love. I enjoyed this poem very much! Keep writing!
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Review of What is love?  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good poem. Has some great imagery in it. the flow is good. Keep writing.
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Review of finally in love  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a good poem. It flows nicely and expresses how we feel when we find love. Keep writing!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written, good flow.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Really good! I enjoyed it a lot! There are a couple of things I would recommend changing! the first is in the very first line I would change "If only you're my age" to if only you were my age. and the other is at the end of the second stanza I would add You and I are meant to be. and the last recommendation I have is in the second to last stanza the middle line would flow better if it was My peace to whom I shall find.
But all that being said it is really good and it is your work so be proud of it! Keep writing
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Review of Blown Mind  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have been there and never been able to put it into words like this! Keep writing!
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Review of Summer Kiss  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well written! I love the emotion showed in the story! I am a fan of kissing scenes and this was a good one! =D Thanks for sharing! Keep writing!
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Review of Warm Embrace  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautifully written! As someone who has been in that position, I can honestly say that this is exactly how it feels! It isn't an easy thing to describe but you did it well! thanks for sharing!
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Review of Ocean Boy  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really liked this. I felt like I was at the beach. Your meters made it feel like the waves of the ocean! =D Keep writing!
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