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Review of The Potter.  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear EOIWriting,
Thank you for requesting my review of your Poem, an Experience, created on August 14, 2018, .
At first, I had difficulty in reading your poem because there is no rhyme, and longer stanzas. I tried to capture your meaning and expression. After the third read, I did, but still with difficulty because stanzas were too long. Yet, your way of expressing it and the meaning in the end made me understand that not always things in our world and in the world are correct and the way we want it to be. In other words, if we attempt to change this and we are not successful, we try again and once more but if not granted our efforts, just walk away and let it be. That is what I understood and please let me know if I am right.
I would suggest to break your poem into 6 lines, the second/third line end with a comma, and the fifth/sixth line end with a period. I hope you can try and do this. It will be easier to read and follow your feelings in your poem.
My favorite part:
"To let its imperfections build up
until it crumbles to dust?
Do I keep trying to save it only
to turn into the cause
of its new damage?"
Thank you for letting me review your poem. Write on!
All my best,
Christina


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Review of Twenty Wishes  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
How beautiful my dear dear dear friend!I also want to go to Ireland and England - Stonehenge!
LOVE,
Christina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you my dear friend Elf Elle!
Christina Daltro
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Review of What I Did  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
LOVED IT! Hah Hah LAUGHED A LOT! Christina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
THANK YOU for featuring my story, Hitler Eats his Vegetables, in your awesome Newsletter, Elle. I was so proud!
Love,
Christina
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Review of Fingerprints 2  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dayo,
I really, really loved this poem...
Christina


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Dear Noyoki,

Please accept my review of your short story; Just a Little to the Left.
Things can change in an instant, sometimes in ways we can hardly believe.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I really, really enjoyed reading your story very, very much. Your writing style is catching, interesting and allows curiosity and attention from the reader. I loved it, congrats. Did you win the Writing Contest - The Writer’s Cramp 5th of February or is it still ongoing? You should have won --- or will!
I was impressed by the idea and how you made the boy/young man live through time, and be in the Twilight Zone, a Stephen King thing but in reality a Noyoki thing, with personality, softness yet strength, like a bolt of lightning. I learnt with you; great work.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.

Please correct/notice:
1. four year old Gareth = four-year-old or four-year old;
2. electricity shot though him = through

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on! Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
My dear Summer Wind,
As promised, here is my review of your inspirational short story:

Benny the Homeless Christmas Angel
A fantasy story of a homeless veteran receiving a Christmas miracle from an angel.

Your story is beautiful, inspiring and emotional. I loved each sentence, each paragraph, each word, but especially these parts, Summer Wind:
>>>and fire flickered in his ocean blue eyes covered with gold-rim spectacles;
>>>he commented flashing his heavenly eyes;
>>>radiant gold halos encircling their heads and tiny particles of glistening snow lying on the bottom of it.
>>>Then, snow flakes fluttered down from above like sparkling white powder, covering the group with a blanket of love.

WOW, Summer Wind, you are "showing" not telling, got it? You outgrew yourself - your great!
NO PROBLEMS with commas anymore or quotes. GOOD WORK. You don't need to ask me to read your stories in order to know why people aren't rating. them. The ratings will come, eventually, maybe the persons that read this story didn't quite understand your brilliant message. Do not worry anymore. Well done! I am so proud of you.
My prayers are with you, always, but you know that already.
Much love,
Christina
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Review of Pumpkin Eater  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Leeflan,

Please accept my review of your short story Pumpkin Eater.
There's something sinister about the pumpkin on the front porch of an abandoned home.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Your story was just great for the month of October, for Halloween, for the Horrorum, and for me! I liked it very much. Creative, interesting, and it caught me off guard inn the end, really. Good work Dark One! Your writing style flows easily and the reader --- wants to know more, your details, vivid. I was taken by your story!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: It is perfect.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work!

Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Dear DreamCatcher,

Please accept my review of your 2nd poem-- Relay for life
An encouraging poem I wrote for the Relay for Life to support those who have had cancer.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: A beautiful cry for help, for stopping cancer. LOVELY. I loved the colors, the words, the message! Creative and imaginative, and sweet. Good work. Why would people complain or ask about the colors? It's lovely and ads grace to your poem.

Dislikes: Good job!

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Dear Lady Fati,

Please accept my review of your MY FANTASTIC FANTASY ISLE
a dream of castle

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: That was really a fantastic dream, wasn't it? I liked the way you --- vividly --- described your dream, I could see it too. Great way of working, mastering the words. Good work, Lady Fati.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Dear Le Ann,

Please accept my review of your Project Phoenix: Prologue
Prologue to my pair of novels under the umbrella name Jealousy of the sun.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: EXCELLENT. WHAT A GREAT START. I liked the way you began your Prologue, and it kept my interest, and I wanted to know more. Is there more? What happened to her? Is she Crossing Over? Is she simply dying? What?

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me, on the contrary.

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Darekm,

Please accept my review of your Contest entry for Submissions.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I think it's a great opportunity for serious authors who want their Anthologies published; I would like to know if it's still open as I'd like to submit. I write Short stories from the dark side.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me. There should be more serious contests as this one.

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro
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Review of DOSE OF US  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Dear Gilbert,

Please accept my review of your campfire creative chapter A Dose of Us,

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I liked the idea, the poem-like structure and the meaning. I really liked it. Is it complete? Will there be more? My favorite part:

"someday,someone,somewhere will DISCOVER the FORTUNE in my CHEST"

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me. I just dropped by your Port and saw this, and liked it. Write on!

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro
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Review of A Life Unlived  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Dear Cat,

Please accept my review of your poem: A Life Unlived
See folder for entire rant. This is a piece of poetry I wrote when I was a teen.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: You wrote this deep, beautiful, sad but lovely poem when you were a teen? WOW! Continue writing on, dear Cat, you have the power within you. I loved it. My best part:

As lives are told
secrets begin to mold.

Dislikes: Simply ... great!

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Dear TruePath,

Please accept my review of your Muslims feel stigmatised in French vote
Muslims are not terrorists ... Terrorists are not muslims

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Well done, truePath, with your critique, cultural item. All must be seen, all must be said so that the world will change and evolve and not become hard and blindfold. I liked your story because it not only tells 'a truth' but it disclaims that we should not see people as religion or nationality but as souls of one world and one planet. Good work.

Dislikes: N/A

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I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Dear Susie,

Please accept my review of your The World Around Us
A collection of three short poems.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I enjoyed reading your three poems. They are light, sweet, maybe somehow sad ... but full of wishes and dreams. Well done. You rite well and the stanzas and rhyming is very, very good.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro
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Dear DANIELLIAN LETTER DOCTORATE SR

Please accept my review of yourGOD CAME RAY DANIEL! A MORT GAY TALE!!
How poor! A flash fiction in 800 words

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Every time I find one of your pieces to review I feel your energy and intelligence! This one is amazing. I like your style, flow and I especially like the Word Notes, it helps a lot and better gig in into your mind and story. I loved to read about DAniel and enjoyed your character. The last sentence was great. Write on!

Dislikes: NOthing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this site!
Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Maryann,
I am using this image (a lot) today, in the September Raid! I loved it!
Christina
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Review of Birthdays  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear ~A.J. Lyle,

Please accept my review of your poem: Birthdays
A poem I wrote for the Birthday Bash.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Oh my dear friend, what a lovely poem. I cried - maybe because all my loved ones are in Brazil (daughters, three grandchildren) and I cannot be with them all the time and on special events, especially birthdays. THey are growing older and so am I ... Your poem touched me deeply.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Surprise Gift  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Dear Just an Ordinary Jyo,

Please accept my review of your poem: Surprise Gift
A gift described in Swap quatrain. The unexpected always delights.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: How nicely (I know it's not easy) you wrote this poem! It is full oif joy and happiness. You made it sound real. I loved it. Good work. I love birthday parties, especially when it is about children. You did a good job here.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice:

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Seven Years  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Dear Wyn,

Please accept my review of your poem: Seven Years
A man and his wife on their seventh wedding anniversary.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Emotional and full of love, tenderness and reality. I was deeply moved by your words, feelings and poem. Thank you for sharing.

Dislikes: Perfect and emotional. Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Dear SHERRI RECOVERING ♥SP,

Please accept my review of your poem: MY MOTHER, MY ANGEL
A Birthday dedication to my beloved mother

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Dear Sherri, what a tender, loving and longing poem. I loved it. It made me cry but a cry of love, acceptance and understanding. It will take me some time to recover...

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me - lovely poem.

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Dear Itchy Water,
Please accept my review of your poem: A Memorable Birthday
A free verse poem about a birthday party.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Lovely! The poem, the stanzas, rhymes, tastes and noises. It was as if I was right there, and I wanted a piece of cake and a balloon. So nice!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me, on the contrary.

Please correct/notice: N/A

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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