|YOU HAVE BEEN REVIEWED BY A POWER REVIEWER!
Please accept my review of your short story; Just a Little to the Left.
Things can change in an instant, sometimes in ways we can hardly believe.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: I really, really enjoyed reading your story very, very much. Your writing style is catching, interesting and allows curiosity and attention from the reader. I loved it, congrats. Did you win the Writing Contest - The Writer’s Cramp 5th of February or is it still ongoing? You should have won --- or will!
I was impressed by the idea and how you made the boy/young man live through time, and be in the Twilight Zone, a Stephen King thing but in reality a Noyoki thing, with personality, softness yet strength, like a bolt of lightning. I learnt with you; great work.
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
1. four year old Gareth = four-year-old or four-year old;
2. electricity shot though him = through
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on! Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!
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