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Review of Savaged  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Misty Crade,
I read your Chapter 1 (Anger Issues: Ryan) and liked it very, very much. You have a good, mysterious plot and I feel that you are working out (based on Chapter One) the mystery involving the twin Werewolves - separated at birth, so tragically. I will follow your story: SAVAGED and think that you are doing a great work.
Your friend,
Christina Daltro
PLEASE CORRECT:
There seems to be a word missing in both sentences below:
1. Ryan turned over and saw this small, little girl sticking her chest out about as threading as a kitten.
2. Now he was I a real cage and they were closing in all too quickly.
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Review of Savaged  
for entry "Prologue" 
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear friend, dear Misty Crade,

I read your Prologue for Savaged as per your request (I was wondering why you trusted me with my review and opinion but was honored by it), and I must tell you that I enjoyed it very much. I was taken by the story and felt sorry for Daniella and her twins... but was curious about her life, her kidnapping and her naive acceptance of her fate. But, by becoming bold and decisive, she escaped only to be doomed by her courageous decision. Good plot, creative and interesting; mysterious. I am thinking now about baby number 1, hidden in a tree trunk and wondering what will happen to baby number 2. Good work, Misty Crade, you caught my attention here.

Please correct the following:

1. She did not stop though. She could not stop, even though her muscles ached and cried out for even a brief reprieve. >>> Two though, in the same line;
2. He raised his gu as she ran and took a shot.>>> gun;
3. Samson, never even looking into the rear-view mirror.{/left} >>> remove the.{/left.

Apart from this, excellent job. I will read Chapter one as soon as I can.
Always,
Christina Daltro
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Review of The Gleaner  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Dayo,

Please accept my review of your poem: The Gleaner
Edited version "He forages in the fields with birds and small animals for company.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I had to go to Google to check out what the word Gleaner meant and here is what I found:
Glean:   
1.to gather slowly and laboriously, bit by bit.
2.to gather (grain or the like) after the reapers or regular gatherers.
3.to learn, discover, or find out, usually little by little or slowly.
Interesting. I didn't know. Your poem is AMAZING. I really liked the way you made me follow his actions, thoughts, decisions. You really write well and empower meaning to words. Really nice, Dayo.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Give a space after the commas, here:
1. motive,to endure the chill;
2. fire,of dry animal dung.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of The Memory  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear ~The Squiggle~

Please accept my review of your poem: The Memory
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My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Wow! What a poem --- strong, deep and full of meaning. It hit me hard and I read it four times and still felt its power. Good job. You managed to describe your feeling perfectly.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: I was a little distracted by too many ......................

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Goodbyes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Leger~

Please accept my review of your poem: Goodbyes
What is there to say, after goodbye?

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: How did you do this? So nice! Twenty lines of emotion and perfection. I loved it!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me -- it's great!

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of A Letter  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear C. Door,

Please accept my review of your poem: A Letter
Writer's Cramp entry

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: A sweet, small poem full of meaning and softness. I really liked it. Did you win the contest with it? Really nice.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Ron B.,

Please accept my review of your: Three short stories (100w each)
Three short stories of approximatly 100 words each.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I really enjoyed reading your short stories, Ron, very much. They were well written an told stories of a million words! That's how I felt. Your stories were 100 words each (how did you do that, so well?) yet they were like a story: I saw the images in my mind and felt the feelings in my heart. Good work!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Mother Nature  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Thomas Seeker, my friend,

Please accept my review of your: Mother Nature
Is mother earth alive, and fighting for her life?

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I think this is the last of your items to review so i also think you should get ready and inspired and write more! All tour pieces are creative and great. I love reading your stories and thoughts and this one, Mother Nature might be the best one so far as it makes us become conscious of a subject that many people don't want to talk or read about. The issue is becoming bigger and bigger and we must save our environment for renewing and survival. Your piece makes us think about this.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me. Congrats!

Please correct/notice:

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of The Gift  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Thomas Seeker, dear friend,

Please accept my review of your: The Gift
A vision I had about finding my gift.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: This was inspiring and enlightening! Beautiful, Thomas, beautiful. While reading your words I kind of thought that your gift was --- life itself. Sometimes we do not see how gifted we are, how blessed we are to LIVE, breathe, walk, think, LOVE, be loved, create, invent, sleep and dream. You wrote a lovely piece that made me thin k that we must listen more to the world around us, look up to see the stars and clouds, observe the flowers and butterflies, and feel the strength of the rivers and oceans. You inspired me, my friend and you should write more -- teach more.
Great job!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me. Well done!

Please correct/notice:

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Chemical Reaction  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear

Please accept my review of your song/lyrics: Chemical Reaction
Lyrics that came to me on Valentines eve.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I wish I knew how to play the piano or the guitar and compose a song for your great lyrics! Really nice! I loved it!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: ... While searching for a Interaction... >>> should be ... for an interaction, right?

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Bricks  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Thomas Seeker,

Please accept my review of your story: Bricks
A symbolic story. Rebuilding and starting over.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I was powerfully taken by your words and story. It was as if it was written for me --- you see, I needed your words of force and
truth and the impact was immense. I stopped, sometimes, and read the sentences again because I had to digest thm and them remember them. You wrote Oh so well and the story and its meaning penetrated my heart, deep inside.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all. Well done.

Please correct/notice: There are so places that you need to give a space after some words or commas, please revise. Apart from that, your story is thumbs up!

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Renne,

Please accept my review of your poem: Lore of the Leprechaun
The beginning of the Leprechaun and his pot of gold.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Nice, sweet and nice! So... this is how it all started? I enjoyed the poem. Creative and maybe... true, right?

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice:

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Maggie,

Please accept my review of your poem: Do You Know What It Means To Be Irish?
Irish Poetry:Do You Know What It Means To Be Irish?

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I am sure that your poem was THE BEST ONE I read tonight! GOOD WORK, Maggie. I enjoyed each line and each feeling -- and wanted, if I could, write a poem and try to show you what it means to be Brazilian! I wanted to write (just as you did) about Brazil and its words, food and colors (we have green in our flag!) and the love dwells deep in our hearts when we are apart... See what you did to me with your sweet little poem? And, I'm not Irish! Maybe I'll catch a plane tomorrow and visit Ireland!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me!

Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected -- it's perfect!

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Review of My Irish Lass  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Brazky,

Please accept my review of your poem: My Irish Lass
Irish Love poetry

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I really enjoyed reading your sweet little love poem. Creative and nice -- you know how to use words and rhyme.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice:

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Pat Baker,

Please accept my review of your poem: My GGrandma's Irish Wedding Blessing
this is an irish blessing that my Great Grandmother used to say at weddings.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Hah! Really, really sweet and fun to read. Good writing. Creative and nice.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice:

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Cubby,

Please accept my review of your poem: A Pot of Gold (or 'Yellow'?)
You may not look at a 'Pot of Gold' the same after this limerick!

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I laughed and enjoyed your poem tonight! Really nice! Creative and funny; interesting and sweet. I liked it a lot.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice:

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear Feather Duster,

Please accept my review of your poem: Little Irish Kisses
In celebration of St. Patrick's Day, March 17 2005

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Amazing and sweet pom! Great work, Feather Duster! I enjoyed reading your poem tonight.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice:

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear humorous_sage,

Please accept my review of your poem: Good Old Saint Pat
On March 17, everyone's Irish

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Ohh that was so nice, my friend, really nice! I loved it; well done! I had fun reading it and so far, it's my favorite one!

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice:

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Arakun,
I couldn't wait... I had o read Chapter VI. I'll tell you, scary...and now, mysterious and sinister. What will happen to Melissa now? I feel as if the creature is hurting... mean but hurting deep inside. Am I right? Where is Rebecca? What happens now? When will you write Chapter VII? Will you let me know? GREAT WRITING, GREAT CHAPTER! I love the story!
Always, your number 1 fan,
Christina
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
OMG...!!! Wow. What will happen now? Was the house, Rebecca and the monster destroyed by the storm? Is Rebecca the monster or is the monster Rebecca? I'm so curious. You write so well. This is a good story, Arakun. Will it end in Chapter VI? I hope not--I love it. See in in Chapter VI!
Always,
GREAT CHAPTER!
Christina
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Arakun,
It's getting better each day... I wonder what is it that you have in your mind to WHAT that creature is... So, there are going to go back to the house... Oh no. Bad idea. But, thy must save Rebecca... Part 4 was really good. See you in the next Chapter! I want to know about the secrets... I like secrets.
Always,
Christina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Sum 1,

Please accept my review of your poem: The Wonder Of Winter
A rhyming acrostic about the wonder of winter, a Power Reviewers Group Contest entry

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: Your poem is extremely well written and the rhyming is perfect. You did so well. I admire your mind and the powerful usage of words.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me. Lovely! I loved visiting your Port.

Please correct/notice: It's perfect.

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Maryann,

Please accept my review of your On the Edge of a New Dawn
A lonely Dragon ponders his existence

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.

Likes: I loved to read the thoughts of this sweet yet lonely dragon and imagine where he was, how hew looked like and what happened to him... before. You wrote it so well, Maryann.

Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.

Please correct/notice: It's perfect. I was happy to discover this your piece of fantasy while investigating your Port!

I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done! Write on!
Thanks for all the fine reviews you do in WDC and the ones you did for me, my Senior Captain!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Arakun, dear friend,
I couldn't wait... I had to read Part 3 before going to bed. They did go to Savannah, Georgia. WOW! It is getting better and better---Melissa and Nathan meet the family, then, going to the cemetery, hearing the voice, the diary and its mysteries, the scent of lilacs, and now, the sister... humm, I am really curious. I really like your writing style and I like the story.
See you in Part 4.
Your friend,
Christina
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