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Review of Escape  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My dear SoCalScribe,

Please accept my review of your short story Escape
Freedom is almost within reach...
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Likes: I really enjoyed reading your short story and you kept me going, curious, eager to know what was going to happen and then... surprise! I loved it! I liked it when you wrote this:" Unfortunately, the dry wheat stalks were not kind to the boy, and one snapped as he moved over it." Nice, I could ... hear it! Then, this: "For the last time,” the man replied, “You’re taking a bath whether you like it or not! Why do you always have to make it so difficult?
The man’s son eventually gave up the fight and resigned to his fate."
And finally this part: "The man may have won this round... but tomorrow night would be another story."
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it is well written, interesting and funny.
I liked it that your "horror/scary" story had exactly 666 words!
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done. I hope to read more of your work again.
With admiration, much love,
Christina Daltro

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My dear Maryann,

Please accept my review of your poem Penelope, My Beloved Cat
This is a poem about the death of a beloved pet.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
Now I understand wht you liked my short story The Cat so much! You are a sweet, loving person that expresses your feelings for an animal, a loved pet, your cat, a little animal/human being. It brought tears to my eyes, Maryann. I had a dog, a black poodle and our bond was special. I lost her in Brasilia, Brazil. She must be living with somebody else that must love her just as I stil so. I know she is well. Your poem made mew think of Blackie and it warmed my heart.
Likes:
"By my side is where you prefer to be."
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it is well written and sincere and I could feel your sorrow.
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done. I hope to read more of your work again. Write on!
With admiration,
Christina Daltro

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Review of The Sea  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear WhoMe,

Please accept my review of your poem The Sea (Contest Entry)
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
I liked your poem a lot. I love the sea, looking at it from my balcony in Porto das Dunas, Northeast Brazil. I love to go to the beach and swim, feel the salty water while I swim... I think it's part of Brazilians - the ocean. I could feel your words and your happiness.
Likes:
"The ocean, the sea
she will be my home.
Her nets have been cast,
her waves I will roam." >>> LOVELY!
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it is well written and perfect. I heard your thoughts.
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done. I hope to read more of your work again. Write on!
With admiration,
Christina Daltro

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear YellowRose,
Please accept my review of your poem If Six Weeks Remains.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you - be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion for writing.
I really enjoyed reading your poem and sincerely had to rate it with a 5. I simply loved it!
Likes:It's sincere and sweet.
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected - it is well written; a perfect poem.
I am sending this review because I really liked your work. Well done. I liked the surreal picture in the end and it made the poem more emotional to me. I hope to read more of your work soon. Write on!
Christina Daltro
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Review of Love is Red  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Dear Tony,

Please accept my review of your poem Love is Red
My description of the color red (My mom's favorite!)
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I enjoyed reading your poem a lot! I love the color red, too, specially when it's a kiss or red roses!
Likes: My favorite sentence:" Love feels like a day with cake and lots of filling." Really nice, Tony.
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me. Really creative.
Observation: Please have a space between the first and second sentence.
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your work. Well done. Write on! You mom must be proud of your and of your poem!

Christina Daltro
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Review of Your Heart  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Lovely,

Please accept my review of your poem: Your Heart
Poetry, poem.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I enjoyed reading your poem a lot! It is well structure-based, really creative.
Likes: "Both your hearts in line. . . and everything is fine."
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me, really. Bravo!
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected.
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your work. Well done. Write on! I hope to read more of your work again! Congratulations!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Always Watching  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Halp,
Please accept my review of your poem Always Watching
(I envision the perfect woman - although it would be impossible for her to exist.)
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
Your poem is AMAZING! I have been reading and reviewing many poems lately and many of them were just words put into the keyboard but your poem, your thoughts, yyur words, they all made sense... in this awesome, deep, sad, emotional poem (told as a story) of passion and lost love, a love that is in heaven but that you treasure on earth. Beautiful!
Likes: All of it but specially this part:
"The Heavens will always be dark and eerie
Until then, lay your ears upon the ground
And listen carefully for the sound
Of my muzzled voice… or my shriek
Or the silence… of my heartbeat"
Wow!
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me at all. Well written. Creatine from beginning to end.
Please correct/notice: Nothing is to be corrected. I learned with you today, Halp.
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your poem. Write on! I hope to read more of your work again. Bring your words to life!
Christina Daltro

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Can-do, dear Ron,
I enjoyed reading your story/comedy Lee gets a new Laptop very much! It was witty, funny and I was curious to see what was going to happen to Lee. He sure does have a friend in Denny but this Denny guy is really something, huh? He knows exactly how women react! Some guy! Your story is well written and creative. Good work. I'll read more of your stories... tomorrow. It's late and I need to sleep - I was working hard on the WDC Power Reviewers Newbie Raid. I just wanted to read one of your stories and review it.
Please go through your story again and correct some spaces missing after or before commas; even periods, like these here: "money first ,then"; "to that.Lee", OK? Also you need to correct the a to at here: “ Yes, but you have to stay a my place for a week first." Apart from that it is a GREAT STORY! I loved it! Write on! Talk to you tomorrow!
Christina
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Review of My Husbend  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Dear Her Holiness,

Please accept my review of your short story My Husbend
Spiritual relationship with my husbend Eugenio Maria Giovanni Pacelli A.K.A Pope Pius XII
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I felt your sincere emotion in your writing but sometimes I was troubled if you really meant it or if you were writing a story - there is always a truth in what we write about, sometimes not, but this story troubled me. Yet, it is basically well expressed but there are some mistakes I'd like to point out so thast your piece can be much better and WDC readers can understand without having to stop reading because of the spelling mistakes. So, dear Her Holiness, please correct:
1. Husband, not husbend (or was it to be like this?);
2. Boyfriend,
3. Girlfriend,
4. Although not all though;
5. End with not and end in.
Apart from this it's alright and OK. Good luck with your writing and Write On! I hope I have helped you with curious your short story.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Just a Kid,

Please accept my review of your poem Sonnet to a Setwork
Just the product of being bored in class. We were reading Othello when I wrote this.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
Well, I must tell you, Just a Kid, you shouldn't get bored in class but you did get... inspired though because this is very well written. I see a great future... but please write your poems after class, alright? Promise me this or I won't review your poems/stories again!
Really awesome work!
Please correct: I found no mistakes. You really worked hard on this!
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your poem. Write on!

Christina Daltro
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Review of The Sorry Lover  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Dear tbakes94,

Please accept my review of your poem The Sorry Lover
The speaker of this poem is a man. Please let me know what you think.
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I liked your poem and felt sorry for this sorry lover that can't express his feelings for the loved one... but you did it for him, though. Really nice work.
My favorite part:
"Silence sells under two cents,
Only words make her believe."
This was so well written.
Please correct: Nothing is to be corrected.
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your poem, tbakes94. Write on! I hope to read more of your work again!
Christina Daltro

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Review of February  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Franci,

Please accept my review of your poem February
(A short piece I wrote for the 28 words contest.)
My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
Hey, Franci, that was really cute, sweet, nice and told really well in... 28 words! Good job! And I was having trouble writing for The Dialogue 500 (only dialogue, no he said, no she said) and then I read your 28-word poem... Wow! I won't complain anymore! You said it all in 28 words!
Write on! Let me know if you won! You sure will!
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your poem. Write on! I hope to read more of your work again!

Christina Daltro

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Dear designbykris,
Please accept my review of your story The Fate of Elizabeth
(contest entry: make the reader side with the world's worst female serial killer)

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
Since the very start, I couldn't stop reading about Elizabeth's story, her past, what made her kill virgins... really interesting and you kept me going. You followed the contest's promp completely and I wish you success. It is well written, creative and interesting.
Please correct:
1. beauty(pale skin and long black hair) helped. (a space is needed after beauty);
2. –It evolved. (a space before It).
I am sending you this review because I really enjoyed your story. I really wanted more. You could make this into a story, you know. Write on! I hope to read more of your work again!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Voices  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Dear Mr. Meltdown,

Please accept my review of your poem Voices
(This is my first one on this site. I hope everyone likes it. Let me know what you think.)

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am also learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I read your poem and I thought it was different and sincere. It was as if the voices you hear and write about are the voices you want to cry out; verbalize concerns. I understood many things and imagined hidden secrets.
Please correct and i to I; Ill to I'll; ill to I'll; Its to It's, cant to can't; dont to don't as it makes the reading interrupted - the reader cannot concentrate and becomes distracted by the lack of contractions. Apart from this, great read, really creative. Write on!

Christina Daltro

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Review of Bump' em Love  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear jpsmtl,
Please accept my review of your story Bump' em Love.
Contest entry. A story of a woman who finds love while playing an online game of Bump'em.

My review, thoughts and opinion are only to help you; be sure that I am learning from you, from your style, your creativity and from your passion.
I enjoyed reading your story very much. I was curious from the very start because I often wondered what made people spend long hours of their lives playing games and computers and hidding behind Avatars. Your story was fascinating. I never expected the ending, I thought Jack wouldn't like what he saw - a plump short woman... but maybe Jack saw through her, he saw her mind and smart opponent. A very interesting story, indeed, jpsmtl!
Congratulations! There are no mistakes, it is well written and curiously different from what I have read today. I hope to read more from you again.
Remember: Bring your words to life!
Christina Daltro

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Review of New Beginnings  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear CC,
Please accept my review of your story: New Beginnings - Jean must start over, without his love.
I must tell you - I loved it, honestly... but I wanted more, much more... it's just the beginning of something more, right?
My suggestions - because it is well written, sincere, full of sadness and real meaning (sometimes, when we are sad we write the most awesome pieces, I have, dear CC, especially one called Dear Me). So, here are my suggestions, please follow them, if you feel its right for you and your piece:
1. Instead of Other, for static item, put short story... and this will make you stronger and determined in writing MORe into your NEW story;
2. Write on!
3. Persevere, no matter what, express your thoughts into paper (or your keyboard);
4. Describe the characters - you, him, your friend, the first kiss, your innermost feeling, at the court house, the divorce, the first moment you met...
5. Please correct the space between "he has to ..." and "grow up";
6. Please put a period between "so bad" and "How...".
That's it! You are set to go - write the most amazing story now and... I'd like to be the first one to read it, again, CC!
Your new friend in WDC!
Christina Daltro

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Review of Stripes  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Dawn Light,

Ohh I loved your sweet, poignant and powerful little poem. It struck me deeply. Enjoyable, funny, sincere and so true! My favorite part: "Your smile and sparkle can't match my black stillettos..." Hah! Great! You said it so well. I also liked this part: " to run my Revlon red claws straight through your baby blues." Hah! Nice! Really creative.
Please accept my little but sincere review and be sure that I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work. You did good. Write on!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, my name is Christina Daltro and I will be reviewing your poem because I really enjoyed your work.
Poem: The Night That Surrounds
Favorite Part:
"Next to sun is moon
next to moon is night
night being the darkness
left with no protection."
Likes: The poem is beautiful. It is full of meaning and dreams. It is well written, deep and emotional. The second, third and fourth verses meant a lot to me but I thought the first verse was somehow complicated to understand.
Dislikes: Nothing disliked me.
Characters or images I liked: The night and the day; the day and the night...
Overall impressions of item: A lovely work of art put into words.
My reviews are honest, encouraging and respectful and express my sincere, overall impression for the improvement of your piece.
Christina
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
FANTASTIC, funny, witty and smart. I enjoyed it very much! I liked the way you made Moses travel to different countries and their reactions, in different cultures and accents. Really nice and crwative. I was wondering, while I read, how would it have been if you had decided to make him continue down from Mexico to South America and to Brazil, where I'm from, and how would you have set the conversation. I don't know much about poems and rhymes because writing poetry is quite a daunting task. Nice work! Christina Daltro
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Review of Tales of Terror  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great idea! I posted my story! Christina daltro
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes, I got it and I enjoyed this essay (or story) immensely. It was interesting and kept me going and going. I wanted more dialogue between Cue and Weh (or Yah). You made me go on a long journey from: Mount St. Helen, unread journals, astrology, mathematics, discoveries, Minutia, sub-atomic particles and quantum physics... all the way back to Bigfoot and Cue engaged in a conversation in the woods. Wow! Very nice. Really! Do you have more of these... mysterious essays? Christina Daltro
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I simply loved your story. Congratulations. It's well writtten, witty, funny, direct and sad, too. I wanted more but your ending was about right, I guess. I enjoyed the read and laughed when you wrote: 1."how silly my butt sticking out of the door must look" and 2. "That's fiber for you." Nice, really nice. Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I must confess that I am not very fond of poems but while searching for something nice to read before going to bed I found your Front Step Medittation - full of sorrow and wisdom and deep meaningful words. I especially liked this:
"The solution to this are the secrets kept
And the courage to heal from the rest."
Very nice. Christina Daltro
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed The Strange Creature. You wrote it well and you used the words and paragraphs in an interesting way. I still wanted more. It must have been difficult to write it, though. Isay that because I can only write short stories, narrative but never poems. So difficult. Nice work. Christina Daltro
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great! Here is my entry for the Absolute Monthly Horror Contest: for The Reading. I hope I did it right! Christina Daltro
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