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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.5)
SeanFear,

I enjoyed your poem, however the shorthand sentences left my read very choppy. It seems that if you made an attempt to go long hand your poem would be much more meaningful, and beautiful.

Its your poem and you can write it any way you want to. My review is my personal opinion.

Keep writing.

WriterChuck
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Review of VIQ  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (5.0)
Princette Pengthulu,

Nice poem filled with anticipation of the first notes. Its great to belong to a group that can harmonize and entertain.

Keep writing.

WriterChuck
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Review of Tomorrow  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (2.5)
Mindertwenty,

Tomorrow is so far away, but that seems like yesterday. A confusing sentence. The hours blur in what seems a minute, I need to slow time down. As a reader these two sentences seem to confuse instead of setting the stage for the rest of your poem. Try reading the poem out loud and listening to it for the first time, as the desired reader would.

Keep working on this as it is a good poem.

WriterChuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
S.z.Kamoonpuri,

Nice poem. Gods hand is busy painting his beautiful animals. He hides them in his flora to keep them safe. So thoughtful is he to protect them from the world.

Keep writing.

WriterChuck
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Review of Jesus Loves Me  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Lazy Writer,

Nice poem. Jesus loved us while we were yet still sinners. Through the times of our life, good or bad he loves us and guides He knows us, for we are his sheep. Fear not he will not let us stray to far.

Your poem was well written, keep writing.

WriterChuck.
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Review of MY WAY  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Monty,

Good poem and subject. Reviewing a piece can be a worthy task. Some authors of poetry purposely will not use any punctuation in their writing because in their view the rules don't apply to the art of poetry. I feel that punctuation gives the reader an insight to how the writer was feeling as they were writing the poem.

I enjoyed your piece, keep writing.

WriterChuck
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Review of " COME BACK"  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (5.0)
Netty,

great poem and subject. People forget America was established on God a gracious God. He has blessed this country far beyond all others, we have pushed God out of our schools and allowed the destruction of children as we stand knee deep in the blood of our unborn.

It is time that we fall on our knees and ask God's forgiveness.

WriterChuck

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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (5.0)
Redtowrite,

Good poem a great subject to expose. Your poem was honest and the effects of Alzheimer's is painful to watch a loved one go through. I can identify as I watched my mother go through this time of confusion and suffered the loss of who my mother really was.

She was in charge of admissions and records at Cal State Hayward, California at one time. In the end she sometimes had trouble recognizing me. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

WriterChuck

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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Drake,

Good poem, well written Haiku. We have a lot to think about in today's world.

WriterChuck
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Review of alone  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Chris Breva,

This poem is truthful in that there wont be any hugs from those who still enjoy health. Sad for those who died in nursing homes, as they died alone.

WriterChuck
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Review of Tiny Dancers  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hunter'sMoon,

Nice work. Good poem, rhyme and meter. This poem is also visual as I read I could also see the delicate dance in the wind. Good job. Keep writing.

WriterGhuck
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Review of Admonitions  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
HuntersMoon,

Good poem, well written. Your warning is clear; thank you. If we heed what good is it when countries like China pay no attention? It seems as science is pushing an agenda of its own. Do what you can, don't worry about what you can't change. Check the temps on your own, don't take the word of past vice presidents. Its up to you, there's more to life than what you hear.

Just my opinion.

WrierChuck
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Review of Evening Thoughts  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Norman,

Good poem, far away thoughts. Maybe just maybe our existence is just floating in space. A thought to explore. After dinner.

WriterChuck
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Review of A Short Ride  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (5.0)
NordicNoir,

Good write. Rhyme and meter well done.

I enjoyed it.

WriterChuck
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Review of No One  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Tadpole 1,

Good poem. Well written. I could feel her loneliness.

In The third stanza you wrote "Her mailbox is packed as always, and bills and flyers clutter it. It seemed to me the first use of the word and was not needed. The sentence work well with just the second and.

again I enjoyed the poem very much. Keep writing.
WriterChuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
S.z.Kamoonpuri,

Very nice poem. Good rhyme. Cute phrasing. I also have a cat, Her name is Sassy girl. She is a loving cat that spends hours in my lap.

WriterChuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Tim Chiu,

Very good. I enjoyed your poem and also love paying the balance of each and every card. Good rhyme and meter.
very well written.

Keep writing.

WriterChuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (5.0)
Pony Tale,

Great poem. Good rhythm and meter. A good description of the man you are looking for. Your use of brand words for his bit and bridle and of course the saddle soap demonstrates your familiarity with being around horses is all about.

I enjoyed the poem as it was well written. Keep writing.

WriterChuck
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Review of Since You've Gone  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Tinker,

Good poem, familiar subject. Left alone. To those left alone it is but a season, a chance to find another. I like the idea of the first and last line of the stanza wrap.

Good job keep writing.

WriterChuck
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Review of The Word Smith  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (5.0)
Robert Hayes,

Great poem. Very well written. Words from the heart that reach out and have the power to hold another heart captive.

Good job, good write.

WriterChuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.5)
JM jr.,

Good poem and time is a great subject to write about. The only thing I don't like to see is a lack of punctuation. Some think because they are writing a poem that it's not needed. The punctuation is not so much for the writer, but for the reader. It is a way to inject your feelings about the subject your writing about.

O well enough said it is your poem; do as you please.

WriterChuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (1.5)
Tabby,

I' not sure if your poem is a story with a beginning or an ending. It seems like one long sentence, with only one comma for it's total punctuation.

WriterChuck
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Review of Ocean Boy  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
writerpenman,

Nice poem, good subject. Your piece seemed to capture the boy lost in his imaginary world complete with beautiful castles and kings. Wonderful childhood memories of the beach.

Keep writing.

WriterChuck
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Review of Bounding Main  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Blue Carrisole,

Good poem, and subject. good meter and rhyme. well written.

WriterChuck
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Review of "When I COME"  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Netty,

Good poem and great subject. Christ promises to come back for his people. He will give us a crown of life. Just one of his promises.

It looks like you were a little rushed here as I think you made a mistake in the third sentence. In the fifth sentence there seems to be a problem also. I think you would have found these mistakes if you would proof read out loud before posting your piece.

Keep writing, yourwork is important. Good job Netty.

WriterChuck

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