|Oh my goodness!!!! Dear Sir, please, you do not have to pay Gift points to others here to read your awesome writings!!! This was to say the least, and in my grand-children's words..." Off The Chain!!!" What an amazing story that you tell here. You pulled me right into this story. Believe me when I say...I am a hard sell on reading stories here, and it has to grab me right away for me to finish a story, but dear man, you have a master-piece here! I would like to know when the next chapter comes out if you don't mind, because you can't tell me this isn't going to become a book right? This one just has to be a book. My Mother and I used to have this game that we played when she was alive, which she won a lot. We would challenge each other to see how close we both paid attention to detail in the story and to see if we could solve the ending before we got to the end of reading it. She won 60% of the time, she was very good. We would do this with Stephen King Novels, Mary Higgins Clarke, and her sister's books as well, Dean Koontz. That was just a few to name that we would play this game with each other, always going out to buy their latest book to keep the game going. By the time that she passed, she was up to reading and memorizing eight books in one weeks time. She was good. She won in the end because I just could not keep up with her in the amount of reading material that she did.
I honestly didn't see the ending coming in this story. I thought when they found the old truck, and then the old winnie of where he was staying, I thought, okay, he will not be there at all but have her in the woods somewhere, then when Roger peeked inside of what he could see, and it was the legs and bare feet of a young person, I then thought again, she was going to be dead, (Mom would love this part, Wrong again!!!) ...Then after the guns and fighting, and Roger was able to actually go inside of the rat infested place, and not only find her but two more??? Really?!?!?!?! All the same age, in different stages of undress...Nope! I certainly didn't see this one coming! You got me, blind sided me when I wasn't looking, Wonderful story, and I am looking forward to reading more in this series if you plan on doing more to add to this one, you just have too. Come on, base the story on cases about Roger ya know? Fantastic!!! Very well done, well written and overall a great read. I saw no errors in anything that I read. ( I am dyslexic, so I cannot for the most part see the grammar error's if any when you write, I can't help on that score, but from what I see...you really do not need any help in your writings.) I will most certainly be back to read more of your writings. so I will put you on my book marks to easily find you again. Many blessings,
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