Every expression is so touching，balanced and complete. The word choosing is also very appropriate and decent. From the words, I can feel a gentle, kind and caring soul. No such words can campare with the lines left by an affectionate heart and the perceving eyes.
It is a clean and skillful story.The development of the story is natural,and the words are also concise and powerful enough to depict a clear picture in readers' mind. Armando is a generous, frank and lovable person. He was unsatisfied with the Cuban government, and he was a simple person who never tried to hide his complaints, but actually he showed deep sympathy for his Cuban friends and relatives, and he was also willing to help others with what he could. Armando was a interesting person.
Congratulations for the liberation in the end. It is true that we value too much on the things means little to us and neglect too much that really matters to us. It seems that as a man lives he will never find the ultimate liberation desired. Children has children's restrictions, young people has young people's restrictions, and old people has old people's restrictions.
Thank you for your essay which reminds me to consider life again. It is true that we never know when will we die or in what a way we die. It is lucky that one knows it in advance and is ready for it. This are also some who died without any idea of it in a sudden way. If we die, what will the world become and if we live, what the world will become. We all can guess some of this result. What the world means to our existence and what our existence means to the world should also be think about. It seems that we always put to much attention on the things that mean nothing to us and neglect the things that is mattered to us.
It is a very moving poem,and I like it very much. I can feel the love and care that person gave you as well as your deep love and gratitude for that person.
I think it is better to be ended with "When I asked, “Do you feel my love”YOU STRETCHED OUT YOUR ARMS AND DIED!
It is a very warm and delicate writing, and it is logically and personally organized and expressed and I can feel the real scenes as well as the the present and the past conflicting on you. I was totally engrossed in the story and can share the keen aspiration for the purse, the hard reality that Tony sensed, and the unexpected surprise at the end of this story. A a very happy and warm ending.
I think when the sister said“I don’t need to know anything other than you lied. You kept me from Jerry when he needed me most.”, she should be chocked, and hate her brother and she will never forgive her brother, because she missed the most most important chance that she will never bear to miss.
You are a person who lives with 100 percent effort, so you will surely make a lot of progress in your life. I can feel your sincerity in each word of your letter, and wish you good luck every day.
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