Chris M's (cm1966) Reviews

Chris M

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#4089144

Review of Truman's Story Chapter 2

Review by Chris M

Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

What a cliffhanger!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

One question, if Truman's falling out of the building, which is hovering above the Earth, why is the building falling further and further away from him? Isn't he falling further and further away from it? Or is it just a matter of perspective?

:)

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#4079234

Review of Truman's Story Chapter 1

Review by Chris M

Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

Intriguing! I want to read more! Quirky, funny, mysterious! A good start to an interesting sounding story! But did you have to kill off the Sylph?? Poor thing! :) never mind, I suppose it's all part of the plot development.
Can't wait to read more of this, well done!!

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#4078652

Review of A Promise of Intimacy

Review by Chris M

Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

Well I didn't expect that end! What a twist! Well written.