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An explanation and synopsis of bipolar disorder, possible causes, relevant characteristics of the disease, and available treatment options along with warnings regarding some. This is one of the most informative articles I have read on the subject. (And believe me, I've read a lot of them.)
What I liked
I found this to be very thorough in describing the major issues of bipolar sufferers and reasonable direction is given to point a sufferer in a hopefully helpful direction. The section on famous people was interesting as well. I actually learned something.
What Needs Improvement
As far as the subject matter, I think this is very good. Technically, it needs some work, specifically, some overlong sentences, places with extra spacing that is distracting, and some other small errors.
and finally, examine into it’s supposed link with artistic creativity. -- doesn't need 'into'
and loose or gain a significant amount of weight -- 'lose'
steroid cortisone or other antidepressants -- take out 'other' I don't think steroids are antidepressants, too.
Tracking down these genes -- is the befinning of a very long convoluted sentence, consider revising for conciseness.
individual is quite likely to loose the awareness-- lose
musical tools, moving back and fourth -- 'forth'
Cobains’ -- Cobain's
While it is true that this was possibly due to his drug abuse that brought about his untimely passing, -- Huh? Consider revising, I had to read a few times before I got the intended meaning.
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