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Review of Unexpected Grace  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Skye:
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Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 06/28/17

Wow!
This has pow.
This has so much know how.
This is a sensory symphony, and you pluck the strings with such skill.
The rhyme scheme alone is top drawer and lends a smooth flow to this piece. A melodic flow that leads the reader to a sense of peace.
The pace is slow as it should be.
There is no evidence of any grammatical snafu's along the way therefore no suggestions for improvement are necessary here.
Thanks for sharing in the WdC!
Write on!
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Susan:
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 06/28/17
I almost want to sing this. It has such a cadence to it.
The rhythm is so natural and the flow is so smooth.
The rhyming is loose and yet fits so well.
The imagery lends vision to the eyes of the reader.
Emotionally there is a sense of revolution and of acceptance of the roles played throughout the life cycle.
The flow is as smooth as silk.
The pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically, nary a jot nor tittle has gone awry.
No suggestions for improvement are necessary here, for you have created just what your heart set out to say.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Jessica:

Your book is featured in the Spiritual Newsletter 06-28-17.
Praying the book is selling well and that you are hearing positive feedback from it's buyers.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I found your piece in the Read a Newbie header on the right hand side of the page. It's free exposure for your works and the resulting reviews are mostly encouraging and meant to help you along the way in your writing skills.
First of all, I'm sorry for your loss. I cannot be a father because my wife is not able to have babies due to multiple maladies. It makes me even more sad when I read of a loss.
Thank you for sharing this story of your visit to a specialist after Abbie passed away. In this story there is much emotion and the reader cannot help but choke up and become emotional. That's imagery that brings a "tale" to life, one the reader has to read from beginning to end.
The form and structure are solidly formed and well thought out. Paragraphs not too long, nor too short, just right for the reader to have time to digest and move on to the next part.
The flow is as smooth as a gently flow stream.
This is enhanced by an incredibly grammatical snafu free rendering.
The pace is slow and detail filled. The reader loses no interest in the story along the way.
No suggestions for improvement are needed here and thank you so much for sharing in the WdC.
Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Celebrate!
It appears a goal has been met and it's time to celebrate. That is the emotional feeling I get from this piece. Your imagery draws this out.
The form and structure are status quo.
The prosaic nature is appropriate for the piece involved.
The flow is smooth and easy going.
The pace is nice and easy, with no hurry to get to the end. It just arrives and the reader is satisfied with the trip from top to bottom.
Grammatically clean and polished, your piece requires not suggestions for improvement.

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Review of The Tree Sap  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A sappy beginning and a successful outing to obtain that sappy substance that is "golden".
The form and structure is poetic in nature but also sounds just like a story you are telling for the reader to see in your imagery.
The reader can almost see the sap going into the container and the lid securely fastened for the return trip to their home.
The flow is smooth and has a melodic timber to it. It's almost like a ballad you sing in tribute to the tree that yields it's sap for those who need it so.
The pace is slow and steady on, as the reader drinks in the scenery you do display and samples the sap that is the intended goal.
Grammatically speaking, your pristine piece is a gem, a golden nugget of sappy good story telling.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am among those who slow down during the rainy, snow, sleet when I have to be out there in the midst of weather.
They can honk at me all they want, I want to arrive safely and not at a hospital in traction or worse.
The reader can feel the emotion of frustration as you describe the conditions and the actions of your fellow motorists on the street.
The form and structure is awesome.
The flow is smooth and the pace is not too fast, or too slow. Just enough momentum to keep the reader interested in the tale you do tell in a poem of so few lines.
Grammatically speaking you have a nice clean piece.
No suggestions for improvement can be made as you have said all you need to say in a well thought out way.

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Review of My Inner Mare  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As promised, I did come back to look at your Inner Mare.
It sounds like you might be a horse whisperer, applying what you've learned in therapy and helping improve the well being of the horses as well. Very admirable and thanks for showing your love of horses.

There is emotion that comes through your imagery and I think it is contentment, knowing that you are learning more about the horses and about yourself as well.
The form and structure is as solid as the ground upon which you ride your horses.
The flow is as smooth as the gait that the two of you are comfortable at.
The pace is a slow as a canter and at places speeds up a tad bit to a gait a little wider.
Grammatically speaking you have a strong, clean as a whistle piece, that enhances the smooth flow along the way.

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Review of All Or None  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Striver:
I found this through the read and review. it's a good story of love lost, anger, and finally reconciliation. That's imagery and real emotion that keeps the readers attention.
Inquiring minds want to know, will there be a yes in the next edition of this love story.
It was cool that you showed the powers that she and he had. You did a good job introducing that part of the story and continuing toward the conclusion.
The form and structure is rock solid.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by the absence of grammatical snafu's.
The pace is slow and steady, with just enough peppered in to keep the reader wanting more.
No suggestions for improvement are needed here, you did a fine job and who knows what further adventures coming our way.

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Review of Valentine Flight  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your imagery transports the reader into the story.
The flight in your dreams, the times on the picnic table and more, all familiar to the readers imaginings and real life experiences.
There is much emotion in this piece and the reader can feel it all. In the end the reader is exhausted and happy for the chance to have been taken on a flight with Valentine as the pilot. Awesome sensations and wording to bring it all to life.
In a form and structure that is natural and flowing smoothly, enhanced by the absence of any discernible grammatical snafu's. Hey not even a jot nor tittle has gone awry.
All this at a rocket pace that doesn't seem that fast at all. Overall impression is that lover of horses has enraptured the reader with that same affection for the 4 legged steeds.
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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "3 - Departure" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The flow is amazing. The action and brief moments of pause are so well navigated. The reader is more and more into the story and there is a sense of knowing that's next and the title "Voice of the Enemy" beckons the reader to continue the story of the second meeting of the leader of the enemy and the "presumed lone survivor of the massacred village."
The emotion in this is real and the reader can feel the sadness, the pain, and the fear in such a real way.
The form and structure are well laid out and the separations with the illustrative sword give the reader a moment to collect their thoughts before continuing on to the next chapter in this enrapturing story that is unfolding before the readers eyes.
Amazingly this piece is grammatically clear and you are encouraged to,
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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "2 - Dark Clouds" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The story is intense. Chapter 2 picks up where Chapter 1 left off and takes little time before the action picks up.
The reader is caught up in the intensity of the scenes you do pepper throughout this chapter. There is room to pause and reflect, but for the most part the action scenes are rapid fire and emotionally charged.
The Shakaree son's meeting with his father was one of a military official being ushered in to see the general for some unknown reason. Then the purpose is revealed and it's off to the races.
The segue into the other players in the war that has been going on for what seems like decades, is smooth and the character is beginning to take shape.
The reader is impressed with this chapter on several levels.
The emotion, the imagery, the "author" in crisis with what appears the death of "the girl".
The flow is smooth and the pace is slow as there is much to absorb and consider from scene to scene.
One thing this reader noticed is that the chapter is not overly long; and that's a good thing. Some chapters are so tremendously long that the reader feels like he/she is getting bogged down in the action.
Grammatically speaking you have a pristine piece and this reader honestly sees no suggestions for improvement in this chapter. Here's to more chapters to read in the future!

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Review of Forbidden  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Purple:
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I found your piece in the Noticing Newbies NL 5-31-17.
You have a good prose poem.
The first stanza is a little long but it doesn't take away from what is being conveyed here.
Forbidden love. Oh the sadness, the loss, the sense of not fitting in.
The flow here is smooth and the pace is slow as the reader soaks in what is being said.
Grammatically speaking there are no visible missteps that creates any stumbling blocks along the way.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Michelle:
Thanks for hanging out with the WdC.
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 5-31-17.
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You have a good story here. There is alarm at first which gets the readers attention. You have a child injured and possibly dying (tugging at the heart string), and you have a heroin who can transform into animals and finds the child in time to heal for the most part and get it to others who would help out.
The form and structure is good to see.
The flow is smooth which enhances the reading experience.
The pace is medium. Things are moving along but not at a break neck speed. The reader is content to follow along and feels happy in the end that the child is being cared for.
There are no visible grammatical snafus and therefore no need to make any suggestions for improvement.
You have a complete story and one that you can use to launch from for a second installment to the story.
Write on!
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Review of I love you  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Writing 81:
Welcome to the WdC!
So glad you've landed here and praying your stay will be progressive, and helpful to yourself and others.
I found your poem in the Poetry Newsletter 05-31-17.
This is a poem about love that outlasts the fights, arguments, and uncomfortable times.
That's love that is lasting and rare in the world in which we live.
The form and structure is uniform and gives the reader time to go from stanza to stanza. Learning as they go the love of your life and your commitment to the relationship.
The dominant emotion; therefore is love. One so many can identify with.
The flow is smooth and it's awesome to see that no grammatical snafu's are hanging about. The pace is slow and yet not too slow for the reader to get bogged down.
Overall I feel this is a well organized, written, and organized poem. Thank you so much for being with the WdC.
Write on!
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Review of A Winter's Kiss  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Lifelessons:
Glad to see that someone else graced your piece with a ribbon. It's certainly worth it.
Your piece is in the Poetry Newsletter 5-31-17.
Reading this from beginning to end I get a sense of a love story being told about a wintry kiss found outside your window.
The cover image is awesome. It adds to the "chilling" aspect of the tale you do weave.
Nature has put it's footprint on the surface and it draws from you a poetic response that you now share with us.
The flow is smooth and there is no evidence of any grammatical snafu's to slow the reader down.
The pace is slow and chillingly gives the reader a sense of rest after a long storm. Don't know why I said that but it fits the piece.
Write on!
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Review of Springtime  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Elizabeth:
Found your piece in the poetry Newsletter 5-31-17.
First impression: I love acrostics and when it's about Spring, or other seasons, I know it's going to be filled with imagery. Your piece does that with your verbiage.
Form and structure are well planned, it's good to be able to see the words Spring Time from top to bottom.
Flow is so smooth, you do a wonderful job with a grammatically snafu free outing.
Overall impression: I feel at peace. That is the emotional tag your words do illicit.
Write on!
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Review of " Reflections "  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Finch:
I found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 5-31-17.
And I'm glad I did.
Within this piece I find peace. I find ease. I find rest. I see life floating by and soaring high above.
Within this piece I see the world around you and that's imagery that sticks with a reader, leading them further down the stanzas, until at last the end is reached.
Rhyming scheme is superb,so well timed and formed that the reader is led with ease to the conclusion you lay out before us.
The flow is smooth and the pace is slow because the reader want's the trip to last.
The absence of even a jot or tittle going awry is icing on the cake.
Write on!
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Review of Little Brook  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Espero; in the Spanish means wait; and in this poem found in Poetry Newsletter 5-31-17, you make the reader wait through a marvelous journey that the little stream is taking until at last there is freedom.
Excellent rhyming gives this piece a sing song feeling.
There are emotional tags all about, which the reader can identify with. The determination of the stream to flow finally ends in success.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow.
The absence of any grammatical snafu's is evidence that you are investing the time needed to ensure the reader has a pleasant read.
Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dave:
Found your piece in the Poetry Newsletter 5-31-17.
What an awesome web you do weave.
Getting the readers attention and bringing down the whammy of greedy people messing up the land and the nature that is still so needed.
The form and structure is pleasant to the eye.
The flow is good and enhanced by the absence of any discernible grammatical snafu's.
The pace is slow which gives the reader the time needed to see the imagery you so deftly intertwine here.
Well done and thanks for being in the WdC.
Copenator out!
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Review of Tulips  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey O'Toole:
Found your piece in the Spiritual NL 05-31-17.

Absolutely marvelous!
Down right wowsa worthy!
Easily a piece of all times.
A relaxing and peaceful essence exudes this piece.
The form and structure adheres to the form chosen.
The rhyming within lends the piece with a sense of peace and a smooth flow.
The pace is slow as the reader soaks in the peaceful terrain you do lay before us.
Write on!
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Review of I pray  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Daniel:
Welcome to the WdC.
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I found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 5-31-17.
Your all encompassing prayer is inspiring.
The form is consistent throughout and this contributes to the smooth flow that you have going on here.
The pace is slow and rightly so. The reader feels the emotion; care, concern, and encouragement; joining in with the prayer for the "nameless".
The absence of any grammatical snafu's along the way means no suggestions for improvement are needed here.
Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your word search for the WdC's sixteenth birthday intrigued me so I jumped right in thinking it would be a quick mental exercise about many of the parts that make up the WdC.
Well it was just that; a mental exercise; thanks to the words you provided and the way they were hidden so well within the jumble of letters that created the words you see as a part of the fabric of the WdC.
As a part of your pacakge win an acrostic is your for the offering. You can use your handle, your first name, or the name of a loved one who has a special occasion coming up.
The other part of the package includes 10 reviews and awardicon for the best of the 10 items I review.
I liked your presentation of this Word Search.
Your love for the site is evident in the description you provide.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by the flawless grammatical offering you do submit. It's that attention to detail that gives the reader a good journey as they explore your introduction.
The pace is slow and detail filled, and this writer has no recommendations for improving that part of the item; nor for the words you provided.
All very well done and that's the truth.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
ruwth is an amazing lady.
Known her for a long time here in the WdC.
I like the simplicity of this signature and the fact that it's for Simply Positive makes it even better in my books.
SP is one of the first groups that reviewed some of my earlier stuff and I consider it an honor to continue Sherry's legacy of spreading Positive Reviews here in the WdC.
I associate reviews with them on a regular basis and have no plans to stop the tradition.

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Review of Head Games - FF  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Did not expect that twist in the end.
Medusa's head. Surely Alan and Zach are now no more. Hey who get's the money? Perhaps you have enough unanswered questions to expand on the story in a part 2.
This reader was curious and sure enough there is a Perseus. Was that part of the prompt or is your intellect showing here? Mythology and humanity once again woven into a tale that piques the readers interest throughout the tale.

The form and structure are prominently aligned.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by your always pristine grammatical offering.
The emotions in this are fear, happiness, and then fear again if indeed Medusa did meet them when the package was opened.
Pace is slow, don't you know.
Might I be so bold as to suggest looking at this again and considering part 2. Really this piece is indeed ripe for further details to continue the tale onward and upward.

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Copenator out!
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