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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I am free!
I've not had a countdown in decades.
I've passed up a milestone or two along they way,
but no counting down until the event occurs.
I liked your take on the Final Countdown.
It's well rounded and numerically aesthetic.
Who doesn't love numbers?
The flow is smooth.
There is a sense of urgency in this piece, in some places and then a sense of why bother. The reader can identify with both emotional tags.
Here's to deciding which countdown to tackle and sticking with it.
The pace is mixed depending on where the reader is in the piece.
Grammatically no super visible snafu's are detected which is one reason why the piece flows so well.
Thanks for sharing you take on the challenge and
Write on!
Copenator out!
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77
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You were truly inspired by the song.
It touched your soul and you extracted a song in response.
The reader is forced to look within as well and he/she may not like what they see.
Fear, uncertainty, and in the end hope is found and the reader sees it all.
The form and structure are rock solid.
The flow is smooth, thanks to your flawless rhyming scheme.
The pace is slow, and rightly so, because you give the reader much to chew on.
Upon scouring your rendition, one is unable to find any obvious grammatical snafu's and no suggestions for improvement could possibly be made by the writer.
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Copenator out!
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78
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Flawless!
Perfection in so few lines.
I've rarely seen such, and rarely use perfect.
But this is perfect!
You blow the readers mind.
There is emotional value the reader can identify with.
The rhyming is to the moon. This is a song that any good singer can carry a tune to.
The flow is silky smooth.
The pace is slow and rightly so as the reader is carried through the piece on a sensory filled roller coaster ride.
There isn't even a hint of a grammatical snafu.
Nary a suggestion for improvement can be made because it's perfection scribbled upon the paper.
Congratulations on your win and here's to other accolades for your foray into the romantic world of love.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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79
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a good POV story from the second in commands eyes. Glad to see that you did something further with the characters you introduced in Time for Retirement. The form and structure here is well place.
The space between paragraphs is standard and helps the reader move on more quickly through the story you develop.
The emotion is real and the reader identifies with the senselessness of the skirmish, ending the lives of those who were only defending their land. Lieutenant Ames has a sense of what's right and wrong, even if he is in the army and isn't afraid to voice that opinion.
The flow is smooth and is enhanced by a grammatically snafu free display.
The pace is fast as the action picks up and slow at the end as the story winds down. It is in fact a very well paced piece from stem to stern. Your skill at writing is clear and this reader salutes you for sharing in the WdC!
There are no suggestions for improvement needed here save for the possibility of including your intro in a footnote. In fact you can eliminate it altogether since your description said why this was written.
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80
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The reader wonders, is there more to the story? Did you continue to develop this or is this a one time shot? If it has been four years and your assignment is over, I'd recommend you drop the parts about Narratives, Action, Dialogue as they add nothing to the story you have written so well.
Then I'd recommend that you use your introduction about this piece as a footnote, this way the reader can enjoy the story you have and learn the why it was written afterwards.
The form and structure is solid.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by the exceptional grammatical snafu display throughout your piece.
The pace is slow and detail filled enough to keep the readers attention.
There is enough emotion mixed in this piece to make the reader realize that you've invested some thought into the make up of your piece.
Write on!
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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "1 - Peaceful Days" 
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked your prologue. It moved along at a good pace that was accentuated by the fear and trepidation that the soldiers were feeling as they made their way. The Shakaree remind me of a wraith like creature that has been spoken of for so many years. It's just as well suited here in this tale and look forward to future forays into the chapters to come.
Chapter 1 is fleshing out another character that had history with the soldier who is introduced in the prologue. The form and structure of both prologue and chapter 1 are well formed. Paragraphs are not too long, and too much information is not tossed the readers way at one time. Just enough to keep the readers attention.
The emotional markers in both are clear and the reader becomes invested in the story and characters who are being introduced.
The flow is smooth and that's enhanced by a grammatical snafu free offering thus far.
The pace is medium as there is much to take in, and sufficient time to do so as the story progressess.
Overall impression: A good start to a story that grabs the readers attention and dusts their interest just enough to make them want to read further.
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Review of Vision of Hope  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The Beacon of Hope that you do shine sounds like the return of the Lord when Satan has been defeated and peace reigns over the new Jerusalem.
The form and structure adheres to the format you set out at the end of the piece.
Your rhyming is effortless and lends a kind of swaying motion to the piece.
Hope flows through this piece in the smoothest way.
There is emotion that your imagery evokes to keep the readers attention. The main emotion of course being hope for a future that will be just as you described it.
The pace is slow and the grammatical snafu free clinic you put on is top drawer!
Nary a jot nor tittle must needs be changed, for this is a complete and will thought out Beacon of Hope.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It takes two to tango.
That is the feeling I get here.
Your rhyming scheme is clear and lends a musical timber to this piece.
Your imagery in each stanza engages the reader fully in the poem.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow.
Grammatically speaking there appear to be no matters of concern.
No suggestions for improvement needed here.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Christmas Trivia  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing your quiz.
It's rather lengthy but the questions keep the readers attention.
The single chance of getting them right or wrong was a bit intimidating. Would have liked maybe a second chance.
The flow was good, the questions were not too convoluted, the grammatical nature was appropriate.
The pace of the quiz was slow as the reader had to think.
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Copenator out!
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85
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I see the picture of the bridge in my mind.
It makes me kinda nervous due to a fear of heights. That's the emotion your words evoke.
Your words encourage me to ride along with the lines, and in the end it was worth the trip.
The form and structure lends to the smooth flow that is found here.
Prosaic in nature, it fits this poem so well.
The pace is slow and detail filled, so the reader has to maintain their focus on what's occurring.
The absence of any grammatical matters, leads to no opportunity to offer suggestions for improvement.
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86
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Emotions do rise and fall,
The reader can feel them all.
You put on a rhyming clinic today.
Displaying the imagery that makes the reader stay.

Your stanzas are so well formed,
Each stands alone, yet adds to the whole poem.
The flow is as smooth as your wisdom.
The pace is slow and grammatically well done.

Who could offer suggestions for improvement?
Herein lies the grandest of tales. Why fix what's not broken.

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Copenator out!
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Review of Melting Snow  
for entry "It's a Nutty Day!" 
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Now that's an upside down world in this nutty day blog.
It's well formulated and well done. Thanks for sharing and later on the halls of the WdC.
Copenator out!


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Review of Patience  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Marci:
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 02/08/17
I'm impressed with the marvelous rhyming scheme.
It creates a sense of serenity; not sure how; but that is how it feels.
Your stanzas are consistent and the form is traditional.
The flow is as smooth as a rock skimming over the water.
The pace is just right; not too fast, not too slow; and to top it all off you have a flawless grammatical offering for the reader to peruse.
To make any suggestions for improvement are unnecessary, for you have a top 15 as it is.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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89
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I often marvel at how complete the stories are the come out of poetry.
It's a "novella" in a small number of lines.
Here the reader is touched by the emotion of hopelessness, as the "princess" awaits her eventual demise, for her Savior isn't coming to be sure.
Form and structure is well suited to this poem.
The flow is smooth and that keeps the reader focused on the tale unfolding through your lines.
The pace is slow and steady on, loaded with tidbits that assure the reader does not get bored and move on. Grammatically you have a clean, crisp piece and thank you for sharing in the WdC!
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Review of Addiction  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ken:
You speak of an addiction and sometimes I'm sure you are right. Too much of a good thing is just too much. When the craving to write becomes the reason to write, it's time to take a haiatus. *Bigsmile*
A testament to your imagery shine through in the piece.
You are a word smith to be sure, and everytime I see your works, I'm sure it's going to be good.
No exception here.
You have a good form and structure.
A smooth flow that is not marred by grammatical snafu's.
At a pace that is not a race, but sensory filled so the readers attention is maintained from stem-to-stern of your tale.
Write on!
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Imagery in this piece is outstanding!
The reader is entrenched in the tale and marvels at the wordy palette you do create.
The flow is so smooth and sensory filled that the reader get's lost in the piece and lingers from line to line.
The pace is slow and steady on as you finish the artistry in the sky and hint and the future story found in the garden.
If one could use but one word to describe this piece it would be "boom"! It's that good and worthy of all praise it may receive.
Grammatically speaking you have a clean as a whistle palette from which to ply your wordy wares.
Write on!
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Review of Love's Melody!  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
A melodious little poem you have here.
Imagery pops and fills your 3 lines with life.
Emotionally there is "love" singing it's melody to his/her beloved.
The flow is as smooth as a flawless waltz.
The pace is slow and sensually loaded.
There is no evidence of grammatical snafu's along the way, making this a top 10 piece in anybody's books.
Would not recommend you change a thing, because you have said it all in your remarkable piece.

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Review of Winter  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's an uphill journey in the winter of your life.
That's the message I got from this piece.
Your lines evoke emotional responses and the reader feels the most prominent one of hopelessness.
The form and structure of your poem, provides a foundation from which you relate the time of your life.
Prosaic in nature, there is that poetic quality to this that all good poems have. There's life, there love, there's happiness, there's sadness and on and on.
The flow is quite smooth.
The pace is slow and sensory filled.
The absence of any visible grammatical snafu's only enhances the smooth rhythmic flow of this piece.
Nary a jot nor tittle need be change, for this piece says it all with grace and charm.
Thanks for being a loyal member of the WdC Power Reviewers, and may your time here be filled with the production of many many more stories and poems for your fellow authors to read and review.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Jaiam:
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 01/25/17
One looks for the perfect way to describe the Lord.
Your piece does a fantastic job and the imagery is quite convincing.
The reader is there in the lines and feels the comfort found in His fold.
The form and structure is consistent.
The flow is superb, and so well choreographed.
The pace is slow and filled with images that keep the readers attention.
Grammatically speaking there are no bumps in the road and the reader is left with a sense of awe, for it's obvious the Lord is your Savior and you are not afraid to share that.
Well done and thanks for sharing in the WdC.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your item in the Comedy Newsletter 01/18/17

I like the premise of the story.
I'm sure one who quotes from the movie could well get old and in trouble pretty quickly.
I liked the introduction of Darth. Lol. He didn't sound all that bad to me.
The form and structure are fitting.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and steady on, as you lay out your tale in a good and often funny way.
Grammatically there appear to be no major malfunctions and no suggestions for improvement are needed here today.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Comedy Newsletter 01/18/17
Write on!

Nice story here and full of adventure.
The flow is really good. There is a sense of continuity and the story reflects that.
There is some humor, some concern, and some cookies too! Now that's emotion that keeps the reader in the story.
The pace is slow and detail filled and there is no evidence of grammatical snafus.
No suggestions for improvement are needed here and thanks for sharing in the WdC!
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Review of Yoda Remembers  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wilcox:
Found your item in the Comedy Newsletter 01/18/17

Made me laugh in multiple places.
Made me wretch in one place.
Yuck Jabba is Yoda's dad!
Now that's a bad dad day!
Form and structure are cool.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and nicely splattered with details.
Grammatically speaking things are just right.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Jay:
Found your item in the Comedy Newsletter 01/18/17

And suffer those 'bots did in the movies.
But hey the actors are still kicking who got inside of those things.
I liked the way you brought the scenes together. Stanaza after stanza had one aspect or another of the 'bots personality. You gave them voice anew in your poem.
Form and structure is adequate.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and detail filled, to keep the readers attention.
Grammatically speaking there is no evidence of stumbling blocks along the way.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I liked the story overall, and there are some emotional tags along the way that keeps the readers attention. The form and structure of your piece are appropriate and the flow is somewhat hampered by the presence of a number of grammatical snafu's along the way. They are easy fixes and will serve to enhance the flow, making for a nicer read.
One example is found in line 4: "that was way worst should be "worse." Maybe re-reading the story can help you find some things and if you'd like more pointers, I'd be happy to discuss it in an email with you.
The pace is slow and detail filled. You tell a story that is worth reading and with minor changes along the way it will be an even better piece. Looking forward to reading more from your port and thank you again for returning to the WdC.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dr. Gupta:
It's always good to see your port. This one was in the "read and review" rotation and when I saw your name I know it would be a good read.
Your review of traditional poetry in verse form,
It's a fitting tribute to a very common form.
Your piece is full of the good in the traditional verse.
You point out some of the flaws that can clutter things up.
The form of your piece is easy to read.
The flow is smooth and as always your piece is so grammatically pristine.
The pace is slow and attention grabbing, as you make sure the reader is not going to fade away toward the end.
Looking forward to seeing your port again in the future and Happy New Year to you and yours.

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