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Review of Leaves  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ah I see, a ballad to the wonderful leaves.
A cavalcade of falling foliage as the different seasons leave.
The imagery transports the reader into the trail.
The sense of peace from your words does prevail.

The flow crinkles under our feet,
And the pace is like a dance oh so fleet.
Your word smithing skill shines through,
As nary a jot nor tittle displays a boo.

Into your awesome lines twelve,
The reader must surely delve.
To find your love flowing,
For the delicate leaves just a blowing.

You made THE LIST!
Lightning List that is.
A good place to be, don't you see,
Especially when it was in October.
Have a blessed and super November and Write on!

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Review of Elle's Bank  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
We all need a place to store our GPs.
I was told about making a bank by the great ~ Santa Sisco ~ , the leader of a group here. So I have a bank for saving to get a premium upgrade.
Since I'm here why not deposit a little toward your next endeavor.
Wish it could be more but running a little low myself.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Do Not Enter  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
~WhoMe???~ :
Found your item in the Poetry NL 11-02-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Like the flow of your piece.
It's melodious and scary at the same time.
One feel trepidation and fear rising throughout the piece.
The pace is slow and sensory filled. The reader cannot help but pray for the one who seems trapped in his/her thoughts.
Grammatically your piece is flawless and that's a testament to the smooth flow of this piece throughout.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Summer Harvest  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Pumpkin:
Found your item in the Poetry NL 11-02-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Wow what an awesome tribute to summer, and how thankful this writer is for the sensory array you display.
Your rhyming scheme is both spot on and lends a hint of a song to the nature of your piece.
The reader can see, feel, and smell the poem from stem to stern.
The flow is smooth and the pace is not a race, because the reader wants to savor the sensory stimuli you do offer.
Grammatically speaking you have presented a snafu free piece for the readers enjoyment.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fyn:

Having read the NL you wrote, I can but ask, did you know in advance that the lit class would be reading your poem, when you and your daughter visited? Just curious.

There is a lot in this piece and a lot to be said too.
Change does happen and that's a fact. How we handle them depends on our feelings and perspective we have.

One can feel multiple emotions before the event and after the event occurred. Your mastery of word play is apparent here.

The form and structure are effective.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by a grammatically snafu free setting.
The pace is slow and rightly so, for there is so much to take in.

Thank you for your influence in the WdC and Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel:
Found your item in the Spiritual NL 11-02-16
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I'm thankful too that you are with us to be able to bear witness to the work of the Lord throughout your life, even when you did not know.
The main emotion here is gratitude and it's genuine. The rhyming scheme is top drawer and gives the piece a sense of a psalm of praise.
The flow is oh so smooth.
The pace is slow, as the reader soaks in your story in a mere 40 lines. A lifetime of living revealed in a grammatically snafu free format.
Thank you for being with us in the WdC!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual NL 11-02-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Chilling.
Riveting.
Thought provoking.
So few lines and so much imagery spewing forth.
The reader is right there with you.
The form is suited to the genre.
The flow is smooth and sensory filled.
The pace is rapid fire as the lines bring the reader to the finish line, thankful you are still here to write on another day!

Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of I Give Thanks  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Snow:

Found your item in the Spiritual NL 11-02-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Thankful to get the chance to read this.
Your faith and genuine gratitude are clear here.
The form and structure are immaculate.
The flow is smooth and the pace is slow as the reader is taken to his/her knees in the midst of your gratitude. Much to identify with here, thanks to your word play.
Grammatically speaking, as always your piece is pristine. Who can make any suggestions for improvement? Not this author, Neva, not this author.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Transcendence  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual NL 11-02-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

The experience of a lifetime captured in this piece.
The emotional factor is high throughout.
The form and structure are efficient.
The flow is smooth and the pace is medium as the reader absorbs what is going on before their very eyes.
Grammatically speaking nary a jot nor tittle have gone awry.
No need to alter this piece one iota.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual NL 11-02-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A good set of natural wonders you have here.
Your homage to fall is poignant.
There is feeling in these lines.
One I felt was hope.
Form and structure are based on the criteria.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by the absence of grammatical snafu's.
The pace is nice and slow as the reader soaks in the scenes you do paint with the pen in hand.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of What's in a tune  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
frontierman:

Found your item in the Spiritual NL 10-26-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Form and structure are firmly founded.
There is a sense of hope that you instill in this piece and that translates in the readers mind and heart.
The flow is pretty smooth. Only observed a few stumbling blocks along the way that can slow the reading.
The pace is slow as the reader grasps the enormity of what you are saying. We truly do need to listen to our song and find the hope that is there.
Suggestion for improvement to enhance the flow:
Paragraph 2 contains a stumbling block in line 1 "has" healthcare providers. Should "has" not be "as"?

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of My sig of ravens  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Maryann:

That's an all seasons sig there.
I can see how it would suit halloween well.
Who'd of thunk of white ravens?
Which is why it would be a good one for winter too maybe.
I could almost write a pic n poem for this one.
Liking what I see and may your nightmares be funny and not scary at all.

Write on!
Copenator out!

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Review of Trick, Not Treat  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Morgana:

The horror begins to build from the get go.
Your poem is well formed and creates true emotion through and through.
Imagery comes alive with your writing skill.
The rhyming scheme is efficient and makes your piece sing!
Ah the Ballad of the Vampire! What do you think?
The flow is smooth and grammatically pristine.
The pace is slow and steady going.
The final stanza seals the deal as the vampire turns away in defeat.

Well done!
Write on!
Copenator out!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Stephen:

Thank you for sharing this tale.
It's an eye opener and the tears were about to flow.
There is real emotion in these stanzas and that's a sign of your skill in wordsmithing.
I found it when I searched for Horror this Halloween season in 2016. And there really is horror in this piece when one thinks of the plight of those who are abused et al.
The rhyming scheme is impeccable.
The piece flows so evenly because of it.
The pace starts off fast but slows down as the reader sees the other stanzas and presents your case for the plight of the less fortunate, this is where the emotion is the greatest.
There is no evidence of grammatical snafus throughout this piece.
Write on!
Copenator out!


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Review of Howling Halloween  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Moon Beam:
I like your acrostic format.
The color change between the two words is great.
The intro might have been a little more descriptive about the content of the poem.
The rhyming scheme is excellent and lends a melodic quality to the piece.
The flow is very smooth.
The pace is a nice march.
Grammatically speaking you have no matters to be discussed. Thanks for your attention to details in this piece.
Write on!
Copenator out!

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Review of Whispering Walls  
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Wow. Friday the 13th is always a good day for me.
I liked the way you told your tale. Starting off as on a determined gait and defying the odds with all the 13 related things.
I think the scariest part for me was "Kathleen" who was truly afraid. Maybe there was something to be afraid of after all.
The 13th floor of all places, and no elevator?
To be honest this did frighten me a little and that's the strength of your piece.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by a grammatically pristine setting.
Pace is slow and spooky too.
Write on!
Copenator out!

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Review of STOP Wasting Time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
MG:
Found your item in the Spiritual NL 10-20-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

The title grabs your attention. It's an admonition to make your time count.
The blurb kinda says to put your big pants on and continue living.
The scene is post Hurricane Matthew?
There is much emotion in there. Most of which the reader can identify with. Which keeps the reader wanting to know more about the piece.
The form and structure are standard fare.
The flow is smooth as you take the reader along for a stroll in your thoughts.
The pace is slow and sensory filled. The reader is aware that you have something to say that they need to heed.
There is no evidence of any major grammatical snafu's. Which enhances the overall quality of your piece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Spirit Dance  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Found your item in the Spiritual NL 10-20-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A compelling look into the dance.
A melodic timber is found here. One could sing it if they were gifted with that talent.
There is emotion, wonder, and respect in these lines.
The flow is smooth and the piece progresses from one point to the next.
The pace is slow and detail filled. The reader can see before their eyes, and hear with their hearts the sights and sounds you do portray.
Grammatically speaking your piece merits a big 3 stars more with the pristine nature found here.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for the trinkets today.
I love trees and the bikes are cool too.
They are all so clear and I'm thankful you had enough gps to do them.
My birthday is on 12/09, so I'll be back for that one.

Write on!
Copenator out!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Prohtpiz:
I was looking for items to review and came across the Haiku Hunt contest. I am not a judge! I am here to review just because I like Haiku's and am close to reading the entries for this round.

No time given is ever wasted.
When a writer unleashes his/her skill the reader cannot help but know it is from the heart.
The punch line takes the cake.
The story, as you said in your note is complete and the reader can see that clearly.
In addition you have such a nicely grammatically clean format to couch it in. whoo wooo!

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Change  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel the leaves under my feet.
I see the colorful palette in the sky.
I understand that the times are changing.
You have a beginning, middle, and an end.
A story told in a haiku!
Well done!
Proud of your skill and love for the world around you.
Life is precious and haiku's like these remind everyone to savor the time that is allotted to us.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Las Vegas Autumn  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Snow:
Your chillingly breezy piece is a hit.
I like the opening as it sets the temperature of the piece.
Then you embellish it with feeling found in the pigeons.
Looking up the reader sees the laser like rays of sunlight falling to the earth.
All in an efficiently written package.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your item in the Comedy NL 10-12-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

You're listed as one of the "all time favorites" in the NL. Thank you for all you do on the site and for your emphasis on welcoming newbies. They are the future of this site and it's vital that they feel welcome and learn the site asap.
The presentation of this page is well designed, graphics pop, the links are live and the information in them is helpful.
The flow is smooth and the reader in the end knows what the Angel Army is all about.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Comedy NL 10-12-16
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Super dooper!
The rhyming is a big 10!
The emotion is contentment.
The form is short and sweet.
The pace is slow and yet not crawling like a stalking cat.
There is no evidence of grammatical snafus, and thanks for sharing such a fine piece that the editor of the Comedy NL found so many years later.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Comedy NL 10-12-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Wow those are two good card sentiments there.
There is both humor and love in both.
The rhyming is impeccable.
Giving a flow that is smooth and melodic too.
The pace is slow and sensory alluring.
The grammatical acumen is apparent from stem to stern.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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