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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Comedy NL 10-12-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Wow those are two good card sentiments there.
There is both humor and love in both.
The rhyming is impeccable.
Giving a flow that is smooth and melodic too.
The pace is slow and sensory alluring.
The grammatical acumen is apparent from stem to stern.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your item in the Comedy NL 10-12-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Made me laugh.
So much richness.
Cat's given character,
showing up in little snippets.

The form and structure are superb.
The rhythm creates a sort of an epic adventure feel.
The emotion is real here, hence the laughter that bursts out from this reader.
The flow is as smooth as a cat's fur.
The pace is as slow as a cat locked on a bird before pouncing.
The grammatical nature is such that nary a jot nor tittle has gone awry.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Locked away Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ray:
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 09-14-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

The author opens the NL with your piece and it is a good one.
The opening sets the scene and the middle relates the matter so distinctly. The end brings a conclusion to the piece but also leaves it open for what's to come.
The form and structure are suitable.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by an almost flawless display of wordsmithing.
has for me was to strong for me to break through. Your first to should be too.
The pace is slow and steady.
A fine letter to a daughter he may never see again.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Splash  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome beautiful depiction of a favorite memory.
Fun, frolicking, and cleanliness all in one.
Form and structure are amazing.
There is a sense of peace and happiness here. That's imagery that you use so well.
Flow is so smooth.
Pace is s fast, yet nothing is lost in the tale you do relate.
All this in a pristine grammatical manner.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Dream Sprite  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Andrew:
Found your item in the Poetry NL 09-14-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

It kind of reminds me of a Dreamscape.
Where the scene is set in the misty landscape.
The form and structure are evocative.
The flow is smooth and grammatically snafu free.
The pace is slow as the imagery transports the reader into the scene.
No suggestions for improvement can be made and thanks for sharing in the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of The Storm  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Jenny:
Found your item in the Poetry NL 09-14-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A foreboding piece you have here.
The reader definitely feels the fear.
Your imagery throughout underscores that terror.
The storm is gonna get you and that's the real horror.

Your rhyming scheme is consistent.
In a well grouped structure.
The flow is quite smooth.
The pace is creepy slow.
Grammatically nothing is visibly awry.
No suggestions for improvement are needed today.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry NL 09-14-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Anew I do find you.
A wondrous poem,
In such a grand form.
An epitaph for a preacher,
Who's work appears yet to be over.
Imagery invests the reader in the piece.
Prosaic in nature the flow is silky smooth.
The pace is steady on, as we bid adieu to Mon Signor.
Grammatically speaking; it's a asset to the reader that nary a jot nor tittle has gone awry.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of The Final Picture  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry NL 09-14-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A beautiful poem with a sad ending.
You bring the reader into the scene with your wonderful imagery.
The rhyming scheme gives this a song like feel.
The flow is so smooth and enhanced by a grammatically pristine piece.
The pace is slow and emotionally charged.
Who could suggest any improvements for this piece? Certainly not this writer.
Congrats on your poetry win in Stormy Lady's contest.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of it's always you  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC.
I feel confusion in this piece.
One one hand there is hope, on the other there is doubt.
From and structure are a firm foundation.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by a grammatically clean piece.
Pace is slow as the reader soaks in the emotional land mines.
No recommendations for improvement are needed here.
Write on!
Copenator out!

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Review of Between the lines  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC.
You have a nice poem here.
Form and structure are efficient.
Rhyme scheme lends a melodious timber to the piece.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by the absence of any visible grammatical issues.
Pace is rapid as the scene you depict shifts from one stage to the next.
Overall feeling I get from this piece is contentment. The main character is content to move on and leave the place to the younger and more vibrant lives around him/her.
Write on!
Copenator out!

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Review of The Dinner  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
One word that comes to mind as I read this is; "harsh".
It has a bite to it, an anger that is palpable and long lasting.
If that is what you were going for you succeeded nicely.
Was the "i" lower case intentional? The inquiring mind wants to know.
Structurally your piece is one big block of words with no paragraphs. This takes away from the flow and the pace. Recommend creating some paragraphs at natural breaks in the action.
Like the voice activated dog. It adds some humor to it, to think a dog is creating chaos and laughing about it.
Overall feeling about this piece is that a story is told and the reader is invited in to partake of the action. You have a good story and if you loosen it up a bit you will have a great story.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An attention grabber you have here.
The scene starts off quickly and leaves the reader breathless by the end of the trek.
There is plain to feel, fear and the trepidation of what is to come.
The reader sees the ship caught in the wave and heading downwards quickly.
There is so much you gave to this piece in a short word count. Form and structure are efficient. The flow is smooth. The pace is fast and harrowing. The absence of grammatical snafu's leaves no room for suggestions for improvement.
Thanks for sharing in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fyn:
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-10-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Owls are regal.
They're also dangerous.
You have to respect a fowl that can turn it's head 360 degrees, and chomp down on a rodent for a light snack.

Your piece flows well.
Poetic in nature, it could almost be a ballad.
The flow is smooth and the read is not too slow.
Grammatically pristine, your piece is A#1 in my books.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-10-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Interesting how all of the "organization" turns into discordance.
One is left wondering if he/she is a captor in a cave, or an escapee freed from their bonds at last.
Was the eagle a metaphor?
Form and structure is adequate.
Rhyming is impeccable and keeps a regular cadence.
This piece flows well, at a pace that is not too fast, nor is it too slow.
Grammatically speaking, there were no visible snafu's to hamper the reader progress from stem to stern.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of T.L.A. TRIVIA.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-10-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Hilarious!
Thanks for sharing your T.L.A.
Your rhyming scheme keeps the piece at a great tempo.
You could almost sing this little poem, to be sure.
The flow is even and unhampered by grammatical snafu's.
The pace is fast, but nothing is lost because you load this piece with imagery that pops!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-10-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Amazing.
Stunning.
Dazing.
Hair raising.
The shooting star,
way up in the sky.
Inspired your muse,
and here this writer says wow!

Form and structure are solid.
Rhyming is efficient.
Flow is smooth as silk,
nary a ripple in the fabric of your piece is found.
Pace is slow and sensory filled as the star dies out in the sky.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-10-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Thanks for sharing the historical tidbits. My wife know some of it, because she is a historian. It was an eye opener, especially about Ben Franklin. That's cruelty in any way you look at it.

Form and structure are well constructed.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and steady.
Grammatically speaking, there are no visible speed bumps along the way.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of I Saw You...  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 08-10-16
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A wonderful exercise in the stages of life.
Or at least that's the feeling I get here.
Your flawless rhyming scheme lends a melodious timber.
The flow is as smooth as an undisturbed pond.
The pace is slow and imagery drizzled, keeping the reader glued to the stanzas, one stage at a time.
Grammatically speaking your piece is a masterpiece. Worthy of a 10 out of 10, but alas limited to the 5.0 here in the WdC!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Damaged Bridge  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 08-10-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Sadness is the emotion I feel here.
Escape from parents to a broken bridge.
The loss of another life,
rife with unbearable strife.

Your form and structure consistent and there is a rhythmical feel to the piece.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by the absence of major grammatical snafu's along the way.
The pace is slow as the reader is carried from scene to scene, sensing the feelings that emanate from your words.
Suggestions for improvement are nil, for you have created a tale with a beginning, middle, and end.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of A Ghost Story  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Found your item in the Noticing Newsletter 08-03-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
Welcome to the WdC!
Your ghost stories are standard fare. The "bed and breakfast" was a cozy enough place. The owners were looking to make the most of their new venture.
The form and structure of your piece is rock solid.
The flow is a bit slowed by some grammatical snafu's along the way.
The pace is steady and sensory filled.
The presence of grammatical matters, predicates the suggestion to check your piece for spelling errors. Overall feel: The story has good bones and can be enhanced.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter
08-03-16.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Welcome to the WdC!
I liked the overall feel of this poem.
I think the major emotion here is disappointment.
The rhyming is consistent and lends a good cadence.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically speaking; no visible snafu's were encountered.
Encouraging you to continue writing and sharing in the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of A Mother's Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 08-03-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
Welcome to the WdC.
Chilling piece.
The imagery brings the reader into the scene.
The panic of the mom becomes palpable.
The character "Abigail" is different and was apparently hungry.
The form and structure are adequate.
The flow is a smooth and the pace is slow and senses awakening.
Thank you for sharing in the WdC and you are encouraged to;

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Shades  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Chrisitine:
Welcome to the WdC!
Found your item in the Noticing Newsletter 08-03-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

I like the way you lay out your poetic color rendition of life. The form and structure are suitable.
The rhyme scheme is consistent and lends a ballad like timber to the piece.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and filled with imagery that keeps the readers attention from scene to scene.
One emotion that stands out is that of love. It is palpable and that's another sign of your skill with imagery.
There are no visible grammatical snafu's and therefore there is no room for suggestions for improvement.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of The Gift  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
Found your item in the Noticing Newsletter 08-03-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A good story in six sentences.
The form and structure are efficient.
The flow is smooth, with a slight hiccup due to a misspelled word "Captures" should be "captors". This however does not deter the awareness of the plight of this young girl.
The pace is slow and sensory filled.
Other than the one word, there were no other visible grammatical matters throughout the piece.
Thanks for sharing and you are encouraged to,

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of I'm Older!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 08-03-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Time will tell what that will mean.
Thanks for creating a remarkable piece of sibling rivalry.
One is gloating the other is emoting.
That is emotion and imagery at work.
The form is well defined.
The rhyming adds a sing-song nature to the piece.
The pace is frolicking along.
The grammatically snafu free environment leaves no room for suggestions for improvement.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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