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Review of Maui Wowie  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Jim:

Glad you got to have the trip to Hawaii. Aloha!!!!!!
It looks like it wasn't without some drama, and that's about par for the course. The emotion of the piece soaked through and the reader was engaged in the tale.
The form and structure are rock solid.
The flow is volcanic.
The pace is slow and even.
Grammatically your piece is the ace.

Write on!
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Review of I Saw Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dianne:

For a poem by someone at age 10,
this is remarkably complete and well done.
The emotion that this reader feels is frustration.
The structure is solid and grammatically pristine.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and speeds up in the end as the reader observes the end of it all.

Write on!
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Review of End of the Season  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-16-16
Brian:
Wow!
Just double wow!
I find myself in a speechless state.
What you write is a fitting close to one season, and an introduction to the next.
The imagery alone teleport's the reader to the scene.
The flow is almost like ice skating on a frozen pond.
The pace is as slow as molasses, only because the detail is so rich and dare I say enchanting.
Congrats on a grammatically snafu piece.

Write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-16-16
Neva:
Your writing is amazing.
The few words you were given grown into a complete poem.
The gentle flow of the piece is palpable.
The imagery sends the reader to the tops of the bare limbs, and feels peace. An emotion that is so often too hard to come by.
The pace is not a race, in fact it feels like a waltz in which the reader is floating and at rest.
One small hiccup; that did not hamper the flow at all; is found in line 3 "cast", should this not be "casts" its glow upon the earth.
It's always a pleasure to find your works included in a NL or other way of finding your portfolio. Because quality work is always found there.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Jellybean:

Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 08-10-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

What a wonderful view of the eyes.
They truly are the windows of the soul.
Emotions just dance as the reader feels the sensations you do depict.
The rhyming scheme is so prominent, the piece can be sung like a small tribute to the wonders of the eyes.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is not too slow.
The lack of any visible grammatical snafu's leaves no room for suggestions for improvement.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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DJ:

Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 08-10-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

This is a good story. It has a good beginning, middle and ending. There is emotion within that the reader can identify with. The imagery of this piece transports the reader into the forest along with the beleaguered hero. It's perhaps not a very pleasant forest to be sure.
The flow is smooth and the pace is slow, fast, and then concludes in the end.
There is no evidence of grammatical snafu's and with that one cannot make any suggestions for improvement at this time.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Laura:

Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 08-10-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

It's almost as if she's in a one person show speaking to an audience about the life she has lived and the life she feels like she has lost.
There certainly is a plethora of emotions floating around.
The form and structure are efficient.
The flow is smooth and the pace is not too slow.
Grammatically speaking, there is no real evidence of grammatical snafu's, and that's a good thing!

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Review of Abigail  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Paisley:

Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 08-10-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

This piece is a roller coaster of emotions and maintains that pace through most of the story.
Happiness, sadness, fear, and horror in the end.
The form and structure are rock solid.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and rightly so. You provide so much information that the reader must needs absorb.
There is no evidence of grammatical pitfalls and with that no suggestions for improvement are needed at this time.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Georgina:
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 08-10-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

Rogues they are not indeed.
True love is what drove them away.
The arranged marriages and all,
Were the last straws.

The reader is enchanted with the tale.
Your rhyming scheme gives this a sing-song feel.
Much like a balladeer would sing of yore.
The form and structure are just right for this adventure.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow, then faster as the excitement/tension rises.
There is no evidence of any grammatical snafu's and that's a blast!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 08-10-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

Ah a story of fracking that ends up being a human interest story.
The characters are remarkably developed in such a small piece. Kudos for that!
There is emotion that keeps the readers attention.
The form and structure are adequate.
The flow is smooth, enhanced by no bumpy road caused by grammatical snafu's.
The pace is slow as the reader feels the scene growing tenser as the lines progress.

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Review of Blue  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Zacharie:
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 08-10-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

One thing I noticed off the bat is the uniform rhyming scheme you have here. It's helps the piece have a melodic tone to it and give the reader a rhythm to follow.
The emotion found here is laughter. The humor of the situation is priceless!
The form and structure are creative.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and steady on.
There are no incidences of grammatical snafu's.
Have you ever thought about sending this to Readers Digest. I can see a lot of people getting enjoyment from this and if they accept it, I think they still pay some and you will have a copy of a published poem in a nationally known magazine.

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Review of Black Friday  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
John:

Thanks for taking the reader on a tour of the Walmart on Black Friday.
As a claustrophobic to the Nth degree, I would not even make it to the opening of the doors.
Inquiring minds want to know. Did the dolls meet the wife's criteria? Or did you have to go back and try again? lol
Your mastery of imagery brought the reader into the store, through the aisles, the prizes you did snag, and at last space you could breathe in!
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and agonizingly so. As the scene unfolds and the emotional roller coaster is on line donkey kong.
Grammatically speaking, your flawless work is appreciated.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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138
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Cathleen:

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Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 08-17-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

Imagery is exceptional. The reader is able to see what you are writing.
The rhyming within the stanzas lends a melodic timber to the piece.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by a grammatically flawless background.
The pace is slow, as the reader travels to the "end of it all" for one who is dying at the end of the tale.
What I liked: The absolute beauty of the place where this occurs.
Overall no suggestions for improvement could be made for this piece. You are encouraged to;

Write on!
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON

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Review of Tanya  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Robert:

Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 08-17-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

First thought upon viewing this, I thought hey this could be made into two chapters.
Then reading it from stem to stern, I see now that it's just right as it is. The place where a chapter could be added in fact is close to the end so it's all good.
This piece is well written. The reader is engaged in the scenes you do submit for consideration.
The form and structure are effective.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is steady on as the the piece unfolds and the "fairies" finally have some lunch. lol
There is no evidence of grammatical snafu's and that's a breath of fresh air considering the size of this piece.

Write on!
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Peaches:
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 08-17-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

This feel so real. The characters alive and the main character keeping the secret just enough time to hook the reader all the way.
You have a complete story in a compact piece.
A strong beginning, an interesting middle, and an ending that promises future snippets of marital bliss.

Form and structure were firmly founded.
Flow is easy going and the pace is slow and steady as the momentum leads the reader to the finish line.
Grammatically speaking this reader saw no evidence of neither a jot nor tittle gone awry.

Write on!
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Listener:
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies NL 08-17-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

I hear sadness, regret, and a sense of loss.
Your form and structure are rock solid.
The lines you repeat in each stanza keeps the readers attention.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow as there is much information given about this lady.
There is no evidence of grammatical snafu's and that's another reason your piece flows so well.
Recommendations for improvement are not needed here.

Write on!
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON

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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Amazing.
Heroic.
Tense.
Fearful.
All of these and more.
The imagery places the reader in the jeep, in the hut, on the funeral grounds. In tears in some places to be sure. How can one simply offer a review, when it should be given awards?

The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow as there is so much to take in and grammatically speaking, nary a jot nor tittle could be found to go awry.
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Review of An American Mom  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very patriotic and emotional poem.
The scenes called to mind are poignant.
The sense of pride and duty are present.
The form and structure of this is professional.
The rhyming is like an anthem song.
The flow is as smooth as silk.
The pace is slow as the reader soaks in the wonder that is within this grammatically pristine piece.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow.
What an emotional roller coaster ride.
Hope and then despair.
What a sad affair.
The reader is transported into the scene with your masterful imagery.
Rhyming in just the right places to create a smooth flowing piece, at a pace that is slow and detail filled. The reader sees no evidence of grammatical snafu's and thanking you for sharing from the heart.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Pains of Love  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow never saw that coming.
The avalanche of emotion is real.
The rocks tumbling down were solid.
The form and structure are firmly founded.
The flow is smooth save for one spot where one stopped to consider a "word" (line 21, shock should be shocked?).
The pace is slow as the imagery you pelt the reader with is absorbed and dispelled. Anger in the main emotion here, to be sure.
There are no other grammatical matters that this reader was able to discern, so on that note you are encouraged to write on in the WdC.
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Review of Fish Breath Gum  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your item in the Comedy NL 09-07-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

Form and structure are firm foundations.
I like the flow of this piece. It's a smooth piece and it's clear you have a good imagination. The imagery sticks out and you can almost take a stick of gum.
The pace is slow and detail filled. All this in a nicely packed piece free of any grammatical issues.

Write on!
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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147
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Comedy NL 09-07-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

Having a conversation with anyone while trying to write a story is rough, much less having the Grim Reaper come calling at this ungodly hour.
The form and structure are well suited for this piece.
The flow is very smooth and gives the reader a sense of "reality" to the situation before their eyes. That's imagery that makes a lasting impression.
The pace is not to slow, not to fast, why it's just right.
Grammatically speaking; nary a jot not tittle could be found to have gone awry. Well done and well written!

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Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Fighting for freedom.
Wow! That's what stood out to me.
Another interesting part was the I Can aspect.
I could tell that the characters were dead and yet wanted to tell their story.
I could feel the emotion as the scenes were portrayed so well.
Form and structure are efficient.
The rhyming is present and adds a balladeers spin to it.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by a grammatically flawless piece.
The pace is slow as the reader soaks in the enormity of what is going on here.
Overall feeling: God bless the soldiers for their commitment and the families who watch their loved ones who let their loved ones go. Amen and amen.

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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Keyboard Goddess:

Found your item in the Comedy NL 06-29-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

Impressive resume. *Bigsmile*
The form and structure is well suited to a resume by the way.
The flow is smooth and the humor inserted along the way is a hoot.
The pace is good and slow, cause the reader is in the know.
Grammatically speaking; no snafu's are found.
Thank you for regaling us with your humor and have a blessed November.

Write on!
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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Review of Out Of The Dark  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Jenny
Found your item in the Spiritual NL 06-22-16
Yes I'm going through my older NLs .

Your folder dealing with the issue of depression is actually what was featured in the NL.
As a survivor of depression, having been rescued from it in 2014, I will definitely be reading through these items, and share my review of each.
I must ask, are you still dealing with depression and if so may I pray for you? If not I celebrate with your breakthrough.

Write on!
Copenator out!
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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