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Review of Monday  
Review by Coral Boucher
Rated: E | (1.0)
I find the poem too long winded. Should be broken into paragraphs in my opinion. I am sorry it does not really flow. My opinion only Sorry I do see what you are getting at. I am of the old school which prefers more rhyming Keep working on it


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Review of Child's Spring  
Review by Coral Boucher
Rated: E | (1.0)
This poem, I thought was too obscure for children. The words would be beyond them unless very much older children. Polka - dotted I believe is what you were trying to say. Perhaps older teenagers may understand. I am sorry it does not sit well with me


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