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Review by Brooklynn York
Rated: E | (3.5)
It was a good poem, for me it lacked a certain luster. However; I'm a hard critique so don't take it personal.
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Review of Hello, Out There!  
Review by Brooklynn York
Rated: E | (4.0)
Quirky and refreshing I rather enjoyed this poem, a job well done.
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Review of Everyday Heros  
Review by Brooklynn York
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is amazing I like that you acknowledged our everyday heroes, it's true a lot of people's good deeds go unnoticed there is definitely something to be said about kindness in human nature. My daughter personally loved this one and I can't disagree you're a great writer.
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Review of Canyons of Light  
Review by Brooklynn York
Rated: E | (4.5)
You are definitely a silver tongue; I loved all of it minus one small portion which is the repeat of darkness in the last lines. However; this is a personal preference and even with this notation had wonderful flow and good guided imagery. This was truly a joy to read.
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Review of Dare To Be  
Review by Brooklynn York
Rated: E | (5.0)
My daughter and I read this together and we both marveled at the truth of your writing it was not only effortless in flow, but incredibly beautiful I hope to read more of your poems in the future. This was an absolute hit for me!
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Review of Hammond Castle  
Review by Brooklynn York
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Honestly I'm not much for poetry, because I have a hard time staying focused. Though this was fun and I really loved not only the rhymes, but the light hearted expression placed in this poem. Halloween is always a fun time and I think this poem really captures the feeling you get exploring your local neighborhood on Halloween night.
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Review of Let's be Fruity!  
Review by Brooklynn York
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was fun, wish there were more options for answers. Though I had fun doing this and would like to see more in the future. Go, go bananas! lol
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