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Overall Impression: Sometimes "balance" itself can be overwhelming. You talk about the carefree wishes of one who is a slave to obligation. Your form was good, as was your word choice. It only 23 lines, you have expressed what some people experience in their lifetimes, trying to maintain "balance". Good job!
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