Great adherence to haiku form. You paint a vivid picture in a few short words. The flow is smooth and your word choice powerful. I hope that your entry was a success in the contest! Thank you for sharing your poetry with us at WDC. It is a pleasure to review your contest entry.
A wonderful message in a few short verses. The flow is smooth. The word choice is good. The insight is
commendable. Good job! G to yank you for sharing.
I believe everyone of us old enough to remember that day know exactly what we were doing when the attacks on the USA occurred! What a tragic moment in history! Thank you for sharing your rhymed verse. It recalls many memories. Your word choice is good and your flow is smooth. Overall a good read.
Indeed, Colorado is beautiful-the Rockies majestic. Your short free verse says a lot about a place that boasts of many different sights! Thank you for sharing this piece with us. Good word choice and good flow make this an enjoyable read.
How lovely , Joseph.! You paint a pretty picture of eternity where no sorrows, sickness nor pain will ever be. Thank you for sharing your faith j in these short lines.
Well said. These observations are much the same as ones I have made. Whatever is “out” is “in” and whatever is “in” is “out”. Sad but true, and no easy fix is to be found. I seriously think we are headed for that ball of ash of which you speak!
If only we could view earth and humans from the point of view of a majestic eagle! I noticed no grammatical errors! The flow was smooth, and easy to read. Good word choices and descriptive phrases. I hope that you will continue to share your talent!
Beautiful imagery grace the couplets that you have shared in this piece. Good overall flow. I noticed no grammatical errors. I felt this was a good read blending nature and lore. Scotland must be a lovely sight to behold! Please continue to write on!
I enjoyed reading your free verse poem. I hope you did well in the contest! I noticed no grammatical errors. Your Irish heritage seems very important to you, and you stress this to the reader. Green is certainly a favored color to this fair country. Thank you for sharing!
Naomi, I pray that you find some relief to your excruciating pain. Your free verse poem seems to beauty for help with your plight. Your word choice in your poem, however, was spot-on. i noticed no grammatical errors. The flow of the piece was smooth. Thank you, for sharing your piece.
Amusing short story! Concise but you told a good story in a few words. Good job! I enjoyed your word choice that builds to a comedic ending. I noticed no grammatical errors. The flow of the story was smooth. Thank you for sharing!
Entertaining short story with a twist. You made your point in just a few short sentences. Your word usage and word choice, building suspense before the climax. The piece read smoothly. i noticed no grammatical errors. i hope you had good luck in the contest! Thank you for sharing.
A beautiful rendition of a sight we all await to behold. Thank you for sharing. We must all be ready for His glorious return! The questions you pose are so important. No one wants to be left behind to face the horrors of the tribulation.
Nice job on a topic that some ignore or at least shy away from.
Good sentiment, loosely based on Jesus’ words of “Tale up thy cross and follow me..” I enjoyed your short piece. Your word choice was good. I did notice a few typos that you might want to address. Write on!
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