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Review of Life  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Deaer Mumsymeow,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: You have written a lot into your short lines. The story, while concise, is a lovely tale of new birth...both in the springtime day, and in the birth of a newborn! Good job! I think you have mastered the concept! Your descriptive imagery is good.

Suggestions: I don't think that I could add anything to improve your piece.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Ms. Penguin,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good rhyme scheme. Cute poem! I enjoyed reading this twist on the frog and the prince tale. (I think penguins are much cuter than frogs, after all!) The flow is smooth and your word choice adds to the lightheartedness of the piece.

Suggestions: None. The piece is well-written as is!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Doremi,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good rhyme and rhythm in this poem! Your imagery was wonderful!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Sherri,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lovely tale of a free spirit of the night. Good flow! Your word choice brings the imagery to life.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Haley  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear OOT ~ Pink Cupid!

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A charming bit of fantasy! I thought it to be well written and told a good tale in just a few lines. Thanks for sharing it with us!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Princess,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: What a fun poem about King Frank and the dastardly Rafe! Great end rhyme!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Snow,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Great free-verse style expressing a wonderful point of view! I wish that we could all unite in the quest for this utopian society! It would certainly improve the world in which we live today. As usual, you did a great job! Thank you for sharing your considerable talent with all of us.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Tenari  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Princess,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Thank you for adding a new word to my vocabulary!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Soul Search  
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Dear Nikola~Valentine-less,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: This is a lovely poem! The form used lends to the deeper meaning that you write in the last three lines. Your words were well-chosen!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Where I'm From  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear katwoman45,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: I think that many of us can relate to "Where I'm From". You bring such a flood of memories to my mind when I read your poem. It was a lovely trip down the pathways in my mind. You wrote well! The flow carried the reader along on a flawless journey from beginning to end. Good job!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Revelation  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Elisa,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Interesting form! (Another of many that I'm not familiar with) Your rhyme scheme was good, and the repetitive lines added to the flow.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of When Mama Wrote  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Joy,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lovely tribute to your mother's memory. Thank you for sharing! Your free verse style is smooth and flows effortlessly telling your story. Good job!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Cowboy Sunset  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Turtle,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your free-verse flows so smoothly describing the life of this man. The picture enhances your verbal imagery. Nice descriptive passages.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of SORROWS  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Dr. Gupta,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: The rhyme is perfection! Your poem flows very smoothly telling a tale of one who is no stranger to hard times. I enjoyed this very much. I thought your word choice was good, too!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Tim Chiu,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your free-verse poem certainly is a positive pep talk! You are so right...we do all deserve some stupid luck. Here's hoping that your tomorrows will always be filled with far above average moments. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Gayle,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: This describes a lovely piece of your heaven that you have found within the boundaries of your family. Congratulations! Some people become too busy with their daily life to find that family is the greatest treasure that you possess. This is a lovely work. Thank you for sharing your free-verse piece. It flows as smooth as silk!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Chagrin  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear April Desiree,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good rhyme patterns that tell a good story in poetic form. Thanks for sharing! And, by the way, welcome back! We missed you!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Ari Arroyo,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: I felt that you wrote a lovely piece filled with good imagery. The flow is smooth. It is a comforting piece for the character describing peaceful feelings and the belief that our Heavenly Father is with us. Thanks for sharing!

Suggestions: In the fourth verse, following the word "forget" you have a /. Was this intentional or simply a "typo"?

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Brenpoet,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: How lovely! The flow is perfect as is the end rhyme! The sentiment that you share is beautiful. Thanks for sharing your talent!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Snow,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Great imagery! You "paint" a vivid picture.

Suggestions: In the first verse, line 2, I think you meant basket to be pluralized.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of The Reflection  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear finnley,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good end rhyme scheme resulting in a smooth flow and a good read! Thanks for sharing!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Joy,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lovely poem! Good rhyme scheme! Good flow!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Smile  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear strlcuckoo,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your short acrostic speaks volumes in the definition of a smile! Your words were well chosen! Thanks for sharing.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Inheritance  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Dear Fyn,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your poem brings to mind things that I often ponder. I know that my children will shudder when the time comes that they have to "go through" my things. You chose your words well! I enjoyed reading this piece!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Harry,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: What a glorious idea! I did enjoy your poem. You did a good job at building up the suspense from line.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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