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Review of Heaven  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, Rising Star! I am here to review your piece for the Member to Member Review. It is my pleasure to visit your port. Although I do not profess to be an expert reviewer, I do enjoy reading. This review is meant to be helpful, and to offer suggestions to improve your craft. Please remember, however, that it is only my opinion.

Overall impression: We each have our version of "Heaven". I think that it does surround us and permeate our being. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Your imagery is good, and the flow of your poem is smooth.

Suggestions: None.

Congratulations on being selected a Rising Star. Your talent is a wonderful vehicle that will take you soaring into the galaxies. Thanks for sharing with all of us here at WDC!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Static  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Sometimes, all it takes is to look within to find the problem. Thank you for sharing your short piece with us.

Suggestions: *Smile* In the tenth sentence, you have a small "typo". You wrote: "A loose thread, if you wil." I think you meant "will".

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Shudder Extract  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: An intriguing beginning to what could become a very good story.

Suggestions: *Smile* I would consider capitalizing "i" when used throughout the piece, and perhaps separating the dialogue into paragraphs. (Just a suggestion.)

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Wendy's  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Work can definitely be a "four-letter" word, but it is one of those necessary "evils" of life. I started out my "work" experience at a fast food restaurant, too, and quickly learned that was NOT what I wanted to do with the rest of my life! (LOL). It does provide us with "independence" and we learn quickly how to manage our money, or the results of failing to manage it properly. Good luck with your journey.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of She Smiles...  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A tragic tale within the lines of your free-verse poem. Too often others fail to see the sadness that lurks behind a smile; and too often some people feel that they cannot allow others into the misery that is their life. Good flow from line to line.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Perfect  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A tragic story from the perspective of a character who is trying to keep up a good appearance to everyone else. She wants so badly to be "normal" to her peers and not to be pitied. I think there are many people in the world who could relate to this piece.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of The Temple Lobby  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: An interesting beginning to what could be a very intriguing longer piece. Have you considered expanding it?

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: An interesting story. I would like to see you develop it more.

Suggestions: *Smile* There are several typo's through out the piece. In the first section. first paragraph, fourth sentence "...to be up i the air again..." ; first section, second paragraph, second sentence "...Th yarn was..." ; second section, first paragraph, ninth sentence "...After the experiment thee..."; second section, third paragraph, first sentence "...following te direction..."; second section, fourth paragraph, third sentence "...The uneven ground made t difficult..." Hope this helps some!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lovely fantasy, Princess! Thank you for sharing! You have certainly always been kind to me since I came to this site, and kindness is a virtue that is shared by you and Cinderella.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: How much closer to "world peace" would we be if we could all see through the eyes of a child. This was a beautiful memory. Thank you for sharing it.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of God breathed.  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your free verse style has a smooth flow. Your imagery is very strong.

Suggestions: *Smile*In the last stanza, next to last verse, did you perhaps mean to use "comets"?

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Dark Halloween  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lot of emotion is packed into your short story. The story line begs for expansion and explanation. Perhaps you could develop it into a longer piece. I think it would be a great beginning.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of The Happiness  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: If only a person could radically change the cruelness of this entire world into laughter he would have accomplished a miracle! Your free verse poem was a delight.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your poem is filled with beautiful imagery. Your choice of words paints a lovely picture.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Sweet Dreams  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Smooth flow and rhyme scheme.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of I MISS MY GRANDPA  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: I think your poetic expression of grief is a wonderful tribute to your beloved grandfather.

Suggestions: *Smile*None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (5.0)
RIP, Larry.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Thank you, Sophy for sharing this. I admire your strength and your wonderful attitude.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: An entertaining way of explaining the "experience" of discovering WDC.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: After reading Daizy's description, I think I will leave this delicacy to Australia. While I am sure that it is a wonderful treat, I don't think that I am ready for it! Congratulations on your poem being featured on "Kraft Food's" website.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Daizy,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Very cute piece. The anticipation of the vegemite sandwich builds from the first word, and leaves the reader with the taste of it on his/her tongue. I think that I agree with you Daizy. From your description, I don't think vegemite would be a snack that I would savor.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Bike Riding  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Marc,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Thank you, Marc. Your story was entertaining. I laughed out loud because I am guilty of such bursts of enthusiasm when it comes to doing totally inane acts in the name of getting fit, only to have my body rebel against me!!! I think I will take your advice to heart this spring.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of CRADLE ME  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Lovely imagery graces the lines of your poem painting a beautiful picture.

Suggestions: *Smile*None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of The Garden  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Lovely imagery fills this piece about the peace and tranquility of a lazy afternoon. Too often we don't take the time to sooth our souls by sheer relaxation shutting out the cares and woes of our daily existence.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Yours To Hold  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A short piece that speaks volumes about the tragedy of teen suicide in today's society. It is a sad situation that so many of our young people choose this permanent solution to a temporary problem.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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