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Review of Candle Light  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Jessica,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: An interesting form! You tell a story of falling in love. Lovely descriptive words grace your couplets.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Too  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Dear Ageless,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: I have always heard that beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. You point this out well in your poem about "too". Your free-verse style flowed smoothly. I thought it was a piece that pointed out the contradictions that the character had heard all of her life. Good job!

Suggestions: None

Welcome to WDC, Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all this site has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Life  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Musings in early morn! I thought your word choice really depicted the plight of the character as he pondered what could have become of his life.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of SOME SAY  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Sherri,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: So many truths in the lines of your short poem. I know many people that would benefit from reading your great advice and observations on life, and all that it has to give us. Thank you!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Mangadude,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: WOW! I don't know where to begin. I am assuming that this is piece based on your bad experiences with a church(s). All that I can tell you is I am a church member, and my experience there is a far cry from what you describe. I know that according to your story, you feel that you are being spiritually fed, and that is wonderful! We should stay in fellowship with our Lord. It makes me sad that one so young (I read your bio) feels this way. I pray that at some time, you try once again to attend worship with a group of believers (of your choosing). Until that time, may your wounds be healed by the Great Physician. As far as your free-verse goes, I found it to be filled with descriptive images. You chose your words well.

Suggestions: I did notice a small "typo". In the 7th paragraph from top, last line, you write "The bags under my eyes carry explosives set of by detonator tears.." I believe it should read "off"

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Blue Roses  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Fyn,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lovely story told in poetic form. I am sure that the blue roses were quite a sight to see! Thank you for sharing your considerable talent.

Suggestions: In the next to last stanza there is a typo....."He held one in his hand at he knocked on the door".....I think the "at" should be "as".

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Review of Some Kind of Plan  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear iQuill,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Interesting form! It worked well to convey your thoughts from beginning to end. I liked the repetitive fourth line that seemed to help get your point across. Life is a struggle for most of us, as you point out. Hopefully, we, like your character, will stay strong and endure to the end.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear RJ Moody,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression:HaHaHa! Your poem made me laugh out loud. What a lot of work is involved to keep flowers fresh! I have always told my husband NOT to send me cut flowers. They die too quickly and then I am sad to have to throw them out. Having worked for a friend who had a florist, I was around all kinds of flowers. Most of their longevity depends on how fresh they are when they are sent out.
I enjoyed reading your work. It was humorous. Your rhyme scheme of abcbdefe and your free-verse style worked well for you.

Suggestions: None. Write on!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your rhyme scheme of aabb works well in this poem. The tale of a love gone very wrong, and the central character giving a deadly ultimatum is chilling. The flow is smooth and gives the reader on a macabre glimpse of love.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Review of Paperclip  
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Dear AsIAmNow,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Sometimes it is the insignificant things in life that make an impact....like a paperclip! Interesting style. Good flow. Good "character" creation. Thanks for sharing.

Suggestions: None.

Welcome to WDC! Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that this site has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Review of Heartbeats  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Michael,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: What a disappointment "love" can be at times! It sounds as though your character has been the victim of a one-sided love affair in which he/she was hurt by the other partner. Sad! Your short free-verse style tells a woeful tale. Good word choice.

Suggestions: None.

Welcome to WDC! Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that this site has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Review of Front Street  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Dear Scarlet,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Gossip does cause pain, whether directly or indirectly. It sounds as though you have born the brunt of some vicious talk at one time. The form of your poem is interesting. You chose to write in a style (perhaps your own?) that is not traditional. It's free-verse does rhyme internally within each "stanza". Thank you for sharing your work! I, personally, feel that a writer should be allowed to be "himself/herself" and that be reflected in their creations. The only time that you might choose to conform to a style should be when you choose to enter a contest or activity that requires a particular form, or other restrictions. Write on!

Suggestions: None.

Welcome to WDC! Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that this site has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Scarecrow_Poet,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your style does mimic the Master, telling a mournful tale of the Grim Reaper, Death coming to call. Your words create a macabre tale for its readers. The imagery in your descriptive lines was good. Thanks for sharing!

Suggestions: None.

Welcome to WDC! Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that this site has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Review of Fear.  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear tat,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your free-verse transitions smoothly from line to line, telling a tale of the character's phobias. Fear, whether real or imagined, can be devastating to a person, making their life a living "hell". Overcoming those feelings is not a simple matter, and "facing your fear" may require years of therapy. Fear is a powerful emotion, and one for which you list many causes. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Suggestions: None.

Welcome to WDC! Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that this site has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Miss Gascoyne,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: In my opinion, the overall rhyme scheme flows smoothly with abcb meter. It tells a story of a forbidden love and a farewell by one who knows that his/her actions will hurt the other. Your word choice to make the reader feel emotion of the character was good. Thanks for sharing!

Suggestions: Please keep in mind that the following are simply suggestions meant to help. You may choose to use them or discard them. In the first verse, your rhyme scheme seems a little soft with the rhyming of "endure" and "more". You might want to rethink it and use a more defined rhyme such as "endure/pure" or "core/more". Sometimes when words become all jumbled up in my head, I find that using a site called "rhymezone.com" helps me to find more choices. Secondly, in the second verse, first line, you failed to capitalize "i". This may have been intentional, or not. That is up to you as a writer, but you did capitalize it in other places, and consistency counts. This repeats itself in verse 3, line 3, verse 4, line 4 and in verse 6, line 2. In this same verse, you wrote "decieit". Perhaps, you meant "deceit"? I am sure this is simply a "typo". This are minor! Please do not take offense. I am constantly editing my writing even years after I create it. I did not edit for punctuation, as I am not proficient in that area. If you need any assistance in editing, though, there are many reviewers on this site who are qualified editors and can assist you. Good luck!

Welcome to WDC! Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that this site has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Graham93,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your poem gives us some insight into this character's feelings. It seems as though he is insecure inside even though others might see him differently. It makes one think that he is torn between the insecurities and the outward appearance. The free-verse piece flows good! Thanks for sharing!

Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.

Welcome to WDC! Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that this great site has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Review of The Last Boat  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear RJ Moody,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed your poem! It reads more like lyrics than a poem, and I found myself singing it in my head as I read along. The flow is smooth! The images you paint with your words are vivid! I think you did a great job! The content is a little sad as it tells the tale of a man in his last stage of life, but it must have been a lively life. He certainly lived!

Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.

Welcome to WDC! Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that this great site has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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Review of Thwarted Assassin  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Pat,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. I found it on the "Random Review" section. Please, remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Thank you for educating me on a new form! It is an interesting one! I don't think that I am really good at form poetry, but I do like to try it from time to time. Thank you, Pat! I think that you describe depression in excellent terms. It is a murderer of our serenity. Anyone who suffers from this scourge will agree! Good word choices!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Deciphering Love  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear A. Powell,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. I found it on the "Random Review" section. Please, remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A nice journey in poetic form from small child to woman! You describe it well! I loved the imagery that you used. Your free verse and word choice flowed smoothly as the child grew into maturity. Thank you for sharing your talent!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Ancient Majesty  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Dr. Taher,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. I found it in the "Random Read" section. Please remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Haiku's always amaze me. Their authors pack so much into the short lines and few syllables of the piece. You have accomplished the feat! Congratulations! Your piece was concise, as it should be. The imagery was good. The flow smooth.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of this christmas  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear rachie,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. I found it in the "Random Read" section. Please remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Bittersweet poem about reflection of a life, a love and Christmas. Interesting perspective. I particularly liked the ending. Piece has etheral quality. Good character shaping.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Lost in February Waltz,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. I found it in the "Random Read" section. Please remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression:Smooth flow. Good imagery!
Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Hippity Hoopers  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Pony Tale,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. I found it in the "Random Read" section. Please remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good descriptive word choice! Good rhyme scheme! Flow is smooth!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Snow,

Hello! I am reviewing your poem for the Simply Positive Review Group. I found it in the "Random Read" section. Please remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Within the 6 lines of your poem, you have summed up what it takes a lifetime for some to realize. Thank you for your insight! A beautiful piece.

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Carnival Thrills  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Iva Lilly Durham,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good descriptions of a young innocent girl encountering someone who was more sexually advanced than she. Good emotions as exhibited by this young lady. Sounds quite plausible. Good job!

Suggestions: None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani


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