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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: It is so hard to watch the suffering of another person, especially when there is nothing that you can do to ease the pain. Your poem makes us aware of that suffering and the fact that their life is measured by the minutes between the pushes of the plunger that gives them such sweet relief for only brief seconds. It is well written, and the rhyme scheme is good.
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Overall Impression: I, too, remember that day! I guess we will always remember where we were, and what we were doing when terrorists struck a series of horrific blows to our nation on our native soil. Well written piece formed with much emotion! Thanks for sharing!
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Once again, I am reviewing another piece of your work for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. I have been spending quite some time in the "Random Review" section! Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Quite often I find myself "cooking" as you have described. You did a great job of "preparing" this "dish" and serving it up to us. Thank you!
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Overall Impression: I love poems about the sea! This was not a disappointment! Lovely imagery leads to a smooth flow and a good read. Thanks for sharing.
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Good advice to all who write! Thanks for sharing. The poetic form was good and flowed smoothly.
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: America lost many men like your Uncle Walter, and countless mother's, father's, wives, children, and extended family mourned their passing. We should all remember these brave soldiers who selflessly gave their lives in the name of Freedom. You spin a good story about the memories of childhood with your Grandmother and Uncle. Good word choice making a smooth flow from line to line.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: How sad! The woman in the story has only her memories of her loved one left. You did an excellent job painting this picture with your imagery. Thanks for sharing!
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Again, I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Another lovely descriptive piece. Through your imagery I can "see" that beautiful tranquil scene. Thank you!
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Eloquent! Concise! Beautiful! You follow the form well.
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: No, getting old is NOT for sissies! I can certainly relate. You have described some of the problems of aging in the lines of your piece. I thought you did a good job with the imagery.
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Pollution is a problem for us all. We are destroying our resources at an alarming rate. You have done a good job in making us aware of this disgrace. Your poem has a good flow reinforced by great word choice and rhyme scheme. It is a piece of which I am sure that you are proud.
Suggestions: None.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Your rhyme scheme is great. The piece flows smoothly from beginning to end. Good descriptive passages. Great job!
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: The boy has become a man in a world that is not always kind. You paint this picture well. Adulthood is not the fun times had when he walked the pathways of Never Land. Great word choice! Thanks for sharing.
Suggestions: None. I wouldn't change anything. It is a great piece as it stands.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: You brought back memories of my childhood! Thank you! Good imagery. Smooth flow! I can visualize the child on a swing underneath the branches.
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression:You speak of the feelings of loss from a relationship that has ended for whatever reason. Such loss can be devastating, but we must persevere. The sun will continue to shine and time will continue to march on, and so must we all. You paint a dismal picture here. Your words were chosen carefully to reflect the emotion within the lines of your piece. I feel that you have captured the emotion that you intended in this poem. Good job!
Suggestions: None.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Good descriptive imagery telling the story of deep love. Good word choice. Lovely!
Suggestions: Please check third stanza line 2. I think it should read "am a part of someone". But perhaps this is not what you meant. Just a suggestion.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression:An interesting missive asking age old questions, and expressing the very existence of the writer. Questions that are steeped in doubt. The only insight that I could offer would be that faith is the key to doubt. Our faith in things unseen will guide us on this earthly plane. Philosophy aside, your word choice was good. Your ideas flowed easily through out the piece.
Suggestions: I noticed a glitch in line 12. You wrote "Could it possible". I think there may be a typo. Perhaps you meant "Could it be possible," or something along those lines?
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Overall Impression: Entertaining piece! Nice twist at the end! No wonder you have nightmares---pbj and sweet pickles! You should try it with dill-----Yummmmmm! LOL! Your imagery had me at the beginning.
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Thank you for sharing your piece on arachnids! However enlightening it may be, I still am not enamored with our 8-legged friends. Good flow! Informative!
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: I can almost see the fireflies on that warm night. Your imagery is wonderful. You have captured a moment in time that many can relate to. The flow is smooth and the word choice is spot on! Good job!
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: No doubt after reading this piece as to the type of man that you prefer in your life! Concise piece packed with lots of strong imagery. Good job!
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Writing a shape poem is a difficult endeavor. You have mastered that difficulty with this poem. Good job! I thought your word choice was good, especially when you take into consideration that you have to choose wisely to stay within the confines of the shape you are striving to achieve.
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: I enjoyed your poem. Lovely imagery accompanies this legend of the Cherokee. It tells of the timeless struggle of good vs. evil that lies in each of us. Good job!
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: I enjoyed your poem. Your imagery is beautiful. You paint lovely pictures with your descriptive words. The piece flows well.
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: I enjoyed your poem. The flow is smooth. The word choice is good, and your imagery paints a vivid picture.
Suggestions: None. I did not notice any spelling errors, nor errors of any kind, for that matter. I was slightly disappointed though in the fact that only white and pink were the colors you chose to mention. From your description of what the poem was about, I expected more color. That is NOT to say that it isn't a good piece.
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