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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Thanks, Harry - another well written poem. It is strange that as I read it, the soldier on leave could have been an American, so I was a bit surprised when I read the ending and he was a Nazi soldier. So many were killed - had to be one of the worst and claimed so many lives of our soldiers who fougt to end this war in Germany. Many of the survivors will never forget, as they were freed from the death camps.
No errors noted and again, well written and honest.
Keep up the good work, Harry, and WRITE ON!
Countrymom
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Review of Waiting  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you for your entry- very well written and no errors noted. This is an emotional, heart-felt write and I read it with tears in my eyes. All entries will be reviewed again when the contest closes, winner will be chosen and awarded - Good luck and WRITE ON!
Countrymom
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Review of Sharks!  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Thank you for your entry (Sharks!) in the July Senior Center Contest! Well written, and a very good write! The sharks are fearsome creatures, as seen in fairly recent attacks near the Carolinas. No errors noted and the format interesting. The 3 line format works well. I enjoyed the read and wish you good luck in the contest!
Countrymom
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for your entry in the April contest! This is a well-written poem and has a lot of truth in it. No errors noted, no way I would offer any changes to it. My favorite lines are:
"Each child should live a childhood beguiled.
Remember the life isn’t yours but the child’s."
This sums it all up, An excellent write, and I will mark it as a favorite to come back to and read again and again! Keep up the good work and Write on!
Countrymom
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you so much for having the answers to my questions! It is great having a site like this to come to and receive help when I need it *Smile* I cannot tell you how much it means when the old mind wanders and forgets!
My very best to you all!
Countrymom
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A well written and original write, one that inspires and wakes me up to the spirit and goodness of the warriors. You take great pride in your heritage and it is well deserved.
Good luck in the Veterans Contest! Keep up the good work and write on!
Countrymom
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for a beautiful entry, truly honoring our veterans! Well written, not an error noted. This touched my heart as well, for it is written with honesty and respect.
Keep up the good work and write on!
Countrymom
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Review of Legacy  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Thank you so much for this entry, Ken! Well written, no errors = as usual; *Smile*
An amazing poem that brought tears to my eyes. The flow of the poem is truly outtanding! A winner for sure - with a 10 star *Smile* rating! It is your writing alone that keeps me looking to see what you've done and I am never dissapointed.
Keep up the good work, remembering our servicemen and the families they leave behind. Truly a legacy and I'm marking this a favorite!
God bless!
Countrymom
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Review of BODY COUNT  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A great story and I believed every word - well written, not an error noticed!
Thank you for your entry! I always read (evem with one blind eye) your writing!
Keep up the good work and write on!
Countrymom
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Review of Day Watch  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for a great entry in the Honoring Our Veterans Contest. Those who are serving today speaks well in this poem. No errors noted and no way I would offer any changes to it. You have captured the life of a soldier serving in one of the most bitter of wars. Wishing you luck in the contest and WRITE ON!
Countrymom
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A bittersweet poem, very well written. No errors noted although a few lines could be shortened, it does not take away from the rating I give you. The couple were married just before he was called away to serve his country, and although she wanted him to stay, knew he had to go.
The ending was very good, although he was unable to return to her, she knew and saw his plane return and he came back to join her in eternity.
You have a great sense of passion and this is a poem to be proud if! Good luck in Monty's Traditional Poetry Contest! Write on!
Countrymom
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Rated: E | (5.0)
First off, I must ssay that your portfolio is outstanding and as soon as my eyes are healed I will be back in to review more of your writing. I am partial to poetry, and I look forward to returning to your portfoio! There is so much knowledge to be shared and I am marking this a favorite to come to as soon as possible! You are amazing!
Thank you for reviewing me and bringing back some life to me.
All the best to you!
Countrymom
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An amazing story - From, start to finish. And the ending, as I guessed he would kill her - took me by surprise. Well written, you have mastered the SUSPENSE for an outstanding write,. Not an error noted, this is another example of your talent as a writer! Keep up the good work and write on!
Countrymom
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Review of Memories  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for your entry in the Honoring Our Veterans Contest! This is a well written free-verse entry, no errors noted and no way I could offer any changes to it.
Aptly titled "Memories", it is the heartbreaking story of the loss of a young man who died in Afganistan. The memories are all that is left to a grieving family. Brought me to tears as I read it. Guest Judge Marti will be reviewing all entries when the contest closes on the 24th of January. HOLD DEAR THOSE MEMORIES.
COUNTRYMOM
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Review of Promises  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for your entry in the Senior Center's "Promises" Contest! Well written, no errors noted and each verse holds true. All entries will be reviewed again when the contest closes on the 31st of January. I especially liked the format you used. Keep up the good work and write on!
Countrymom
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a lovely poem, a bit sad but in the end you are together with the one that meant so much to you An emotional poem! Well written and no errors noted!
I wish you good luck in Monty's Traditional Poetry Contest! Write on!
Countrymom
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank you for your entry in the Honoring Our Veterans contest. Well written, a reminder - as if we could ever forget - of the loss of so many. a dark spot in our country's history. The contest will close on the 24th and will be reviewed with all entries at that time. Write on.
Countrymom
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Review of Promises  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Thank you for your entry and Gift Points! You have certainly hit the nail on the head as far as promises go - Unfortunately, it's true that many promises are broken. I got a "been there, done that feeling"on many occasions - still, I hope for the best and know that there are some who do keep their promises. I am hoping to find some who do keep their promises... With not an error noted, the poem is well written! I will be reviewing all entries when the contest closes. Until then, keep up the good work and write on!
Countrymom
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Review of Triskaidekaphobia  
Rated: E | (5.0)
NOW THAT IS A GREAT POEM EVEN IF I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO PRONOUNCE THE WORD! The flow is good, no errors noted and a pleasure to read!
Thanks for sharing it! You are so right about the 13 colonies and those poor Indians whose land we seized! Very well written! You should get a lot of stars (at least 13!)
Keep up the good work, WRITE ON!
cOUNTRYMOM
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Review of Tomorrow ...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
How did I miss TOMORROW? A well written poem from a father's heart, a great read! Not an error noted, and no suggestions for any changes! We can always hope for the best for our children, even as we try to promise a better world for them. A thought provoking poem, well done, my friend!
Countrymom
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Rated: E | (5.0)
b}THANK YOU for your entry and for the 3,000 Gift Poionts that support our contests!
The poem is well written, no errors noted and it was a pleasure to read! I have that same "empty nest" feeling - My children are grown and gone pretty much. There is still that Christmas Magic that comes around - you are right on there! I will be choosing the winners and awarding shortly - by tonight at the latest!
Keep up the good work and write on!
Countrymom
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for your entry and a well written poem! I really appreciate your words - so true of so many! The contest was closed but I will make sure that you receive a special award -No errors noted, and no way I would let it go by without showing my appreciation for sharing it here!
Well done, write on!
Countrymom
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Review of Christmas Ritual  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is an amazingly beautiful write, Ken! I will have to check with Marti as she has already picked the winners BUT I would add this to the TRIBUTES PAGE and give it a special award. Seems only fair! Surely a classic that needs special recognition!
Not an error noted, no way I would let it go without sharing it with all who read it.
Countrymom
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Review of Ah, What Wishes!  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very well written poem, no errors noted and the flow is excellent. You have dreamed many dreams in your visions of the past. An ordinary man, perhaps, but one who sees the world as it was and can be.
Keep up the good work and write on!
Countrymom
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Review of Poet's Heaven  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Another great write, Teargen~ Beautifully done, and well worth the read! I think poets should go to Heaven anyway, especially YOU who has given so much joy to us in reading your work! Good luck in the contest!
Write on!
Countrymom
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