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Thank you for your entry in the Senior Center Contest! Original, flows well, as I have come to know your excellence in writing - well done! I certainly can relate to this poem, of being so alone but with memories of those gone before. When the body ages, the mind remains in touch with happier days and loved ones. You have captured the spirit of the elderly with this.
An amazing heartfelt write!
Countrymom
An excellent write! Thank you for the entry - I will be reviewing all entries again when the contest closes - but this one really stands out! Well done! I will be so glad to see Spring!
Keep up the good work and write on!
Countrymom
Thank you for your entry in the Senior Center Contest - I loved the verses - well written, emotional - no errors noted, no way I would change a word of it. Very well written!
I am just reviewing entries tonight, and hope to have the winners posted soon. Good luck in the contest!
Countrymom
Thank you for this beautifully written entry in the Honoring Our Veterans Contest!
Well written, it flows smoothly - a poem of light and love, in the face of losing a loved one.
A refreshing, inspiration read! All entries will be reviewed when the contest closes - in the meantime, good luck in the contest and WRITE ON!
Countrymom
An excellent write - thank you so much for the entry in the Senior Center Forum's February contest! The flow is great, the words sublime - one of your best - Not an error noted and no way I would change a word of it ...
This one is a keeper! Write on and good luck in the contest!
Countrymom
Thank you for your entry in the Honoring Our Veterans contest - As I read your poem, I think of all the wounded warriors who have given so much and the families that have lost so much - The poem is a stark reminder - All entries will be reviewed when the contest closes -
Good luck and write on!
Countrymom
Thank you for the entry in the Honoring Our Veterans Contest, Harry! Well written, as I have come to expect of your writing! This tribute to our veterans speaks the truth about the ravages if war, I will be reviewing all entries again when the contest closes on the 31st.
Always a pleasure to hear from you and read more of your writing!
Countrymom
A beautifully written poem, David! Love of nature is something not thought about in the vision of "love" - yet you have recognized the beauty of nature - with all its glory! The poem was a pleasure to read and I will be marking it a favorite to come back to time and again.
Not an error noted, no way I would offer any changes to it. Thank you for opening my eyes to the difference that love makes in our world!
Write on!
Countrymom
A great poem, I'd rather be ELSEWHERE too - My only concern is that I didn't see the prompt word (FAITH) - although you have to have a lot of faith to keep on "keeping on" when you can't find ELSEWHERE The poem was a pleasure to read and I loved it -
Keep up the good work and write on!
Countrymom
THANK YOU FOR THE ENTRY IN THE HONORING OUR VETERANS CONTEST!
Well written, the flow is good, words are meaningful and well thought out - a pleasure to read! I will be reviewing all entries when the contest closes - in the meantime, good luck and WRITE ON!
Countrymom
A well done free-verse poem - thank you for your entry in the Senior Center Forum's contest! I really enjoyed reading this, as it echoes my own feelings of the need for prayers and having FAITH that enables us to go on.
Good luck in the contest, and wishing you a blessed New Year!
Countrymom
THANK YOU SO MUCH for sharing this beautiful story! It brought tears to my eyes, and memories back of when my brothers were away in the service. I will post this also on the Honoring Our Veterans Forum, as I know that others there, including our veterans, especially, will enjoy it. Not an error noted, there is no way I would or could offer a chance to it. Very well written!
Keep up the good work and write on!
Two of my brothers and myself, had a kidney removed. Their's was cancer, mine was not -
That note has naught to do with the story, but with your message to me concerning your diagnosis. MAY GOD BE WITH YOU! We three all survived the operations, and my prayers are with you - YOUR FAITH WILL KEEP YOU STRONG! GOD BLESS!
Countrymom
So very beautiful, this tribute to a daughter whose life was taken. How very sad - both the story and the poem - touches my heart, thank you for sharing. An exceptional write, this poem. is definately a keeper. Nothing more needs to be said - my heartfelt sympathy to a family whose loss will forever remain.
Countrymom
WHAT AN OUTTANDING POEM! i GUESS I BETER GET UP AND OPEN THE SEPTEMBER HONORING OUR VETERANS CONTEST - AND I WILL - TIME GOES MUCH FASTER THAN I DO THESE DAYS, BUT WHEN I READ SOMETHING LIKE THIS, I DO GET INSPIRED!
I BETCHA IT IS A WINNER, AND A KEEPER - GOOD MESSAGE HERE - WISH ALL PEOPLE WERE AS OPEN AND GIVING FOR OUR WOUNDED!
AMAZING WRITE!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING!
Countrymom
Thank you for your entry in the Honoring Our Veterans Contest! It is original, well-written, and so very true! We do tend to forget that so many are affected by the loss of their loved one. This is a gentle reminder to all, and I appreciate your words so much!
I will be reviewing all entries when the contest closes, in the meantime, thank you again and write on!
Countrymom
THAT IS A POEM BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN! Heartfelt, original, and so very true of what our soldiers are facing - Thank you for sharing this in the Honoring Our Veterans Contest. It is definitely a winner! I found no errors or any way that it could be improved upon.
You've quite a talent, WRITE ON!
Countrymom
Oh, you have done it again! Such excellence needs to be published, my friend! Every poem you have written has such depth and is always a pleasure to read! You are a gold mine of words that touch the imagination and the soul - Never an error to be found, although I searched The poem flows beautifully and is sure to be a winner! WRITE ON!
Countrymom
An intense write, you have either been there or have the ability to see beyond what we see - as war - This is very well written, I find no errors or any way I would attempt to change a word of it -
You have taken a young soldier from the depths of fear to the courage to fight, presenting death in a realistic manner, the horrors of war...
to the ending that we see with the tears flowing as a flag-draped coffin comes home. I will mark this one a favorite. I would certainly recommend this write to everyone. Well done!
Countrymom
WHAT A WONDERFUL PIECE! THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS - a number of verses that I will come back to and enjoy reading! I am marking this a favorite! You have given me a glimspe, and I am so grateful to have found you!
WRITE ON, and thank you for all you are sharing with us here at Writing.Com!
Countrymom
WELCOME TO THE WONDERFUL WORLD OF WRITING.COM - and I love this poem, having a son of my own - with different problems at 48 and me wishing he was young enough for me to reprimand and change his course - although only he can do that for himself!
I really enjoyed the poem, flows well and is heartfelt! Keep up the good work and continue writing! Poetry comes easy to me, and your poem, i hope, is only one of the first of many to come! I will be back to read and review, so WRITE ON!
Best wishes!
Countrymom
I just found your story in the Spiritual Newsletter - and what a blessing it is! Your words echo my own, with my own son - who has survived many brushes with death, and with me taking my own sweet time about Letting Go and Letting God! It takes time, but I at last have started to let go of what I can't control. You have put into words direction and encouragement and learning to let go - It means a lot to me, and I shall mark this a favorite to come back to!
THANK YOU - GOD BLESS!
Countrymom
THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL, HEARTFELT POEM i HAVE EVER READ! Thank you so much for sharing it and the entry in the Senior Center Forum's Contest! The poem flows well, I found no errors or any way that I would change a word of it. It speaks of a love so deep as to last through eternity! I am marking this a favorite to come back to! Well done! Write on!
Countrymom
Holy Smoke! THIS IS OUTSTANDING! I was humming along all the way through - it's really a SINGABLE SONG! I didn't thing anyone would choose that prompt (GLAD YOU DID!) but you really should get this one published - it's a new country song that would steal many a heart, hit-parade quality! I kid you not!
One very minor and easy to fix correction in the Chorus - second line,
"The wind sings it songs" - you just need to add an "s" to it...
I have to mark this one a FAVORITE. Well done, original, perfect!
A winner for sure! Thank you for the entry in the Country Music Lovers Contest!
Countrymom
A well written story, full of the miracle of the Christmas Spirit. I see no errors or any way I would change it. I know that some of those serving over there will be coming home by Christmas and know how eagerly their families wait for them. Your story has perfect timing A perfect Christmas story! I will be reviewing all entries when the contest closes on the 20th. Thoughts and prayers go to all who serve and for those who wait for them - WRITE ON!
COUNTRYMOM
Absolutely a great write! Well deserving of the Awadicon you recieved!
I read with interest and somehow familiar feeling the way things bristle us when things go wrong (as they oft-times will)
To have someone who can put a smile on your face and HELP is all too rare - You've cheered up my day already! Thank you for sharing this well written piece! WRITE ON!
Countrymom
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